Applicability of the Path Computation Element (PCE) to Point-to-Multipoint (P2MP) MPLS and GMPLS Traffic Engineering (TE)
draft-ietf-pce-p2mp-app-02

[Ballot comment] I like the Manageability Considerations section. I have a few clarification questions and editorial comments. 1. in the intorduction to section 8 > The ...

[Ballot comment]
I like the Manageability Considerations section. I have a few clarification questions and editorial comments.

1. in the intorduction to section 8

> The use of PCE to compute P2MP paths has many of the same
  manageability considerations as when it is used for P2P LSPs.

A reference for these manageability considerations would be useful

2. section 8.2 - it is not clear what is meant by

> This will result in much larger data sets to be
  controlled and modeled and will impact the utility of any management
  data models, such as MIB modules.

If you mean that the data model becomes that complex that the efficiency of configuring by SNMP and MIB modules is in doubt - maybe it's better to say it explicitly. Other protocols and data modelling structures lile NETCONF / NETMOD could be considered

3. In section 8.3 the word 'this' after the period should be capitalized 'This'

4. Maybe we can find a less colourful term than 'nervous LSRs'

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    The Path Computation Element (PCE) defined in [RFC4655] is an entity
    that is capable of computing a network path or route based on a
    network graph, and applying computational constraints. The intention
    is that the PCE is used to compute the path of Traffic Engineered
    Label Switched Paths (TE LSPs) within Multiprotocol Label Switching
    (MPLS) and Generalized MPLS (GMPLS) networks.

    [RFC4655] defines various deployment models that place PCEs
    differently within the network. The PCEs may be collocated with the
    Label Switching Routers (LSRs), may be part of the management system
    that requests the LSPs to be established, or may be positioned as 
one
    or more computation servers within the network.

    Requirements for point-to-multipoint (P2MP) MPLS TE LSPs are
    documented in [RFC4461] and signaling protocol extensions for
    setting up P2MP MPLS TE LSPs are defined in [RFC4875]. P2MP MPLS TE
    networks are considered in support of various features including
    layer 3 multicast VPNs [RFC4834], video distribution, etc.

    Fundamental to the determination of the paths for P2MP LSPs within a
    network is the selection of branch points. Not only is this 
selection
    constrained by the network topology and available network resources,
    but it is determined by the objective functions that may be applied
    to path computation. For example, one standard objective is to
    minimize the total cost of the tree (that is, to minimize the sum of
    the costs of each link traversed by the tree) to produce what is
    known as a Steiner Tree. Another common objective function requires
    that the cost to reach each leaf of the P2MP tree is minimized.

    The selection of branch points within the network is further
    complicated by the fact that not all LSRs in the network are
    necessarily capable of performing branching functions. This
    information may be recorded in the Traffic Engineering Database 
(TED)
    that the PCE uses to perform its computations, and may have been
    distributed using extensions to the Interior Gateway Protocol (IGP)
    operating within the network [RFC5073].

    Additionally, network policies may dictate specific branching
    behavior. For example, it may be decided that for certain types of
    LSP in certain types of network, it is important that no branch LSR
    is responsible for handling more than a certain number of downstream
    branches for any one LSP. This might arise because the replication
    mechanism used at the LSRs is a round-robin copying process that
    delays the data transmission on each downstream branch by the time
    taken to replicate the data onto each previous downstream branch.
    Alternatively, administrative policies may dictate that replication
    should be concentrated on specific key replication nodes behaving
    like IP multicast rendezvous points (perhaps to ensure appropriate
    policing of receivers in the P2MP tree, or perhaps to make 
protection
    and resiliency easier to implement).

    Path computation for P2MP TE LSPs presents a significant challenge
    because of the complexity of the computations described above.
    Determining disjoint protection paths for P2MP TE LSPs can add
    considerably to this complexity, while small modifications to a P2MP
    tree (such as adding or removing just one leaf) can completely 
change
    the optimal path. Reoptimization of a network containing multiple
    P2MP TE LSPs requires considerable computational resources. All of
    this means that an ingress LSR might not have sufficient processing
    power to perform the necessary computations, and even if it does, 
the
    act of path computation might interfere with the control and
    management plane operation necessary to maintain existing LSPs. The
    PCE architecture offers a way to offload such path computations from
    LSRs.


>      Working Group Summary
>          Was there anything in WG process that is worth noting?  For
>          example, was there controversy about particular points or
>          were there decisions where the consensus was particularly
>          rough?

No controversy.

>      Document Quality
>          Are there existing implementations of the protocol?  Have a
>          significant number of vendors indicated their plan to
>          implement the specification?  Are there any reviewers that
>          merit special mention as having done a thorough review,
>          e.g., one that resulted in important changes or a
>          conclusion that the document had no substantive issues?  If
>          there was a MIB Doctor, Media Type or other expert review,
>          what was its course (briefly)?  In the case of a Media Type
>          review, on what date was the request posted?

The I-D is informational and provides applicability statements.