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Summary: Has enough positions to pass.
Nice documemnt, well positioned as complementary to the official IETF
"PE" first appears in Section 1.1 without expansion.
Where do the L2VPN TLVs go in the VPLS NLRI? Does the TLV(s) appear
immediately after the VPKS NRLI when sent between the two PEs?
A check that acronymns are expanded on 1st use would be good,
e.g. DLCI was the one I noticed.
One non-blocking comment from the Gen-ART Review by Roni Even on
7-Sep-2011 has not been resolved. Please consider it:
> Section 4.2 refers to section 4 but I am not sure where this
> mechanism in section 4 is.