Note: This ballot was opened for revision 06 and is now closed.
Summary: Has enough positions to pass.
Security considerations: if the EL value is calculated only
based on packet headers then a relatively efficient wiretapping
interface could be added depending on the function used to
generate the EL value. If a network didn't want that to be
possible or too easy then it could add some other input to the
generation of the EL values that'd make it harder to build a
table of EL values to tap given knowledge of the keys from the
packet. For example the ingress LSR could generate a random
input to the EL generation process every so often. I've no idea
if that's practical nor worth inclusion but thought I'd mention
it anyway just in case.
I am voting Yes on this useful and mainly well written document, however
I do have some comments that I would request that the authors and
responsible AD consider.
In section 4.1
"If an ingress X chooses"
I think that is an ingress LSR (although you define it later
this is the first time we meet "X")
"This is to avoid jitter, latency and re-ordering issues for the flow."
Re-order for sure, but I don't see how jitter and latency come into
"1. at the ingress LSR, MPLS encapsulation hasn't yet occurred, so
deep inspection is not necessary;"
Some people would consider a network layer device looking
at the transport headers to do ECMP as a DPI.
"On the other hand, an ingress LSR (e.g., a PE router) has detailed
knowledge of an packet's contents, typically through a priori
configuration of the encapsulation(s) that are expected at a given
PE-CE interface, (e.g., IPv4, IPv6, VPLS, etc.). They also have more
flexible forwarding hardware."
The last sentence is disputable because it is highly implementation
dependent. There are ASIC and even Network Processor based
PEs that will not be able to push as the extra labels. I would delete
the last sentence.
3. Entropy Labels and Their Structure
Entropy labels are generated by an ingress LSR, based entirely on
load balancing information. However, they MUST NOT have values in
the reserved label space (0-15) [IANA MPLS Label Values].
Did I miss this reference to [IANA MPLS Label Values]?
"for multicast LSPs will be specified in a companion document."
Companion or future? I don't think it is yet a WG draft
Section 8.1, 8.2 and 8.3 are quite hard to follow. They are only
informational, so it would probably be better if they were in
an appendix, so that any errors will not impact the protocol
It would also really help the reader if some text were
provided in each case explaining what is happening. Once
the first example has been explained in detail, many of the others
just need text describing the delta.