Note: This ballot was opened for revision 01 and is now closed.
Summary: Needs a YES.
Comment (2004-07-15 for -)
Some comments that should be addressed when the documents are revised.
From my previous review:
> I'm generally quite happy with this document. The only comment I had was
about > the way the 2119 requirements language is used. In some places (simple
search > for "MUST" would reveal), the document reads as defining protocol
procedures, > which should be in the protocol spec. If the intention is to
quote the spec, > the wording should be changed accordingly.
> Refs to SBGP and SoBGP should be filled in.
There are still one place where the above problem exists:
> 7.1.2. Sending MEDs to BGP Peers
> [BGP4] allows MEDs received from any EBGP peers by a BGP speaker to
> be passed to its IBGP peers. Although advertising MEDs to IBGP peers
> is not a required behavior, it is a common default. MEDs received
> from EBGP peers by a BGP speaker MUST NOT be sent to other EBGP
The document also needs new boilerplates per 3667/3668.
> 1. Introduction
> This revision of the BGP-4 standard [BGP4] updates the BGP standard
> [RFC1771] to be in alignment with the deployments of the BGP-4
> protocols. BGP-4 as deployed in the Internet encompasses both this
> base specification and additional specifications such as TCP MD5
> [RFC2385], BGP Route Reflectors [RFC 2796], BGP Confederations
> [RFC3065], and BGP Route Refresh [RFC 2918].
Don't "This revision of the BGP-4 standard" and "this base specification"
give the reader an impression that this document is the revision and the
> 2.3 BGP Implementation Identification
The origins of the implementations are still not specified.
> 2.1. Key Features
> One of the most important path attributes is the Autonomous System
> Path, or AS_PATH. Autonomous System's (AS) reachability information
Is this really what you meant here? The original text said "AS reachability
info...", I commented if is should have been "As", i.e. whether it should read
"as ... info travereses... it is augmented..."
> traverses the Internet, this information is augmented by the list of
> autonomous systems that have been traversed thus far, forming the
> 6.1. Link bandwidth and CPU utilization
> BW = O((N + A) * P)
> The following table illustrates the typical amount of bandwidth
The table is missing in the text.
> 6.1.1. CPU utilization
> During the periods of network instability, BGP routers within the
> network are generating routing updates that are exchanged using the
> BGP UPDATE messages. The greatest overhead per UPDATE message occurs
> when each UPDATE message contains only a single network. It should
> pointed out that in practice routing changes exhibit strong locality
"it should BE pointed out"
When you revise the draft, please include the new boilerplates required
needs new boilerplates
Comment (2004-12-02 for -02)
Section 1 speaks about:
Section 1.3 provides the quick survey results on inter-operability.
Section 1.4 provides an inter-operability of the 4 implementations.
but there are no such section 1.3 and 1.4
Actually, the whole numbering of sections needs to be checked I think.
Additional Comment from Pekka on 26 Nov 2004:
> The results of the implementation report do not seem to be completely
> reflected in the document. For example:
> b) SHALL NOT - Question 228, regarding section 22.214.171.124
> Three vendors (Alcatel, Cisco, Laurel), answered "N" to shall
> not (meaning they did). One vendor (NextHop) indicated "O"
> matching the specification.
> Text: Routes that have different MULTI_EXIT_DISC attribute
> SHALL NOT be aggregated.
> ==> one implementation does not fulfill the criteria of two
> implementations of a feature, which is required prior to advancing to
> Draft Standard. Therefore the BGP specification must be changed.
> I have not gone through the implementation report in detail, but it
> should be carefully reviewed to ensure that features for which there
> aren't at least two interoperable implementations are removed.
> 2) A normative reference may need to be moved over to Informative:
> Normative References:
> [RFC2474] Nichols, K., et al.,"Definition of the Differentiated
> Services Field (DS Field) in the IPv4 and IPv6 Headers", RFC2474,
> December 1998
> ==> this is a Proposed Standard, and a Draft Standard cannot
> reference it normatively.
> 'Working Group Summary' in the announcement needs to be updated.
Comment (2004-12-02 for -02)
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-implementation-01 and -02 reviewed by Mary Barnes, Gen-ART
draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-24 and -26 reviewed by Brian Carpenter, Gen-ART
draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-mib-14 reviewed by John Loughney, Gen-ART
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-vuln-00 reviewed by Kent Crispin, Gen-ART
-01 reviewed by Elwyn Davies, Gen-ART
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-05 reviewed by Lucy Lynch, Gen-ART
-06 reviewed by Elwyn Davies, Gen-ART
draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-experience-protocol-04 reviewed by Mark Allman, Gen-ART
-05 reviewed by Suzanne Woolf, Gen-ART
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-mibagent-survey-02 reviewed by Michael Patton, Gen-ART
draft-iesg-tcpmd5app-00 reviewed by Spencer Dawkins, Gen-ART
I have added reviews as comments on the individual documents, not on the
ballots. There are no show-stopper issues identified, but lots of details
worthy of notice (still).
Comment (2004-07-21 for -02)
The abstract and the introduction state that the the editors make no claim
as to the accuracy of the information provided. It would be much better to
make a positive statement in the introduction, and say nothing in the
abstract. Perhaps something like: The editors have assembled information
provided by four implementors: Alcatel, Cisco, Laurel, and NextHop.
Please replace the first sentence of the Security Considerations with: A
BGP implementation MUST support the authentication mechanism specified in
RFC 2385 [RFC2385].
The security considerations section contains non-ASCII characters.
It would have helped me if the event tags had been explained before I
encountered the first one in section 3.1.1. Perhaps an additional
paragraph in section 3 would explain them.
In the whole document: s/IPSEC/IPsec/
In section 1, 5th paragraph: s/msut/must/
The lists in section 1 and section 2 have a different format. In section 1,
each item in the list ends with a comma (the "and" appears one entry before
it should), and in section 2, the list members are full sentences. I would
like to see the same style for both lists.
The security Considerations say:
> The IESG believes that the variance described here will not affect
> the security of the Internet.
I think we should insert "adversely" before "affect."
In section 17.6: s/rationelle/rationale/
Section 17 includes stuff that is not security relevant, including the
acknowledgements section. A minor reorganization is appropriate.
Comment (2004-07-15 for -)
The Security Considerations should be something more detailed than "This
document does not address any security issues". If anything, those words are
an admission that something more should be written! A reading of RFC 3552
would explain why I think this could be better, even if there's not much in
this document that has a security impact.
References need to be split normative/informative.
Discuss (2004-07-22 for -)
126.96.36.199: what is the "longest route"? The longest prefix? The longest
section 1: Address-spoofing should be listed as a possible form of
damage. Also discuss how this enables active attacks on traffic, by
routing it through a modifier station.
The document speaks of versions 1, 2, and 3 of BGP-4
The document speaks of 134,000 prefixes; draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis
speaks of 120K. Which is it?
Section 7.1.1: s/potatoe/potato/ (unless the authors subscribe to the
Dan Quayle school of spelling)
Some of the subsections of Section 17 appear as if they should be
Comment (2004-07-21 for -)
Several of the documents have their own security analysis, instead of referring
to draft-ietf-idr-bgp-vuln. Perhaps the information should be merged (if
necessary), and the extra text deleted from the other drafts.
Comment (2004-07-20 for -)
In draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-24.txt, an informative reference to RFC1930 seems likely
to be useful, especially since that reserves specific ASNs as private use.
The abstract in draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-mib-14.txt says:
This memo is an extension to the SNMP MIB. It obsoletes RFC 1657 and
That doesn't seem quite right. 1657, which this obsoletes, says:
This memo defines a portion of the Management Information Base (MIB)
for use with network management protocols in the Internet community.
In particular, it describes managed objects used for managing the
Border Gateway Protocol Version 4 or lower [1, 2].
An extension to the SMI, maybe, instead of the snmp mib?
The abstract states the the editors make no claim as to the accuracy
of the information provided. This is repeated in section 1. Not blocking
but this seems strange in an implementation report.
In draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-experience-protocol-04.txt , I assume the RFC Editor
will talk to them about "hot potatoe" spellings in US terms. This sentence:
Seemingly more intuitive references that fall outside the vegetable
kingdom refer to cold potatoe routing as "best exit routing", and hot
potatoe routing as "closest exit routing", though vegetable.
also looked like it might have gotten interrupted in mid-edit.
I note the this document says that folks use IPSEC to protect BGP
in some circumstances, where the TCPmd5 variance says that
IPSec and TLS are rarely if ever used. Not blocking, just thought it worth
noting that these don't quite agree. Hopefully this means folks are looking
at how to augment TCPmd5.