An Autonomic Control Plane (ACP)
draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-20

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Date Rev. By Action
2019-08-13
20 Gunter Van de Velde Assignment of request for Last Call review by OPSDIR to Joel Jaeggli was marked no-response
2019-08-01
20 Alissa Cooper
[Ballot comment]
Thanks for addressing my DISCUSS. Original COMMENT is left below.

General:

Please address the Gen-ART reviewer's latest round of comments.

There are a ...
2019-08-01
20 Alissa Cooper [Ballot Position Update] Position for Alissa Cooper has been changed to No Objection from Discuss
2019-07-22
20 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-20.txt
2019-07-22
20 (System) New version approved
2019-07-22
20 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>
2019-07-22
20 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2019-07-22
19 Sheng Jiang Removed from session: IETF-105: anima  Tue-1330
2019-07-21
19 Sheng Jiang Added to session: IETF-105: anima  Tue-1330
2019-07-16
19 Benjamin Kaduk
[Ballot discuss]
[trimming to just the topics still under discussion; no change to the
text of the remaining items even though some changes have been ...
2019-07-16
19 Benjamin Kaduk
[Ballot comment]
Thank you for adding the implementation experience note to the shepherd
writeup; it is helpful to understand the maturity level of the document. ...
2019-07-16
19 Benjamin Kaduk Ballot comment and discuss text updated for Benjamin Kaduk
2019-03-27
19 Sheng Jiang
Document Writeup, template from IESG area on ietf.org, dated January 19, 2017.

draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13 write-up

(1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed ...
2019-03-26
19 Toerless Eckert
Document Writeup, template from IESG area on ietf.org, dated January 19, 2017.

draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13 write-up

(1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed ...
2019-03-25
19 Sheng Jiang Added to session: IETF-104: anima  Tue-1350
2019-03-11
19 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-19.txt
2019-03-11
19 (System) New version approved
2019-03-11
19 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>
2019-03-11
19 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2018-09-17
18 Pascal Thubert Request for Early review by IOTDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Pascal Thubert.
2018-08-07
18 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-18.txt
2018-08-07
18 (System) New version approved
2018-08-07
18 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>
2018-08-07
18 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2018-08-07
17 (System) Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed
2018-08-07
17 (System) IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - Actions Needed
2018-08-07
17 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-17.txt
2018-08-07
17 (System) New version approved
2018-08-07
17 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>
2018-08-07
17 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2018-08-02
16 Cindy Morgan IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation - Defer::Revised I-D Needed from IESG Evaluation - Defer
2018-08-02
16 Ignas Bagdonas [Ballot comment]
I was involved in this for a while.
2018-08-02
16 Ignas Bagdonas [Ballot Position Update] New position, Recuse, has been recorded for Ignas Bagdonas
2018-08-02
16 Alexey Melnikov
[Ballot comment]
I haven't finished reading the whole document. I agree with Benjamin and Ekr that some security aspects are underspecified.

A few extra comments/questions ...
2018-08-02
16 Alexey Melnikov [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Alexey Melnikov
2018-08-01
16 Suresh Krishnan [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Suresh Krishnan
2018-08-01
16 Adam Roach [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Adam Roach
2018-08-01
16 Benjamin Kaduk
[Ballot discuss]
This is a really exciting protocol to read about -- the prospect of
dropping a bunch of just-manufactured devices in place, spinning up ...
2018-08-01
16 Benjamin Kaduk
[Ballot comment]
Some high-level comments that do not quite meet DISCUSS criteria appear
below, followed by section-by-section inline comments.  My apologies for
not splitting them ...
2018-08-01
16 Benjamin Kaduk [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded for Benjamin Kaduk
2018-08-01
16 Eric Rescorla
[Ballot discuss]
Rich version of this review at:
https://mozphab-ietf.devsvcdev.mozaws.net/D9959

I found this document extremely hard to follow due to a large number
of grammar errors. ...
2018-08-01
16 Eric Rescorla
[Ballot comment]
S 1.
>      possibilities that where considered not to be appropriate for
>      standardization in this document but were ...
2018-08-01
16 Eric Rescorla [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded for Eric Rescorla
2018-08-01
16 Ben Campbell
[Ballot comment]
Substantive Comments:

- I agree with Alissa's comment about "future" things.

§4: What do the normative keywords in this section apply to? If ...
2018-08-01
16 Ben Campbell [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Ben Campbell
2018-08-01
16 Alissa Cooper
[Ballot discuss]
Section 6.10.4:

"The value of the Interface Identifier is left for future definitions."

I don't understand how this is usable without some definition. ...
2018-08-01
16 Alissa Cooper
[Ballot comment]
General:

Please address the Gen-ART reviewer's latest round of comments.

There are a bunch of places in this document where it seems like ...
2018-08-01
16 Alissa Cooper [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded for Alissa Cooper
2018-07-31
16 Elwyn Davies Request for Telechat review by GENART Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: Elwyn Davies. Sent review to list.
2018-07-31
16 Amanda Baber IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed
2018-07-22
16 Liang Xia Request for Telechat review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Liang Xia. Sent review to list.
2018-07-19
16 Tero Kivinen Request for Telechat review by SECDIR is assigned to Liang Xia
2018-07-19
16 Tero Kivinen Request for Telechat review by SECDIR is assigned to Liang Xia
2018-07-18
16 Sheng Jiang Added to session: IETF-102: anima  Wed-0930
2018-07-17
16 Magnus Westerlund Closed request for Telechat review by TSVART with state 'Team Will not Review Version'
2018-07-17
16 Magnus Westerlund Request for Telechat review by TSVART is assigned to Wesley Eddy
2018-07-17
16 Magnus Westerlund Request for Telechat review by TSVART is assigned to Wesley Eddy
2018-07-12
16 Jean Mahoney Request for Telechat review by GENART is assigned to Elwyn Davies
2018-07-12
16 Jean Mahoney Request for Telechat review by GENART is assigned to Elwyn Davies
2018-07-09
16 Amy Vezza Placed on agenda for telechat - 2018-08-02
2018-06-11
16 Warren Kumari
[Ballot comment]
Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS concerns so quickly and well.

I've cleared.

(Actually wrote this a few days back, but forgot to ...
2018-06-11
16 Warren Kumari Ballot comment text updated for Warren Kumari
2018-06-08
16 Warren Kumari
[Ballot comment]
Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS concerns so quickly and well.

I've cleared.

-- Original DISCUSS for hysterical raisins --
I'm balloting DISCUSS, ...
2018-06-08
16 Warren Kumari [Ballot Position Update] Position for Warren Kumari has been changed to No Objection from Discuss
2018-06-08
16 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-16.txt
2018-06-08
16 (System) New version approved
2018-06-08
16 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>
2018-06-08
16 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2018-06-06
15 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-15.txt
2018-06-06
15 (System) New version approved
2018-06-06
15 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>
2018-06-06
15 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2018-06-06
14 (System) IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - Actions Needed
2018-06-06
14 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-14.txt
2018-06-06
14 (System) New version approved
2018-06-06
14 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>
2018-06-06
14 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2018-06-06
13 Warren Kumari
[Ballot comment]
Thank you very much for writing this document -- it is comprehensive...

A rich text version of my review is here: https://mozphab-ietf.devsvcdev.mozaws.net/D3801#inline-4146 , ...
2018-06-06
13 Warren Kumari Ballot comment text updated for Warren Kumari
2018-06-06
13 Warren Kumari
[Ballot discuss]
I'm balloting DISCUSS, but I think that this should be relatively simple to address:
The document says things like:"Today, the management and control ...
2018-06-06
13 Warren Kumari
[Ballot comment]
A rich text version of my review is here: https://mozphab-ietf.devsvcdev.mozaws.net/D3801#inline-4146 , and pasted below for tooling, email, etc.

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2018-06-06
13 Warren Kumari [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded for Warren Kumari
2018-06-03
13 Terry Manderson Removed from agenda for telechat
2018-05-22
13 Alissa Cooper Telechat date has been changed to 2018-06-07 from 2018-05-24
2018-05-22
13 Alissa Cooper IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation - Defer from IESG Evaluation
2018-05-21
13 Spencer Dawkins [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Spencer Dawkins
2018-05-21
13 Deborah Brungard
[Ballot comment]
I noted in the different versions the content of section 10 floated between an
appendix and as part of the document (current version). ...
2018-05-21
13 Deborah Brungard [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Deborah Brungard
2018-05-18
13 Mirja Kühlewind
[Ballot comment]
1) I would like to see a slightly stronger statement here in section 6.1.3:
"The M_FLOOD message MUST be sent periodically.  The default ...
2018-05-18
13 Mirja Kühlewind [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Mirja Kühlewind
2018-03-21
13 Terry Manderson IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for Writeup
2018-03-21
13 Terry Manderson Placed on agenda for telechat - 2018-05-24
2018-03-21
13 Terry Manderson Ballot has been issued
2018-03-21
13 Terry Manderson [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Terry Manderson
2018-03-21
13 Terry Manderson Created "Approve" ballot
2018-03-21
13 Terry Manderson Ballot writeup was changed
2018-03-01
13 Joel Halpern Request for Telechat review by RTGDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Joel Halpern. Sent review to list.
2018-02-28
13 Min Ye Request for Telechat review by RTGDIR is assigned to Joel Halpern
2018-02-28
13 Min Ye Request for Telechat review by RTGDIR is assigned to Joel Halpern
2018-02-28
13 Elwyn Davies Request for Last Call review by GENART Completed: Not Ready. Reviewer: Elwyn Davies.
2018-02-26
13 (System) IESG state changed to Waiting for Writeup from In Last Call
2018-02-23
13 Liang Xia Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Liang Xia. Sent review to list.
2018-02-22
13 Amanda Baber IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - Actions Needed from IANA - Not OK
2018-02-20
13 (System) IANA Review state changed to IANA - Not OK from IANA - Review Needed
2018-02-20
13 Amanda Baber
(Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs:

The IANA Services Operator has completed its review of draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13. If any part of this review is inaccurate, please let us ...
2018-02-16
13 Gunter Van de Velde Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Joel Jaeggli
2018-02-16
13 Gunter Van de Velde Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Joel Jaeggli
2018-02-16
13 Tero Kivinen Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Liang Xia
2018-02-16
13 Tero Kivinen Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Liang Xia
2018-02-15
13 Jean Mahoney Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Elwyn Davies
2018-02-15
13 Jean Mahoney Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Elwyn Davies
2018-02-15
13 Brian Carpenter Assignment of request for Last Call review by GENART to Brian Carpenter was rejected
2018-02-15
13 Jean Mahoney Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Brian Carpenter
2018-02-15
13 Jean Mahoney Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Brian Carpenter
2018-02-13
13 Ari Keränen Request for Early review by IOTDIR is assigned to Pascal Thubert
2018-02-13
13 Ari Keränen Request for Early review by IOTDIR is assigned to Pascal Thubert
2018-02-12
13 Min Ye Request for Telechat review by RTGDIR is assigned to Matthew Bocci
2018-02-12
13 Min Ye Request for Telechat review by RTGDIR is assigned to Matthew Bocci
2018-02-12
13 Alvaro Retana Requested Telechat review by RTGDIR
2018-02-12
13 Amy Vezza IANA Review state changed to IANA - Review Needed
2018-02-12
13 Amy Vezza
The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2018-02-26):

From: The IESG <iesg-secretary@ietf.org>
To: IETF-Announce <ietf-announce@ietf.org>
CC: anima-chairs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane@ietf.org, Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com>, terry.manderson@icann.org, anima@ietf.org, ...
2018-02-12
13 Amy Vezza IESG state changed to In Last Call from Last Call Requested
2018-02-12
13 Amy Vezza Last call announcement was changed
2018-02-11
13 Terry Manderson Requested Early review by IOTDIR
2018-02-11
13 Terry Manderson Requested Early review by SECDIR
2018-02-11
13 Terry Manderson Last call was requested
2018-02-11
13 Terry Manderson Ballot approval text was generated
2018-02-11
13 Terry Manderson Ballot writeup was generated
2018-02-11
13 Terry Manderson IESG state changed to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation
2018-02-11
13 Terry Manderson Last call announcement was generated
2018-02-11
13 Terry Manderson IESG state changed to AD Evaluation from Publication Requested
2018-01-30
13 Terry Manderson Shepherding AD changed to Terry Manderson
2018-01-29
13 Sheng Jiang Tag Doc Shepherd Follow-up Underway cleared.
2018-01-29
13 Sheng Jiang
Document Writeup, template from IESG area on ietf.org, dated January 19, 2017.

draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13 write-up

(1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed ...
2018-01-29
13 Sheng Jiang Responsible AD changed to Benoit Claise
2018-01-29
13 Sheng Jiang IETF WG state changed to Submitted to IESG for Publication from WG Document
2018-01-29
13 Sheng Jiang IESG state changed to Publication Requested
2018-01-29
13 Sheng Jiang IESG process started in state Publication Requested
2018-01-29
13 Sheng Jiang Changed document writeup
2017-12-17
13 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13.txt
2017-12-17
13 (System) New version approved
2017-12-17
13 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>
2017-12-17
13 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2017-11-29
12 Sheng Jiang Tag Doc Shepherd Follow-up Underway set.
2017-10-13
12 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-12.txt
2017-10-13
12 (System) New version approved
2017-10-13
12 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>
2017-10-13
12 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2017-10-13
11 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-11.txt
2017-10-13
11 (System) New version approved
2017-10-13
11 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>
2017-10-13
11 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2017-09-17
10 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-10.txt
2017-09-17
10 (System) New version approved
2017-09-17
10 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, anima-chairs@ietf.org
2017-09-17
10 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2017-08-02
09 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-09.txt
2017-08-02
09 (System) New version approved
2017-08-02
09 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Michael Behringer <Michael.H.Behringer@gmail.com>, Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, anima-chairs@ietf.org
2017-08-02
09 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2017-07-18
08 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-08.txt
2017-07-18
08 (System) New version approved
2017-07-18
08 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, Michael Behringer <mchael.h.behringer@gmail.com>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, anima-chairs@ietf.org
2017-07-18
08 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2017-07-03
07 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-07.txt
2017-07-03
07 (System) New version approved
2017-07-03
07 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, anima-chairs@ietf.org, Michael Behringer <mbehring@cisco.com>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>
2017-07-03
07 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2017-03-27
06 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-06.txt
2017-03-27
06 (System) New version approved
2017-03-27
06 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Toerless Eckert <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, anima-chairs@ietf.org, Michael Behringer <mbehring@cisco.com>, Steinthor Bjarnason <sbjarnason@arbor.net>
2017-03-27
06 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2017-01-17
05 Sheng Jiang Notification list changed to "Sheng Jiang" <jiangsheng@huawei.com>
2017-01-17
05 Sheng Jiang Document shepherd changed to Sheng Jiang
2017-01-17
05 Sheng Jiang Changed consensus to Yes from Unknown
2017-01-17
05 Sheng Jiang Intended Status changed to Proposed Standard from None
2017-01-12
05 Michael Behringer New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-05.txt
2017-01-12
05 (System) New version approved
2017-01-12
05 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, "Toerless Eckert" <tte+ietf@cs.fau.de>, "Steinthor Bjarnason" <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, "Michael Behringer" <mbehring@cisco.com>
2017-01-12
05 Michael Behringer Uploaded new revision
2016-11-15
04 Sheng Jiang Added to session: IETF-97: anima  Wed-0930
2016-10-31
04 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-04.txt
2016-10-31
04 (System) New version approved
2016-10-31
03 (System) Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: anima-chairs@ietf.org, "Toerless Eckert" <eckert@cisco.com>, "Steinthor Bjarnason" <sbjarnason@arbor.net>, "Michael Behringer" <mbehring@cisco.com>
2016-10-31
03 Toerless Eckert Uploaded new revision
2016-07-08
03 Michael Behringer New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-03.txt
2016-03-21
02 Toerless Eckert New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-02.txt
2015-10-06
01 Michael Behringer New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-01.txt
2015-08-18
00 Toerless Eckert This document now replaces draft-behringer-anima-autonomic-control-plane instead of None
2015-08-17
00 Michael Behringer New version available: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-00.txt