Computing-Aware Networking
charter-ietf-can-00-07
Yes
John Scudder
(Alvaro Retana)
No Objection
Erik Kline
Murray Kucherawy
Paul Wouters
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
(Andrew Alston)
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 00-05 and is now closed.
Ballot question: "Do we approve of this charter?"
John Scudder
Yes
Erik Kline
No Objection
Murray Kucherawy
No Objection
Paul Wouters
No Objection
Roman Danyliw
No Objection
Comment
(2023-03-01 for -00-05)
Not sent
Please move the milestones currently inline in the text to be milestones in the datatracker.
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
No Objection
Alvaro Retana Former IESG member
Yes
Yes
(for -00-05)
Not sent
Andrew Alston Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -00-05)
Not sent
Lars Eggert Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2023-02-28 for -00-05)
Sent
# GEN AD review of charter-ietf-can-00-05 CC @larseggert ## Comments ### Paragraph 0 ``` Computing-Aware Networking (can) ``` Are we renaming this WG? ### Paragraph 20 ``` Milestones: ``` Would be good to agree on standards levels for these milestones ## Nits All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions. ### Typos #### Paragraph 2 ``` - optimize how a network edge node steers traffic based on these metrics, - - ``` #### Paragraph 2 ``` - as appropriate to the service. + to the service. ``` #### Paragraph 3 ``` - and transport of traffic from network edge to service instance. It also - ^ ^^^^^ + and steering of traffic from network edge to service instance. It also + + ++ ^ ^ ``` ## Notes This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT]. [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments [IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool