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IETF :: opsawg

Current state: Submitted to IESG for Publication

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Benoit Claise

Significant issues have been raised with the document during the IESG review, dated from August 2011. Only 5 ADs are currently active from that period.
Therefore, I'm sending the document back to the working group for resolution of those issues, to make sure that the working group fully understands the issues and is in control of managing the resolution.

Regards, Benoit

Benoit Claise

State changed to AD Evaluation from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead::Revised I-D Needed

Cindy Morgan

Shepherding AD changed to Benoit Claise

Ron Bonica

State changed to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead::Revised ID Needed from AD Evaluation::Revised ID Needed

Ron Bonica

State changed to AD Evaluation::Revised ID Needed from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead

(System)

State changed to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead from In Last Call

Pearl Liang

IANA has reviewed draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-08, which is currently
in Last Call, and has the following comments:

IANA understands that, upon approval of this document, there are no
IANA Actions that need completion.

Cindy Morgan

The following Last Call announcement was sent out:

From: The IESG
To: IETF-Announce
CC:
Reply-To: ietf@ietf.org
Subject: Last Call: (An Overview of Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) Mechanisms) to Informational RFC

The IESG has received a request from the Operations and Management Area
Working Group WG (opsawg) to consider the following document:
- 'An Overview of Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM)
Mechanisms'
as Informational RFC

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2013-01-25. Exceptionally, comments may be
sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the
beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting.

Abstract

Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) is a general term
that refers to a toolset that can be used for fault detection and
isolation, and for performance measurement. OAM mechanisms have been
defined for various layers in the protocol stack, and are used with a
variety of protocols.

This document presents an overview of the OAM mechanisms that have
been defined and are currently being defined by the IETF.

The file can be obtained via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview/

IESG discussion can be tracked via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview/ballot/

No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.

Cindy Morgan

State changed to In Last Call from Last Call Requested

Cindy Morgan

Last call announcement was generated

Ron Bonica

Last call was requested

Ron Bonica

Ballot approval text was generated

Ron Bonica

State changed to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup

(System)

Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed

Tal Mizrahi

New revision available

Ron Bonica

State changed to AD Evaluation::Revised ID Needed from Publication Requested

Ron Bonica

Ballot writeup was changed

Cindy Morgan

(1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header?

Informational
because it is an informational document
yes

(2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections:

Technical Summary
This document presents an overview of the OAM mechanisms that
have been defined and are currently being defined by the IETF.

Working Group Summary
There were no particular issues raised in the working group
about this document

Document Quality
Are there existing implementations of the protocol? Have a significant number of vendors indicated their plan to implement the specification? Are there any reviewers that merit special mention as having done a thorough review, e.g., one that resulted in important changes or a conclusion that the document had no substantive issues? If there was a MIB Doctor, Media Type or other expert review, what was its course (briefly)? In the case of a Media Type review, on what date was the request posted?
This is a review document and is not the kind of thing that gets implemented.
No special mentions

Personnel
Who is the Document Shepherd?
Scott Bradner

Who is the Responsible Area Director?
Ron Bonica

(3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the Document Shepherd. If this version of the document is not ready for publication, please explain why the document is being forwarded to the IESG.
I reviewed the document and feel it is ready for publication modulo a few dangling references that can be fixed during review or by
an IESG note

(4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed?
no

(5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, AAA, DNS, DHCP, XML, or internationalization? If so, describe the review that took place.
no

(6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here.
none

(7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. If not, explain why.
n/a (this is a review document)

(8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? If so, summarize any WG discussion and conclusion regarding the IPR disclosures.
no

(9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it?
solid (in the context of a not all that active WG list)

(10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.)
no

(11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. (See http://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ and the Internet-Drafts Checklist). Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough.
a few dangling references and a bug in the ID Nits program - former can be fixed during review or by IESG note

(12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.
n/a

(13) Have all references within this document been identified as either normative or informative?
yes

(14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the plan for their completion?
no

(15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? If so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last Call procedure.
no

(16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? Are those RFCs listed on the title page header, listed in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If the RFCs are not listed in the Abstract and Introduction, explain why, and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to the other RFCs is discussed. If this information is not in the document, explain why the WG considers it unnecessary.
no

(17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all protocol extensions that the document makes are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that newly created IANA registries include a detailed specification of the initial contents for the registry, that allocations procedures for future registrations are defined, and a reasonable name for the new registry has been suggested (see RFC 5226).
I reviewed the IANA Considerations section by reading it - the section is accurate

(18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future allocations. Provide any public guidance that the IESG would find useful in selecting the IANA Experts for these new registries.

(19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc.
n/a

Ron Bonica

Ballot writeup was changed

Ron Bonica

State changed to Publication Requested from AD is watching

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