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Framework for IPv4/IPv6 Translation
draft-ietf-behave-v6v4-framework-10

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 09 and is now closed.

Summary: Has enough positions to pass.

[Dan Romascanu]

Comment (2010-08-10)

This is a well-written, clear document, useful reading to understand the other
documents in the bucket.

A few non-blocking comments:

1. It would be useful to expand acronyms at first ocurence - e.g. NAT-PT, AAAA
record, A record, MTA, SIIT, etc.

2. It would be useful to add the network management protocols (SNMP, NETCONF)
and the AAA protocols (Diameter, RADIUS) in the examples of client-server
protocols in section 1.3. Deployment of these protocols is one of the issues
network operators encounter in the transition scenarios.

3. At the begining of section 2 - s/translation solution/translation solutions/

[Gonzalo Camarillo]

Comment (2010-08-04)

The taxonomy of applications in Section 1.3 seems useful. However, the
definition of P2P applications can be confusing. For example, SIP is classified
as a P2P application and not as a client/server application . However, entities
in SIP are called user agent clients, user agent servers, proxy servers,
redirect servers, etc. Using a different term instead of P2P to classify those
types of applications would make that section clearer. However, since this is
not substantial to the draft, I leave it up to the authors whether or not to
make this change.