L2VPN Service Model
charter-ietf-l2sm-01

Yes

(Alia Atlas)
(Benoît Claise)
(Deborah Brungard)

No Objection

(Alissa Cooper)
(Alvaro Retana)
(Ben Campbell)
(Jari Arkko)
(Joel Jaeggli)
(Kathleen Moriarty)
(Spencer Dawkins)
(Stephen Farrell)
(Suresh Krishnan)
(Terry Manderson)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 00-03 and is now closed.

Ballot question: "Do we approve of this charter?"

Alia Atlas Former IESG member
Yes
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                            Benoît Claise Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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                            Deborah Brungard Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            Yes
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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                            Alissa Cooper Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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                            Alvaro Retana Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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                            Ben Campbell Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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A strictly editorial comment:

The second sentence in the third paragraph would benefit from being broken into a few shorter sentences.

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Jari Arkko Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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                            Joel Jaeggli Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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                            Kathleen Moriarty Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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                            Spencer Dawkins Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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                                No Objection 
                                
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I have a few editorial suggestions.

I think "full system configuration that enable service agility" should be s/enable/enables/.

I think "recognized it would be beneficial" would be better as "recognized that it would be beneficial".

I think you can drop "attempt to" from "The working group will attempt to derive a single data model". That should be possible, especially if the working group has L3SM for guidance.

I think "(that work is expected to be carried out in other protocol-specific working groups)" would be easier to read as a separate sentence, not as a parenthetical insertion.

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Stephen Farrell Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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                            Suresh Krishnan Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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                            Terry Manderson Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

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