Domain Boundaries
charter-ietf-dbound-01

Yes

(Barry Leiba)
(Jari Arkko)
(Stephen Farrell)

No Objection

(Alia Atlas)
(Alissa Cooper)
(Benoît Claise)
(Brian Haberman)
(Joel Jaeggli)
(Kathleen Moriarty)
(Pete Resnick)
(Richard Barnes)
(Spencer Dawkins)
(Ted Lemon)

No Record

(Adrian Farrel)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 00-01 and is now closed.

Ballot question: "Is this charter ready for external review?"

Barry Leiba Former IESG member
Yes
Yes (2015-01-21 for -00-01) Unknown 
The Secretariat should please include the Internet Directorate <int-dir@ietf.org> in the external review distribution.  Thanks.

It is my intent to move the "additional background information" section to the working group wiki when the chartering is complete.  It remains here for now, to make it easier for reviewers.
Jari Arkko Former IESG member
Yes
Yes (for -00-01) Unknown 

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Stephen Farrell Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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                                Yes 
                                
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It'd be great if this worked out and produced useful stuff.
That (getting started) is IMO more important than having
the best charter text ever, esp. for the external review
stage. I hope we quickly resolve any wording things (even
without reaching perfection) and shoot this out.

                            

                        
                    

                
            
        
            
                
                    

                        

                            Alia Atlas Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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                            Alissa Cooper Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                No Objection 
                                
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I agree with the suggestion of removing the additional information section at the end. Add one sentence to the body of the charter about the PSL if you want, but having that whole section in the charter seems unnecessary.

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Benoît Claise Former IESG member
                        

                        

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                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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                            Brian Haberman Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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                                No Objection 
                                
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When this charter goes for external review, we should ensure that some DNS expertise gets involved in the review.  That can be accomplished by asking the Internet Directorate for an explicit review.

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Joel Jaeggli Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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                            Kathleen Moriarty Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                No Objection 
                                
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Thanks for already agreeing to reduce the text by removing the additional background and addresses Spencer's concern clearly in the text of the charter for related domains.

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Pete Resnick Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                No Objection 
                                
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Like others, I'd really rather see the additional background info removed (and indeed, paragraphs 3 and 5 of the main body could also be removed). But if you insist on external review with it, I will not balk.

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Richard Barnes Former IESG member
                        

                        

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                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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                            Spencer Dawkins Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                No Objection 
                                
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I had one suggestion. This charter is fairly chatty (which is fine), including examples, but after reading it, I wasn't sure whether I'd be able to tell whether ibm.com and ibm.co.uk were related. 

I think the answer is "yes", but the charter might be clearer if it used an example like that.

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Ted Lemon Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                No Objection 
                                
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I would like to see the working group start from a narrow scope and recharter if the scope needs widening, as Richard has suggested.

                            

                        
                    

                
            
        
            
                
                    

                        

                            Adrian Farrel Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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                                No Record 
                                
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Well done for moving the additional information out of the main body of the charter text.

How about going one step further and deleting all of the "Additional Background Information"? I know it is always hard to delete text, but this discussion belongs in an I-D not here.