IP over IEEE 802.16 Problem Statement and Goals
draft-ietf-16ng-ps-goals-04
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2012-08-22
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04 | (System) | post-migration administrative database adjustment to the No Objection position for Dan Romascanu |
2012-08-22
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04 | (System) | post-migration administrative database adjustment to the No Objection position for Russ Housley |
2008-01-22
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04 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent by Amy Vezza |
2008-01-22
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04 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to No IC from In Progress |
2008-01-22
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04 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to In Progress |
2008-01-21
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04 | Amy Vezza | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent |
2008-01-21
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04 | Amy Vezza | IESG has approved the document |
2008-01-21
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04 | Amy Vezza | Closed "Approve" ballot |
2008-01-20
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04 | Jari Arkko | State Changes to Approved-announcement to be sent from IESG Evaluation::External Party by Jari Arkko |
2008-01-20
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04 | Dan Romascanu | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Dan Romascanu has been changed to No Objection from Discuss by Dan Romascanu |
2008-01-20
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04 | Jari Arkko | State Changes to IESG Evaluation::External Party from IESG Evaluation::Revised ID Needed by Jari Arkko |
2008-01-20
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04 | Jari Arkko | Waiting on Dan's Discuss to clear -- it should be possible based on the RFC Editor notes. |
2007-12-20
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04 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to IESG Evaluation::Revised ID Needed from IESG Evaluation by Amy Vezza |
2007-12-20
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04 | Magnus Westerlund | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded by Magnus Westerlund |
2007-12-20
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04 | David Ward | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded by David Ward |
2007-12-20
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04 | Ross Callon | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded by Ross Callon |
2007-12-20
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04 | Russ Housley | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Russ Housley has been changed to No Objection from Discuss by Russ Housley |
2007-12-20
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04 | Tim Polk | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded by Tim Polk |
2007-12-20
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04 | Dan Romascanu | [Ballot comment] These comments are based on the OPS-DIR review by Bert Wijnen. I think document is in good shape. I have some minor comments/nits/ … [Ballot comment] These comments are based on the OPS-DIR review by Bert Wijnen. I think document is in good shape. I have some minor comments/nits/ Detailed comments/nits 1. Pls expand acronyms when used for the first time. For example, 3rd para in section 1 uses BS and SS. I think (but am not sure) BS means Base Station, but SS?? Anyway pls expand. (Note: I see that you do expand in the Terminology Section. Still I think it would be good to also expand when used for the bvery first time in the doc). 2. 3rd para sect 1: (Ethernet CS) of Packet CS is within the current 16ng WG scope. I think I would s/16ng WG/IETF 16ng WG/ The reason is that you also speak about non-IETF WGs, and so it is probably best to be specific for all/anyt WG you list. 3. 4th para in sect1: except into individual addresses as specified from [RFC4903]. For my feeling of English, I would: s/from [RFC4903]/in [RFC4903]/ 4. In 3rd para on page 8 I see: multicast and broadcast connection for IP packet transfer. There needs mechanisms like IEEE 802.1D to realize multicast and broadcast for Ethernet CS. Moreover, the frequent IP multicast and broadcast signaling within the IP subnet like Ethernet needs to be avoided not to wake up sleep/idle [IEEE802.16e] SSs. s/There needs mechanisms/There need to be mechanisms/ ?? s/sleep/sleeping/ ?? 5. Sect 4.3 end of 1st para: the problem of waking up the sleep/idle [IEEE802.16e] SSs. s/sleep/sleeping/ ?? 6. In the acknowledgement section I see: The authors would like to express special thank to David Johnston for amending the section 4, "Overview of the IEEE 802.16-2006 MAC layer" while in the (Informative References) I see: [IEEE802.16] IEEE Std 802.16-2004, "IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area networks, Part 16: Air Interface for Fixed Broadband Wireless Access Systems", October 2004. [IEEE802.16e] IEEE Std 802.16e, "IEEE standard for Local and metropolitan area networks, Part 16:Air Interface for fixed and Mobile broadband wireless access systems", October 2005. So the overview seems to discuss a newer version of the IEEE 802.16 specs than the ones pointed to in the references. Is there a good reason for that? In fact, I do see that section 4 is NOT an overview of 802.16. Instead, section 3 seems to be an overview of 802.16-2004. SO is that what the acknowledgement is (should be) for? |
2007-12-20
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04 | Dan Romascanu | [Ballot comment] These comments are based on the OPS-DIR review by Bert Wijnen. I think document is in good shape. I have some minor comments/nits/ … [Ballot comment] These comments are based on the OPS-DIR review by Bert Wijnen. I think document is in good shape. I have some minor comments/nits/ Detailed comments/nits 1. Pls expand acronyms when used for the first time. For example, 3rd para in section 1 uses BS and SS. I think (but am not sure) BS means Base Station, but SS?? Anyway pls expand. (Note: I see that you do expand in the Terminology Section. Still I think it would be good to also expand when used for the bvery first time in the doc). 2. 3rd para sect 1: (Ethernet CS) of Packet CS is within the current 16ng WG scope. I think I would s/16ng WG/IETF 16ng WG/ The reason is that you also speak about non-IETF WGs, and so it is probably best to be specific for all/anyt WG you list. 3. 4th para in sect1: except into individual addresses as specified from [RFC4903]. For my feeling of English, I would: s/from [RFC4903]/in [RFC4903]/ 4. In 3rd para on page 8 I see: multicast and broadcast connection for IP packet transfer. There needs mechanisms like IEEE 802.1D to realize multicast and broadcast for Ethernet CS. Moreover, the frequent IP multicast and broadcast signaling within the IP subnet like Ethernet needs to be avoided not to wake up sleep/idle [IEEE802.16e] SSs. s/There needs mechanisms/There need to be mechanisms/ ?? s/sleep/sleeping/ ?? 5. Sect 4.3 end of 1st para: the problem of waking up the sleep/idle [IEEE802.16e] SSs. s/sleep/sleeping/ ?? 6. In the acknowledgement section I see: The authors would like to express special thank to David Johnston for amending the section 4, "Overview of the IEEE 802.16-2006 MAC layer" while in the (Informative References) I see: [IEEE802.16] IEEE Std 802.16-2004, "IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area networks, Part 16: Air Interface for Fixed Broadband Wireless Access Systems", October 2004. [IEEE802.16e] IEEE Std 802.16e, "IEEE standard for Local and metropolitan area networks, Part 16:Air Interface for fixed and Mobile broadband wireless access systems", October 2005. So the overview seems to discuss a newer version of the IEEE 802.16 specs than the ones pointed to in the references. Is there a good reason for that? In fact, I do see that section 4 is NOT an overview of 802.16. Instead, section 3 seems to be an overview of 802.16-2004. SO is that what the acknowledgement is (should be) for? |
2007-12-20
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04 | Dan Romascanu | [Ballot discuss] There is no reference in the document about operational and manageability considerations. At least i would suggest that the document include a goal … [Ballot discuss] There is no reference in the document about operational and manageability considerations. At least i would suggest that the document include a goal in 4.4 about 'define management requirements and specifically the interfaces and specific management model (objects) for IP over 802.16' |
2007-12-20
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04 | Dan Romascanu | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded by Dan Romascanu |
2007-12-20
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04 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-16ng-ps-goals-04.txt |
2007-12-20
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04 | Russ Housley | [Ballot discuss] Following the Gen-ART Review and comments from others during IETF Last Call, the authors said that the next revision will apply the … [Ballot discuss] Following the Gen-ART Review and comments from others during IETF Last Call, the authors said that the next revision will apply the corrections. However, there has not been an updated Internet-Draft. There is a note to the RFC Editor, but it only reflects the change that resulted from the SecDir Review. |
2007-12-20
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04 | Russ Housley | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded by Russ Housley |
2007-12-20
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04 | Chris Newman | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded by Chris Newman |
2007-12-20
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04 | Mark Townsley | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded by Mark Townsley |
2007-12-18
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04 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Lars Eggert has been changed to No Objection from Undefined by Lars Eggert |
2007-12-18
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04 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Lars Eggert has been changed to Undefined from No Objection by Lars Eggert |
2007-12-18
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04 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded by Lars Eggert |
2007-12-14
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04 | (System) | Removed from agenda for telechat - 2007-12-13 |
2007-12-11
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04 | Samuel Weiler | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR Completed. Reviewer: Sam Weiler. |
2007-12-11
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04 | Jari Arkko | State Changes to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead by Jari Arkko |
2007-12-10
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04 | (System) | State has been changed to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead from In Last Call by system |
2007-11-27
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04 | Jari Arkko | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Jari Arkko |
2007-11-27
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04 | Jari Arkko | Ballot has been issued by Jari Arkko |
2007-11-27
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04 | Jari Arkko | Created "Approve" ballot |
2007-11-27
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04 | Jari Arkko | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2007-12-13 by Jari Arkko |
2007-11-27
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04 | Samuel Weiler | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Sam Weiler |
2007-11-27
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04 | Samuel Weiler | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Sam Weiler |
2007-11-20
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04 | Amanda Baber | IANA Last Call comments: As described in the IANA Considerations section, we understand this document to have NO IANA Actions. |
2007-11-19
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04 | Amy Vezza | Last call sent |
2007-11-19
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04 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to In Last Call from Last Call Requested by Amy Vezza |
2007-11-19
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04 | Jari Arkko | State Changes to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup by Jari Arkko |
2007-11-19
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04 | Jari Arkko | Last Call was requested by Jari Arkko |
2007-11-19
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04 | (System) | Ballot writeup text was added |
2007-11-19
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04 | (System) | Last call text was added |
2007-11-19
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04 | (System) | Ballot approval text was added |
2007-11-18
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04 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Follow up from New Id Needed |
2007-11-18
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03 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-16ng-ps-goals-03.txt |
2007-09-09
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04 | Jari Arkko | Chairs adviced that they should not both be authors. I did, however, verify that the list discussion about the WGLC was performed correctly. |
2007-09-09
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04 | Jari Arkko | Also, from my review of the archives I did not see enough review of this document. I also did not see actual discussion about this … Also, from my review of the archives I did not see enough review of this document. I also did not see actual discussion about this document recorded in the minutes of last three IETFs. When you send the document back to me, please ensure that you have at least two additional reviews from WG members. |
2007-09-09
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04 | Jari Arkko | State Changes to AD Evaluation::Revised ID Needed from AD Evaluation by Jari Arkko |
2007-09-09
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04 | Jari Arkko | [Note]: 'Document shepherd is Daniel Park <soohong.park@samsung.com>' added by Jari Arkko |
2007-09-09
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04 | Jari Arkko | I have made my AD review of this document. The document is in relative good shape and I fully agree with the goals. However, there … I have made my AD review of this document. The document is in relative good shape and I fully agree with the goals. However, there were a few substantial issues and a number of editorial issues that I discovered. Please discuss these issues and/or revise the document accordingly. Also, I would like to ask the chairs to initiate a review in IEEE 802.16 through our liaison. Substantial: > This Ethernet like link model assumes that underlying > link layer provides the equivalent functionality like Ethernet, for > example, native broadcast and multicast. It seems feasible to apply > the 802.16's Ethernet CS to configure this link model. However, > there exists a discrepancy between the assumption from the Ethernet > like link model and the 802.16's MAC feature which is connection- > oriented and not providing multicast and broadcast connection for IP > packet transfer. Why would this be any different traditional wired & switched ethernet case? There is no native multicast over a set of wires... > Blocking ARP or the address resolution of NDP needs to be implemented > by SS itself in an implementation manner. There is no mention of such blocking in the 16ng's IPv6 document (ipv6-over-ipv6cs). Would blocking NDP packets break IPv6 NUD? > Because MAC address is not used for transmission in case of IP CS, it > is unclear whether source link layer address need to be carried in > the RS (Router Solicitation). The RS may need to have source IP > address specified so that the RA (Router Advertisement) can be sent > back. This may require the completion of the link local address > configuration before sending an RS. Why would you need the source address? This is the point-to-point link model... > If there > exists multiple ARs (so the default routers), it is unknown if the > NUD is required if an AR is not serving any 802.16 MAC connection. How can you have multiple devices at the end, if this is a point-to-point link? Editorial: > sublayer (CS) is at the uppermost of the MAC that is responsible for ... uppermost part ... > assigning transmit-direction SDUs (originating from a higher layer Expand the acronym SDU > [I-D.thaler-intarea-multilink-subnet-issues]. RFC 4903. > Blocking ARP or the address resolution of NDP needs to be implemented > by SS itself in an implementation manner This probably should read: Blocking ARP or NDP address resolution packets needs to be implemented by SS itself in an implementation specific fashion. > To acquire that address, the > address resolution should be performed throughout conventional > broadcast and multicast based ARP or NDP. However, this multicast > and broadcast packets results in the problem of waking up the sleep/ > idle [IEEE802.16e] SSs. Yes, but you should probably say ... if not filtered (e.g., RFC 4541), these multicast and broadcast packets ... Also, s/this/these/ > 2. Requirements > > The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", > "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this > document are to be interpreted as described in [RFC2119] . Remove this section and reference if the keywords are not used. |
2007-09-09
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04 | Jari Arkko | State Changes to AD Evaluation from Publication Requested by Jari Arkko |
2007-09-07
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04 | Dinara Suleymanova | PROTO Write-up (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the document and, in particular, … PROTO Write-up (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the document and, in particular, does he or she believe this version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication? Daniel Park is the Document Shepherd for this document. I've reviewed this document and it is ready for advancing to the IESG for publication. (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? Several 802.16 and IPv6 experts reviewed this document to enhance the quality of this document. This document went through the 2 weeks WGLC in the 16ng WG. I have no concern about the depth or breadth of the reviewrs that have been performed. (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document needs more review from a particular or broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with AAA, internationalization or XML? None. (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here. None. (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? There is strong WG consensus in advancing this document. Also, selected reviewers are ok with this document to be moved forward. (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is entered into the ID Tracker.) No. (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the document satisfies all ID nits? (See http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB Doctor, media type and URI type reviews? No major issues found here. There are minor nits that reported by the idnits tool. - The page length (page 13) should not exceed 58 lines. - The document does not use any RFC 2119 keywords. In addition, author should not exceed 5 people. These will be fixed in the subsequent revision. (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and informative? Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the strategy for their completion? Are there normative references that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. The document splits its references into normative and informative. (1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA consideration section exists and is consistent with the body of the document? If the document specifies protocol extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If the document creates a new registry, does it define the proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation procedure for future registrations? Does it suggested a reasonable name for the new registry? See [I-D.narten-iana-considerations-rfc2434bis]. If the document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation? The IANA considerations section exists. This document has no actions for IANA. (1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the document that are written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in an automated checker? Does not apply to this document. (1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Writeup? Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary Relevant content can frequently be found in the abstract and/or introduction of the document. If not, this may be an indication that there are deficiencies in the abstract or introduction. Relevent content can frequently and easily be found in the abstract and introduction of this document. Working Group Summary Was there anything in WG process that is worth noting? For example, was there controversy about particular points or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? None. Document Quality Are there existing implementations of the protocol? Have a significant number of vendors indicated their plan to implement the specification? Are there any reviewers that merit special mention as having done a thorough review, e.g., one that resulted in important changes or a conclusion that the document had no substantive issues? If there was a MIB Doctor, Media Type or other expert review, what was its course (briefly)? In the case of a Media Type review, on what date was the request posted? This document specifices problems in running the IETF protocols over IEEE 802.16 network and identifies specific gaps in the 802.16 MAC for IPv4 and IPv6 support.Also, this document spells out several goals to point at relevant works to be done in IETF. The quality of the document is good. Personnel Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Who is the Responsible Area Director? Daniel Park is the Document Shepherd for this document. Jari Arkko is the Responsible Area Director. |
2007-09-07
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04 | Dinara Suleymanova | Draft Added by Dinara Suleymanova in state Publication Requested |
2007-08-14
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02 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-16ng-ps-goals-02.txt |
2007-02-16
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01 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-16ng-ps-goals-01.txt |
2006-10-16
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00 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-16ng-ps-goals-00.txt |