Definitions of Textual Conventions for Generalized Multiprotocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Management
draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-11
Yes
(Bill Fenner)
No Objection
(Brian Carpenter)
(Cullen Jennings)
(David Kessens)
(Jari Arkko)
(Jon Peterson)
(Lisa Dusseault)
(Magnus Westerlund)
(Mark Townsley)
(Ross Callon)
(Russ Housley)
(Sam Hartman)
(Ted Hardie)
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 11 and is now closed.
Bill Fenner Former IESG member
Yes
Yes
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Brian Carpenter Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Cullen Jennings Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Dan Romascanu Former IESG member
(was Discuss)
No Objection
No Objection
(2006-08-30)
Unknown
COMMENT: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-14.txt DESCRIPTION "Initial version issued as part of RFC XXX." ::= { mplsStdMIB XXX } -- RFC Editor. Please replace XXX above with the correct RFC number and -- remove this note. -- RFC Editor. Please replace YYY above with the OID assigned by IANA -- and remove this note The intention is I believe: ::= { mplsStdMIB YYY } Also: DESCRIPTION "Initial version issued as part of RFC XXX." ::= { mplsStdMIB XXX } -- RFC Editor. Please replace XXX above with the correct RFC number and -- remove this note. -- RFC Editor. Please replace ZZZ above with the OID assigned by IANA -- and remove this note should rather be: ::= { mplsStdMIB ZZZ } in draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-10.txt -- This MIB module is contained in the OID sub-tree -- rooted at mplsStdMIB. "Initial version published as part of RFC XXX." ::= { mplsStdMIB XXX } -- RFC Editor. Please replace XXX above with the correct RFC number and -- remove this note. -- RFC Editor. Please replace YYY above with the OID assigned by IANA -- and remove this note should be: ::= { mplsStdMIB YYY }
David Kessens Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Jari Arkko Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Jon Peterson Former IESG member
No Objection
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Lars Eggert Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2006-08-28)
Unknown
draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-14 Section 1., paragraph 2: > Comments should be made directly to the CCAMP mailing list at > ccamp@ops.ietf.org. Remove. Section 1.1., paragraph 2: > LSRs may be migrated to be modeled and managed using the MIB modules > in this document in order to migrate the LSRs to GMPLS support, or to > take advandtage of additional MIB objects defined in these MIB Nit: s/advandtage/advantage/ Section 4.2., paragraph 10: > - Optionally specifying segment traffic parameters in the > MPLS-LSR-STD-MIB module [RCF3813]. Nit: s/[RCF3813]./[RFC3813]./ Section 6., paragraph 10: > -- RowPointer MUST point to the first accsesible column. Nit: s/accsesible/accessible/ Section 7., paragraph 55: Section 7., paragraph 57: Section 7., paragraph 72: Section 7., paragraph 74: > "The only valid value for unidrectional LSPs is forward(1)." Nit: s/unidrectional/unidirectional/ Section 9., paragraph 7: > if the network itself is secure (for example by using IPSec), even Nit: s/IPSec),/IPsec),/ Section 10., paragraph 0: > 10. Acknowledgments Nit: Typically after IANA considerations. Section 10., paragraph 2: > This document extends [RFC3813]. "Extends" as in "updates?" If so, must reflect in headers/abstract/intro. Section 11., paragraph 3: > New assignments can only be made via a Standards Action as specified in > [RFC2434]. Missing Reference: 'RFC2434' is mentioned on line 1867, but not defined ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-10 Section 1., paragraph 3: > Comments should be made directly to the CCAMP mailing list at > ccamp@ops.ietf.org. Nit: Remove. Section 3., paragraph 23: > For manually > configured bidirecitonal LSPs, an arbitrary decision must be Nit: s/bidirecitonal/bidirectional/ Section 5., paragraph 3: > New assignments can only be made via a Standards Action as specified in > [RFC2434]. Nit: Missing Reference: 'RFC2434' is mentioned on line 274, but not defined ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-te-mib-15 Section 1.1., paragraph 2: > LSRs may be migrated to model and manage their TE LSPs using the MIB > modules in this document in order to migrate the LSRs to GMPLS > support, or to take advandtage of additional MIB objects defined in Nit: s/advandtage/advantage/ Section 8., paragraph 185: > If the value of > gmplsTunnelErrorLastErrorType is protocol (2) the error should > be interpreted in the context of the signling protocol Nit: s/signling/signaling/ Section 8., paragraph 198: > The notification rate applies to the sum > of all notificaitons in the MPLS-TE-STD-MIB and Nit: s/notificaitons/notifications/ Section 9., paragraph 7: > if the network itself is secure (for example by using IPSec), even Nit: s/IPSec),/IPsec),/ Section 12.1., paragraph 22: > [GMPLSTCMIB] Nadeau, T. and A. Farrel, "Definitions of Textual > Conventions for Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) > Management", draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib, work in > progress. Nit: 'GMPLSTCMIB' is defined on line 2850, but not referenced
Lisa Dusseault Former IESG member
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Magnus Westerlund Former IESG member
No Objection
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Mark Townsley Former IESG member
No Objection
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Ross Callon Former IESG member
No Objection
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Russ Housley Former IESG member
(was Discuss)
No Objection
No Objection
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Sam Hartman Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Ted Hardie Former IESG member
No Objection
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