Mobile Communication Congestion Exposure Scenario
draft-ietf-conex-mobile-06
Yes
(Martin Stiemerling)
No Objection
(Alia Atlas)
(Alvaro Retana)
(Barry Leiba)
(Deborah Brungard)
(Joel Jaeggli)
(Kathleen Moriarty)
(Terry Manderson)
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 05 and is now closed.
Martin Stiemerling Former IESG member
Yes
Yes
(for -05)
Unknown
Alia Atlas Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -05)
Unknown
Alvaro Retana Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -05)
Unknown
Barry Leiba Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -05)
Unknown
Ben Campbell Former IESG member
(was Discuss)
No Objection
No Objection
(2015-10-19)
Unknown
Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS position comments about the security consideration. I've cleared the DISCUSS. I do have a couple of new comments about the new text in section 6: The security considerations cited 3 documents as having security considerations that apply to this draft. Those need to be normative references, since they must be read to understand the security considerations. (This shouldn't create a downref problem, since this draft is informational.) s/"... are discussing additional security considerations... "/"... discuss additional security considerations..." Previous Comments: There is an IPR declaration that lists this as an "associated draft". I'm not sure what to make of that, but it was not mentioned in the shepherd review. This reads much like an advocacy white paper. There's useful information in it, but I would have preferred less of the marketing tone. But that's just me, and I don't expect that to change this late in the process.
Benoît Claise Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2015-10-01 for -05)
Unknown
Not too happy that a document on the IESG table doesn't take into account the shepherd feedback. See "A few editing nits that should be addressed before final publication: " at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-conex-mobile/shepherdwriteup/, which corresponds to Tim's OPS DIR feedback below. My review found several issues with the document references and discussions, and several of them mirror those of the document shepherd. I suggest the OPs ADs heed the document shepherd words. 2.3. Accounting for Congestion Volume 3G and LTE networks provide extensive support for accounting and charging already, for example cf. the Policy Charging Control (PCC) architecture. issue: There is no reference to the PCC architecture, even though its referenced several times. Section 2.4: [I-D.briscoe-conex-initial-deploy] provides specific examples of how ConEx deployments can be initiated, focusing on unilateral typo: unilateral 3.1. Possible Deployment Scenarios We present three different deployment scenarios for congestion exposure in the figures below: issue: There are 4 items listed numerically below this statement. Please adjust this. issue: The drawings are not close to the deployment scenarios. I would suggest doing the work to include each drawing with the appropriate scenario. issue: Figures 1-4 refer to objects "UE", "eNB", "S-GW", and "P-GW". These are not defined in the document anywhere. 6. Security Considerations Security considerations for applying CONEX to EPS include, but are not limited to, the security considerations that apply to the CONEX protocols. issue: There should be a reference to the draft that discusses the security considerations that apply to the CONEX protocols References: I-D.briscoe-conex-initial-deploy - "work in progress" is stated, but draft is expired. I-D.briscoe-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines - also expired Appendix B: The EPS architecture and some of its standardized interfaces are depicted in Figure 1. This should be Figure 5, which is also distant from the description. More effort should be used to place descriptions and figures in close proximity.
Deborah Brungard Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -05)
Unknown
Joel Jaeggli Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -05)
Unknown
Kathleen Moriarty Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -05)
Unknown
Stephen Farrell Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2015-10-01 for -05)
Unknown
- There is a huge amount of sales-speak in this document. Frankly there is so much of that here, and no counterpoint nor real analysis that is technically, but fairly, critical of conex, that this seems like marketing material. Why are the authors, the WG, the area and the IETF producing that kind of thing? I'm sure there are good reasons to produce the material, but I'm not at all sure that ought be done within the IETF. - Same IPR comment as Ben's. Were the WG aware?
Terry Manderson Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -05)
Unknown