Summary: Needs 8 more YES or NO OBJECTION positions to pass.
Please expand the following acronyms on first use, or in Section 1: EVPN, PE, EVI, VPLS. Similarly, CE is expanded in Section 2.2, which is not the first use. In Section 5.5, you use the term "white-listed". While not required, I ask that you change this to "allow-listed", which some have argued is a more inclusive term.