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draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm

Request Review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-05
Requested revision 05 (document currently at 12)
Type Early Review
Team Internet of Things Directorate (iotdir)
Deadline 2022-12-24
Requested 2022-11-15
Requested by Toerless Eckert
Authors Steffen Fries , Thomas Werner , Eliot Lear , Michael Richardson
WG chairs Toerless Eckert , Sheng Jiang
I-D last updated 2024-03-04
IESG document state I-D Exists
Completed reviews Secdir Early review of -10 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Secdir Early review of -05 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -05 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Iotdir Early review of -05 by Marco Tiloca (diff)
Comments
This document is getting close to WGLC, and we would appreciate early review of the three above listed directorates (security, IoT and YANG doctors) as the in our opinion most important ones.

The YANG doctor review is particularily important, because we would want to use this document as the spearhead for resolving our issue of augmenting rfc8366 YANG, and so far, the discussions we have on netmod/anima with YANG experts have not lead to a working suggestion. This problem applies to multiple ANIMA drafts intending to augment rfc8366 YANG, and if the solution is that we first need to fix up the rfc8366 YANG, e.g.: via rfc8366bis or a differently fixed version of its YANG module, then this would become a new dependency for all those doc. The authors of this draft suggested that Jan Lindblad has been helpful on these type of issues in the past already, and he might be more familiar with them than other YANG doctors.

Thank you so much
    Toerless on behalf of ANIMA (chairs).
Assignments Reviewer Lou Berger
State Rejected
Reviewer Bruce Nordman
State Rejected
Reviewer Erik Nordmark
State Rejected
Reviewer Loganaden Velvindron
State Rejected
Reviewer Marco Tiloca
State Completed
Review review-ietf-anima-brski-prm-05-iotdir-early-tiloca-2022-12-22
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/iot-directorate/jk_dIUnQb60f-TIeSceywHXNvjs
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-12-22

History

Date By Description
2022-12-22 Marco Tiloca Request for Early review by IOTDIR Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: Marco Tiloca.
2022-11-28 Marco Tiloca Assignment for Marco Tiloca accepted
2022-11-28 Ines Robles Request for Early review by IOTDIR is assigned to Marco Tiloca
2022-11-28 Ines Robles Assignment of request for Early review by IOTDIR to Loganaden Velvindron was rejected
2022-11-26 Ines Robles Request for Early review by IOTDIR is assigned to Loganaden Velvindron
2022-11-26 Ines Robles Assignment of request for Early review by IOTDIR to Erik Nordmark was rejected
2022-11-22 Ines Robles Request for Early review by IOTDIR is assigned to Erik Nordmark
2022-11-22 Ines Robles Assignment of request for Early review by IOTDIR to Bruce Nordman was rejected
2022-11-18 Ines Robles Request for Early review by IOTDIR is assigned to Bruce Nordman
2022-11-18 Ines Robles Assignment of request for Early review by IOTDIR to Lou Berger was rejected
2022-11-15 Ines Robles Request for Early review by IOTDIR is assigned to Lou Berger
2022-11-15 Toerless Eckert Requested Early review by IOTDIR