Computing-Aware Networking
charter-ietf-can-00-07

Yes

John Scudder
(Alvaro Retana)

No Objection

Andrew Alston
Erik Kline
Lars Eggert
Murray Kucherawy
Paul Wouters
Roman Danyliw
Zaheduzzaman Sarker

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 00-05 and is now closed.

Ballot question: "Do we approve of this charter?"

John Scudder
Yes
Andrew Alston
No Objection
Erik Kline
No Objection
Lars Eggert
No Objection
Comment (2023-02-28 for -00-05) Sent 
# GEN AD review of charter-ietf-can-00-05

CC @larseggert

## Comments

### Paragraph 0
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  Computing-Aware Networking (can)
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Are we renaming this WG?

### Paragraph 20
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  Milestones:
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Would be good to agree on standards levels for these milestones

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Typos

#### Paragraph 2
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- optimize how a network edge node steers traffic based on these metrics,
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#### Paragraph 2
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- as appropriate to the service.
+ to the service.
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#### Paragraph 3
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- and transport of traffic from network edge to service instance. It also
-       ^ ^^^^^
+ and steering of traffic from network edge to service instance. It also
+     + ++ ^ ^
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## Notes

This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the
[`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT].

[ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
[ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
[IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool
Murray Kucherawy
No Objection
Paul Wouters
No Objection
Roman Danyliw
No Objection
Comment (2023-03-01 for -00-05) Not sent 
Please move the milestones currently inline in the text to be milestones in the datatracker.
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
No Objection
Alvaro Retana Former IESG member
Yes
Yes (for -00-05) Not sent