Shepherd writeup
rfc6365-06

PROTO writeup for draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3536bis-02

The Applications Area Working Group requests the publication of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3536bis-02 as a BCP, obsoleting RFC 3536, which is Informational.

  (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the
        Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the 
        document and, in particular, does he or she believe this 
        version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication? 

Barry Leiba is the document shepherd.  I have reviewed this version, and am satisfied that it's ready.

  (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members 
        and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have 
        any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that 
        have been performed?  

The document has adequate review, on the IDNAbis and EAI lists and then on the apps-discuss list, and I have no concerns.

  (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document 
        needs more review from a particular or broader perspective, 
        e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with 
        AAA, internationalization or XML? 

I have no concerns.

  (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or 
        issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director
        and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he 
        or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or 
        has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any 
        event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated 
        that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those 
        concerns here. Has an IPR disclosure related to this document 
        been filed? If so, please include a reference to the 
        disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion on 
        this issue. 

I have no concerns.  There is no IPR involved.

  (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it 
        represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with 
        others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and 
        agree with it?   

There is consensus of the working group behind it, not just "a few".  That said, internationalization is a very specialized topic, and the majority of Applications Area participants are not well versed in it, and have not commented on the document.

  (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme 
        discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in 
        separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It 
        should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is 
        entered into the ID Tracker.) 

No.

  (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the 
        document satisfies all ID nits? (See the Internet-Drafts Checklist 
        and http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are 
        not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document 
        met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB 
        Doctor, media type and URI type reviews? 

I have verified it with idnits version 2.12.12.  It is fine.

  (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and 
        informative? Are there normative references to documents that 
        are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear 
        state? If such normative references exist, what is the 
        strategy for their completion? Are there normative references 
        that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If 
        so, list these downward references to support the Area 
        Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. 

All references are properly separated and labelled.  This document, by its nature, has a number of references to documents from other bodies -- ISO, the Unicode Consortium, W3C, and ANSI.  Two of those references are normative.  They were normative in the original document as well, and are updated here:

   [ISOIEC10646]
              ISO/IEC, "ISO/IEC 10646-1:2003. International Standard --
              Information technology - Universal Multiple-Octet Coded
              Character Set (UCS)", 2003.

   [UNICODE]  The Unicode Consortium, "The Unicode Standard, Version
              6.0", Mountain View, CA: The Unicode Consortium,
              2011. ISBN 978-1-936213-01-6)., 2011,
              <http://www.unicode.org/versions/Unicode6.0.0/>.


  (1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA 
        consideration section exists and is consistent with the body 
        of the document? If the document specifies protocol 
        extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA 
        registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If 
        the document creates a new registry, does it define the 
        proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation 
        procedure for future registrations? Does it suggest a 
        reasonable name for the new registry? See [RFC5226]. If the 
        document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd 
        conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG 
        can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation? 

There are no IANA issues with this document, and the IANA Considerations section says that.

  (1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the 
        document that are written in a formal language, such as XML 
        code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in 
        an automated checker?

There is no formal language in this document.

  (1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document 
        Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document 
        Announcement Write-Up? Recent examples can be found in the
        "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval 
        announcement contains the following sections: 

     Technical Summary 
        Relevant content can frequently be found in the abstract 
        and/or introduction of the document. If not, this may be 
        an indication that there are deficiencies in the abstract 
        or introduction. 

This document provides a glossary of terms used in the IETF when discussing internationalization.  The purpose is to help frame discussions of internationalization in the various areas of the IETF and to help introduce the main concepts to IETF participants.

This document gives an overview of internationalization as it applies to IETF standards work by lightly covering the many aspects of internationalization and the vocabulary associated with those topics. Some of the overview is a somewhat tuturial in nature.  It is not meant to be a complete description of internationalization.  The definitions in this document are not normative for IETF standards; however, they are useful and standards may make informative reference to this document after it becomes an RFC.  Some of the definitions in this document come from many earlier IETF documents and books.

     Working Group Summary 
        Was there anything in WG process that is worth noting? For 
        example, was there controversy about particular points or 
        were there decisions where the consensus was particularly 
        rough? 

Not surprisingly for a document such as this, there were many suggestions of terminology to include, and of alternative definitions to the ones included.  The editors have done a good job of striking a necessary balance between an overly bloated document and one that includes the right set of terms, with definitions that reflect reasonable consensus, if not always unanimity.  There were a number of such discussions, with none bearing particular mention here.

     Document Quality 
        Are there existing implementations of the protocol? Have a 
        significant number of vendors indicated their plan to 
        implement the specification? Are there any reviewers that 
        merit special mention as having done a thorough review, 
        e.g., one that resulted in important changes or a 
        conclusion that the document had no substantive issues? If 
        there was a MIB Doctor, Media Type or other expert review, 
        what was its course (briefly)? In the case of a Media Type 
        review, on what date was the request posted? 
        
This document replaces RFC 3536, cleaning up and updating many of the definitions therein.  RFC 3536 has been in use for eight years, and this document reflects that maturity and what we've learned about the gaps in the terminology and definitions over that time.  Section 7 is a significant new section that talks about IDNA work done since RFC 3536.
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