An EDNS(0) option to negotiate Leases on DNS Updates
draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-08
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2024-04-10
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08 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to RFC-Ed-Ack from Waiting on RFC Editor |
2024-04-10
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08 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to Waiting on RFC Editor from In Progress |
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08 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to In Progress from Waiting on Authors |
2024-04-09
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2024-04-04
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08 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to EDIT |
2024-04-04
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08 | (System) | IESG state changed to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent |
2024-04-04
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08 | (System) | Announcement was received by RFC Editor |
2024-04-04
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08 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to In Progress |
2024-04-04
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08 | Jenny Bui | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent from Approved-announcement to be sent |
2024-04-04
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08 | Jenny Bui | IESG has approved the document |
2024-04-04
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08 | Jenny Bui | Closed "Approve" ballot |
2024-04-04
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08 | Jenny Bui | Ballot approval text was generated |
2024-04-04
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08 | (System) | Removed all action holders (IESG state changed) |
2024-04-04
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08 | Éric Vyncke | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent from Approved-announcement to be sent::Revised I-D Needed |
2024-04-04
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08 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot approval text was generated |
2024-01-26
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08 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request closed, assignment withdrawn: Niclas Comstedt Last Call OPSDIR review |
2024-01-26
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08 | Gunter Van de Velde | Closed request for Last Call review by OPSDIR with state 'Team Will not Review Version': Cleaning up stale OPSDIR queue |
2023-08-10
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08 | (System) | Changed action holders to Stuart Cheshire, Ted Lemon (IESG state changed) |
2023-08-10
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08 | Cindy Morgan | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent::Revised I-D Needed from IESG Evaluation |
2023-08-10
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08 | Andrew Alston | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Andrew Alston |
2023-08-09
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08 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot comment] I concur with Warren's comment (and by extension, Paul's confusion). I would go further and question use of SHOULD here, at least because … [Ballot comment] I concur with Warren's comment (and by extension, Paul's confusion). I would go further and question use of SHOULD here, at least because I have no idea what the threat to interoperability is if I don't do what it says. My gut feeling is that this shouldn't use SHOULD (or any of those key words) at all. That there are three of us asking questions about this tempts me to make it a DISCUSS, but this falls just short of something for which I want to hold up publication. |
2023-08-09
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08 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Murray Kucherawy |
2023-08-09
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08 | Warren Kumari | [Ballot comment] Thank you for writing this document. I'd also like to explicitly thank David Lawrence for the comprehensive DNSDIR review (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-07-dnsdir-lc-tale-2023-06-14/ ), and … [Ballot comment] Thank you for writing this document. I'd also like to explicitly thank David Lawrence for the comprehensive DNSDIR review (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-07-dnsdir-lc-tale-2023-06-14/ ), and for the followup during a natural disaster! Like Paul Wouters I find the "the Update Lease interval should be at least 30 minutes, unless you really want it to be shorter" text to be suboptimal, but I do understand what you are trying to say. How about something like: "By default, the minimum Update Lease option SHOULD be no shorter than 1800 seconds (30 minutes). If the requestor anticipates that the records being updated will change sooner than 30 minutes it MAY choose a shorter interval. Requestors that expect the updated records to be relatively static SHOULD request appropriately longer leases." This says basically the same thing, but the "By default" clause seems to make it less jarring. As this is a "No Objection" ballot, feel free to ignore this suggestion... |
2023-08-09
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08 | Warren Kumari | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Warren Kumari |
2023-08-09
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08 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot comment] [note: Resolved my own discuss now that I see that deleting can be done using a delete command using dns-sd-srp] The Update … [Ballot comment] [note: Resolved my own discuss now that I see that deleting can be done using a delete command using dns-sd-srp] The Update Lease option SHOULD specify a time interval that is no shorter than 1800 seconds (30 minutes). Requestors MAY specify a shorter lease if they anticipate that the records being updated will change sooner than 30 minutes. I feel this section tries to impose a restriction that it immediately breaks. As implementer there is nothing I can do with this section except ignore this text. If the Update Lease of a resource record elapses without being refreshed, the server MUST NOT return the expired record in answers to queries. The server MAY delete the record from its database. The meaning here is open to interpretation. If the record is in the "database", one could assume it is also being served. And if the record must not be returned why is there a MAY to keep it in a "database". I think the second sentence is better just removed and left to implementations to handle. NIT: [I-D.ietf-dnssd-srp] is not pointing to the latest version |
2023-08-09
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08 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Paul Wouters has been changed to Yes from Discuss |
2023-08-09
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08 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot discuss] I wonder why there is no method for a "leaving client" to cleanup and delete its record. Eg a laptop's "lid down" event … [Ballot discuss] I wonder why there is no method for a "leaving client" to cleanup and delete its record. Eg a laptop's "lid down" event could be used to delete the records it has a LEASE on. It could do this without any wire changes by requesting a LEASE value of 0. It could even use a KEY_LEASE value of non-zero to still keep a claim to the name but signal that it is currently not available. Is there a reason this was left out of the draft? As the stated goal of the draft is a more up to date DNS zone, this seems like a logical part of the solution to me. |
2023-08-09
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08 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot comment] The Update Lease option SHOULD specify a time interval that is no shorter than 1800 … [Ballot comment] The Update Lease option SHOULD specify a time interval that is no shorter than 1800 seconds (30 minutes). Requestors MAY specify a shorter lease if they anticipate that the records being updated will change sooner than 30 minutes. I feel this section tries to impose a restriction that it immediately breaks. As implementer there is nothing I can do with this section except ignore this text. There is also no way of deleting by setting an update with 0 seconds (as one "SHOULD" not use < 3600). If the Update Lease of a resource record elapses without being refreshed, the server MUST NOT return the expired record in answers to queries. The server MAY delete the record from its database. The meaning here is open to interpretation. If the record is in the "database", one could assume it is also being served. And if the record must not be returned why is there a MAY to keep it in a "database". I think the second sentence is better just removed and left to implementations to handle. NIT: [I-D.ietf-dnssd-srp] is not pointing to the latest version |
2023-08-09
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08 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded for Paul Wouters |
2023-08-08
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08 | Martin Duke | [Ballot comment] thanks to Brian Trammell for the TSVART review. |
2023-08-08
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08 | Martin Duke | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Martin Duke |
2023-08-07
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08 | Erik Kline | [Ballot comment] # Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-08 CC @ekline * comment syntax: - https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md * "Handling Ballot Positions": - https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ ## Nits … [Ballot comment] # Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-08 CC @ekline * comment syntax: - https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md * "Handling Ballot Positions": - https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ ## Nits ### S5.2 * "a Registration a Refresh" -> "a Registration or a Refresh" ### S5.2.1 * "send a Refresh messages" -> "message" singular? |
2023-08-07
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08 | Erik Kline | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Erik Kline |
2023-08-07
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08 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Zaheduzzaman Sarker |
2023-08-04
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08 | John Scudder | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for John Scudder |
2023-08-04
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08 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot comment] # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-08 CC @larseggert Thanks to Dale Worley for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/l7AbRwDsGmEdGeUDBgtitRVvAdw). … [Ballot comment] # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-08 CC @larseggert Thanks to Dale Worley for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/l7AbRwDsGmEdGeUDBgtitRVvAdw). ## Notes This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT]. [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments [IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool |
2023-08-04
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08 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Lars Eggert |
2023-07-28
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08 | Jean-Michel Combes | Request for Telechat review by INTDIR Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: Jean-Michel Combes. Sent review to list. |
2023-07-12
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08 | David Lawrence | Request for Telechat review by DNSDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: David Lawrence. Sent review to list. |
2023-07-12
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08 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot comment] Thank you to Shivan Sahib for the SECDIR review. |
2023-07-12
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08 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Roman Danyliw |
2023-07-12
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08 | Carlos Jesús Bernardos | Request for Telechat review by INTDIR is assigned to Jean-Michel Combes |
2023-07-11
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08 | Éric Vyncke | Requested Telechat review by IOTDIR |
2023-07-11
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08 | Éric Vyncke | Requested Telechat review by INTDIR |
2023-07-11
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08 | Éric Vyncke | Telechat date has been changed to 2023-08-10 from 2023-07-13 |
2023-07-10
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08 | Amanda Baber | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed |
2023-07-10
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08 | Jim Reid | Request for Telechat review by DNSDIR is assigned to David Lawrence |
2023-07-10
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08 | Jim Guichard | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jim Guichard |
2023-07-10
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08 | Éric Vyncke | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2023-07-13 |
2023-07-10
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08 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot has been issued |
2023-07-10
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08 | Éric Vyncke | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Éric Vyncke |
2023-07-10
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08 | Éric Vyncke | Created "Approve" ballot |
2023-07-10
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08 | Éric Vyncke | IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead |
2023-07-10
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08 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot writeup was changed |
2023-07-07
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08 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - Actions Needed |
2023-07-07
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08 | Ted Lemon | New version available: draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-08.txt |
2023-07-07
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08 | Ted Lemon | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Ted Lemon) |
2023-07-07
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08 | Ted Lemon | Uploaded new revision |
2023-06-30
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07 | Sabrina Tanamal | IANA Experts State changed to Expert Reviews OK from Reviews assigned |
2023-06-30
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07 | Sabrina Tanamal | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - Actions Needed from IANA - Not OK |
2023-06-14
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07 | David Lawrence | Request for Last Call review by DNSDIR Completed: Ready with Issues. Reviewer: David Lawrence. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier … Request for Last Call review by DNSDIR Completed: Ready with Issues. Reviewer: David Lawrence. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2023-06-14
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07 | David Lawrence | Request for Last Call review by DNSDIR Completed: Ready with Issues. Reviewer: David Lawrence. |
2023-06-13
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07 | (System) | IESG state changed to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead from In Last Call |
2023-06-13
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07 | Shivan Sahib | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Shivan Sahib. Sent review to list. |
2023-06-12
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07 | David Dong | IANA Experts State changed to Reviews assigned |
2023-06-12
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07 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Not OK from IANA - Review Needed |
2023-06-12
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07 | David Dong | (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: The IANA Functions Operator has completed its review of draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-07. If any part of this review is inaccurate, please let … (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: The IANA Functions Operator has completed its review of draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-07. If any part of this review is inaccurate, please let us know. The IANA Functions Operator understands that, upon approval of this document, there is a single action which we must complete. In the DNS EDNS0 Option Codes (OPT) registry on the Domain Name System (DNS) Parameters registry page located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/dns-parameters/ the existing early registration for option code 2 is as follows: OLD: Value: 2 Name: UL Status: On-hold Reference: http://files.dns-sd.org/draft-sekar-dns-ul.txt It will be made permanent and changed to: NEW: Value: 2 Name: Update Lease Status: Standard Reference: [ RFC-to-be ] As this document requests registrations in an Expert Review or Specification Required (see RFC 8126) registry, we will initiate the required Expert Review via a separate request. This review must be completed before the document's IANA state can be changed to "IANA OK." The IANA Functions Operator understands that this is the only action required to be completed upon approval of this document. Note: The actions requested in this document will not be completed until the document has been approved for publication as an RFC. This message is meant only to confirm the list of actions that will be performed. For definitions of IANA review states, please see: https://datatracker.ietf.org/help/state/draft/iana-review Thank you, David Dong IANA Services Specialist |
2023-06-08
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07 | Brian Trammell | Request for Last Call review by TSVART Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: Brian Trammell. Sent review to list. |
2023-06-07
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07 | Dale Worley | Request for Last Call review by GENART Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Dale Worley. Sent review to list. |
2023-06-02
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07 | Magnus Westerlund | Request for Last Call review by TSVART is assigned to Brian Trammell |
2023-06-02
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07 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Niclas Comstedt |
2023-06-01
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07 | Jean Mahoney | Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Dale Worley |
2023-06-01
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07 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Shivan Sahib |
2023-05-30
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07 | Jim Reid | Request for Last Call review by DNSDIR is assigned to David Lawrence |
2023-05-30
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07 | Amy Vezza | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Review Needed |
2023-05-30
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07 | Amy Vezza | The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2023-06-13): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: chris.box.ietf@gmail.com, dnssd-chairs@ietf.org, dnssd@ietf.org, draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease@ietf.org, evyncke@cisco.com … The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2023-06-13): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: chris.box.ietf@gmail.com, dnssd-chairs@ietf.org, dnssd@ietf.org, draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease@ietf.org, evyncke@cisco.com Reply-To: last-call@ietf.org Sender: Subject: Last Call: (An EDNS(0) option to negotiate Leases on DNS Updates) to Proposed Standard The IESG has received a request from the Extensions for Scalable DNS Service Discovery WG (dnssd) to consider the following document: - 'An EDNS(0) option to negotiate Leases on DNS Updates' as Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2023-06-13. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Another IETF draft, draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-20, is related to this document. Reviewers are advised to read and review the two documents at the same time. Abstract This document describes an EDNS(0) option that can be used by DNS Update requestors and DNS servers to include a lease lifetime in a DNS Update or response, allowing a server to garbage collect stale resource records that have been added by DNS Updates The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/ The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D: https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/1236/ |
2023-05-30
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07 | Amy Vezza | IESG state changed to In Last Call from Last Call Requested |
2023-05-30
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07 | Amy Vezza | Last call announcement was changed |
2023-05-29
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07 | Éric Vyncke | Last call was requested |
2023-05-29
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07 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot writeup was generated |
2023-05-29
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07 | Éric Vyncke | IESG state changed to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup |
2023-05-29
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07 | Éric Vyncke | Last call announcement was changed |
2023-05-29
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07 | Éric Vyncke | Last call announcement was generated |
2023-05-29
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07 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot approval text was generated |
2023-05-15
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07 | (System) | Changed action holders to Éric Vyncke (IESG state changed) |
2023-05-15
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07 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised I-D Needed |
2023-05-15
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07 | Ted Lemon | New version available: draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-07.txt |
2023-05-15
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07 | Ted Lemon | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Ted Lemon) |
2023-05-15
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07 | Ted Lemon | Uploaded new revision |
2023-04-06
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06 | Éric Vyncke | AD review sent https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/3PPteZXv8NFpKUsK3BlLtVb2zQw/ |
2023-04-06
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06 | (System) | Changed action holders to Ted Lemon, Éric Vyncke, Stuart Cheshire (IESG state changed) |
2023-04-06
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06 | Éric Vyncke | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation::Revised I-D Needed from AD Evaluation |
2023-04-03
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06 | (System) | Changed action holders to Éric Vyncke (IESG state changed) |
2023-04-03
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06 | Éric Vyncke | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation from Publication Requested |
2023-03-27
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06 | David Schinazi | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Broad agreement. DNSSD has historically been a pretty small WG with a very small number of vocal participants, but this draft is required for Matter (part of CSA) and that brought in vocal participants and implementers. The draft in its current shape represents the broad agreement of these folks. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? None in the WG. Apple have used this since 2005 but didn't seek standardisation at the time. They brought it to the WG at IETF111 as it's a component of SRP. There was brief debate about whether it should sit in DNSSD. It was discussed with DNSOP chairs and agreed to call for adoption into DNSSD. The adoption call went to both groups, but there was no pushback. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? We're aware of at least two implementations already in production or going into production soon, with more to come after publication. It is a mandatory part of the Matter spec, so implementations are likely to expand greatly over the next few years. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. We have obtained reviews from multiple individuals involved with Matter. They support publication of the draft. No directorate reviews performed but we have agreed with our AD that he will request INT and IoT directorate review at IETF Last Call stage. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. It does not contain any of the above. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? Not applicable. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. It does not contain any of the above. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? * Needed Yes, there is demand for this coming from Matter and the IoT space. * Clearly written In general, yes. It's a short and simple document. * Complete Yes. * Correctly designed Yes, ascertained by agreement from the WG and the mechanism making sense to me. * Ready for AD Yes. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? I identified the following areas in draft -03, which are now resolved from -05. * SEC area states '"This document introduces no new security considerations [on top of the base protocol spec]" is rarely true.'. The document's sentence 'The addition of a record lifetime to facilitate automated garbage collection does not itself add any significant new security concerns.' required expanding. * TSV area states 'If a protocol contains timers, the reviewer should consider whether there is a default value given, or a formula/algorithm for managing the timer. Is there potential for multiple nodes, connections, or other protocol instances have their timers synchronize and cause undesirable effects? E.g. should the timer be randomly dithered.' Draft -03 contained potential for message synchronization after power failure, so the requirements for timer behaviour in -05 have been significantly tightened up. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Proposed Standard. This makes sense for a protocol definition with multiple implementations. Datatracker is up to date. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. The disclosed IPR is at https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/1236/. I raised this before I was a chair, in July 2021: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/xiCVf2dhr84Nrv7PptoHvYiLTzY/ There hasn't been any pushback from the WG about this IPR. Both authors have explicitly confirmed no additional IPR: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/95pR6si77GlgQJE7oplEjRDDZ-s/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/wxv0fy925st5FlKHaJM_z_nh91I/ 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Confirmation received from the authors, Roger Pantos, Gabriel, Jonathan, Abtin, Kangping, Nathan, Steve, Esko, Peter, Marc and Tim. I was unable to find current contact details for Kiren Sekar & Chris Sharp. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) ID Nits ------- No nits found, other than referring to srp-18 rather than srp-19. Content Guidelines ------------------ Draft -03 contained the issues described below. None of these remain in -06, so they are included only for interest. * The Security Considerations didn't meet the standard of "meaningful". * IANA Considerations weren't entirely clear. * Two abbreviations lacked expansions on first use. They are not considered well-known in the RFC Editor's abbreviations list: EDNS(0) Extension Mechanisms for DNS (EDNS(0)) DNS-SD DNS-based Service Discovery (DNS-SD) * The following uses of SHOULD failed to state valid reasons for varying from the recommendation, and the implications of doing so. 4.1 DNS Update requestors SHOULD send an Update Lease option with any DNS Update that is not intended to be present indefinitely. 4.1 The Update Lease option SHOULD specify a time interval that is no shorter than 30 minutes (1800 seconds). 5.1 The Refresh message SHOULD NOT include any update prerequisites that would, if the state produced by the previous update or Refresh is still in effect, fail. 5.1 The update SHOULD NOT be constructed to fail in the case that the state produced by the previous update or Refresh has for some reason been garbage collected. 5.2 Requestors SHOULD Refresh resource records after 75% of the original lease has elapsed. 5.2 If the requestor uses UDP and does not receive a response from the server, the requestor SHOULD retry after 2 seconds. 5.2 The requestor SHOULD continue to retry, doubling the length of time between each retry, or retry using TCP. 5.2.1 If the requestor uses UDP, the requestor MUST NOT coalesce Refresh messages if doing so would cause truncation of the message; in this case, either multiple messages or TCP SHOULD be used. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. No. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? No. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). The considerations section was made clearer. No other issues arise. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. None. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2023-03-27
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06 | David Schinazi | Responsible AD changed to Éric Vyncke |
2023-03-27
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06 | David Schinazi | IETF WG state changed to Submitted to IESG for Publication from In WG Last Call |
2023-03-27
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06 | David Schinazi | IESG state changed to Publication Requested from I-D Exists |
2023-03-27
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06 | David Schinazi | Document is now in IESG state Publication Requested |
2023-03-26
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06 | Chris Box | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Broad agreement. DNSSD has historically been a pretty small WG with a very small number of vocal participants, but this draft is required for Matter (part of CSA) and that brought in vocal participants and implementers. The draft in its current shape represents the broad agreement of these folks. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? None in the WG. Apple have used this since 2005 but didn't seek standardisation at the time. They brought it to the WG at IETF111 as it's a component of SRP. There was brief debate about whether it should sit in DNSSD. It was discussed with DNSOP chairs and agreed to call for adoption into DNSSD. The adoption call went to both groups, but there was no pushback. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? We're aware of at least two implementations already in production or going into production soon, with more to come after publication. It is a mandatory part of the Matter spec, so implementations are likely to expand greatly over the next few years. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. We have obtained reviews from multiple individuals involved with Matter. They support publication of the draft. No directorate reviews performed but we have agreed with our AD that he will request INT and IoT directorate review at IETF Last Call stage. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. It does not contain any of the above. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? Not applicable. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. It does not contain any of the above. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? * Needed Yes, there is demand for this coming from Matter and the IoT space. * Clearly written In general, yes. It's a short and simple document. * Complete Yes. * Correctly designed Yes, ascertained by agreement from the WG and the mechanism making sense to me. * Ready for AD Yes. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? I identified the following areas in draft -03, which are now resolved from -05. * SEC area states '"This document introduces no new security considerations [on top of the base protocol spec]" is rarely true.'. The document's sentence 'The addition of a record lifetime to facilitate automated garbage collection does not itself add any significant new security concerns.' required expanding. * TSV area states 'If a protocol contains timers, the reviewer should consider whether there is a default value given, or a formula/algorithm for managing the timer. Is there potential for multiple nodes, connections, or other protocol instances have their timers synchronize and cause undesirable effects? E.g. should the timer be randomly dithered.' Draft -03 contained potential for message synchronization after power failure, so the requirements for timer behaviour in -05 have been significantly tightened up. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Proposed Standard. This makes sense for a protocol definition with multiple implementations. Datatracker is up to date. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. The disclosed IPR is at https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/1236/. I raised this before I was a chair, in July 2021: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/xiCVf2dhr84Nrv7PptoHvYiLTzY/ There hasn't been any pushback from the WG about this IPR. Both authors have explicitly confirmed no additional IPR: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/95pR6si77GlgQJE7oplEjRDDZ-s/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/wxv0fy925st5FlKHaJM_z_nh91I/ 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Confirmation received from the authors, Roger Pantos, Gabriel, Jonathan, Abtin, Kangping, Nathan, Steve, Esko, Peter, Marc and Tim. I was unable to find current contact details for Kiren Sekar & Chris Sharp. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) ID Nits ------- No nits found, other than referring to srp-18 rather than srp-19. Content Guidelines ------------------ Draft -03 contained the issues described below. None of these remain in -06, so they are included only for interest. * The Security Considerations didn't meet the standard of "meaningful". * IANA Considerations weren't entirely clear. * Two abbreviations lacked expansions on first use. They are not considered well-known in the RFC Editor's abbreviations list: EDNS(0) Extension Mechanisms for DNS (EDNS(0)) DNS-SD DNS-based Service Discovery (DNS-SD) * The following uses of SHOULD failed to state valid reasons for varying from the recommendation, and the implications of doing so. 4.1 DNS Update requestors SHOULD send an Update Lease option with any DNS Update that is not intended to be present indefinitely. 4.1 The Update Lease option SHOULD specify a time interval that is no shorter than 30 minutes (1800 seconds). 5.1 The Refresh message SHOULD NOT include any update prerequisites that would, if the state produced by the previous update or Refresh is still in effect, fail. 5.1 The update SHOULD NOT be constructed to fail in the case that the state produced by the previous update or Refresh has for some reason been garbage collected. 5.2 Requestors SHOULD Refresh resource records after 75% of the original lease has elapsed. 5.2 If the requestor uses UDP and does not receive a response from the server, the requestor SHOULD retry after 2 seconds. 5.2 The requestor SHOULD continue to retry, doubling the length of time between each retry, or retry using TCP. 5.2.1 If the requestor uses UDP, the requestor MUST NOT coalesce Refresh messages if doing so would cause truncation of the message; in this case, either multiple messages or TCP SHOULD be used. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. No. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? No. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). The considerations section was made clearer. No other issues arise. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. None. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2023-03-26
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06 | Ted Lemon | New version available: draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-06.txt |
2023-03-26
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06 | Ted Lemon | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Ted Lemon) |
2023-03-26
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06 | Ted Lemon | Uploaded new revision |
2023-03-16
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05 | Chris Box | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Broad agreement. DNSSD has historically been a pretty small WG with a very small number of vocal participants, but this draft is required for Matter (part of CSA) and that brought in vocal participants and implementers. The draft in its current shape represents the broad agreement of these folks. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? None in the WG. Apple have used this since 2005 but didn't seek standardisation at the time. They brought it to the WG at IETF111 as it's a component of SRP. There was brief debate about whether it should sit in DNSSD. It was discussed with DNSOP chairs and agreed to call for adoption into DNSSD. The adoption call went to both groups, but there was no pushback. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? We're aware of at least two implementations already in production or going into production soon, with more to come after publication. It is a mandatory part of the Matter spec, so implementations are likely to expand greatly over the next few years. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. We have obtained reviews from multiple individuals involved with Matter. They support publication of the draft. No directorate reviews performed but we have agreed with our AD that he will request INT and IoT directorate review at IETF Last Call stage. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. It does not contain any of the above. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? Not applicable. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. It does not contain any of the above. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? * Needed Yes, there is demand for this coming from Matter and the IoT space. * Clearly written In general, yes. It's a short and simple document. * Complete Yes. * Correctly designed Yes, ascertained by agreement from the WG and the mechanism making sense to me. * Ready for AD Yes, as soon as it has completed the second WGLC which is about to be initiated. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? I identified the following areas in draft -03, which are now resolved in -05. * SEC area states '"This document introduces no new security considerations [on top of the base protocol spec]" is rarely true.'. The document's sentence 'The addition of a record lifetime to facilitate automated garbage collection does not itself add any significant new security concerns.' required expanding. * TSV area states 'If a protocol contains timers, the reviewer should consider whether there is a default value given, or a formula/algorithm for managing the timer. Is there potential for multiple nodes, connections, or other protocol instances have their timers synchronize and cause undesirable effects? E.g. should the timer be randomly dithered.' Draft -03 contained potential for message synchronization after power failure, so the requirements for timer behaviour in -05 have been significantly tightened up. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Proposed Standard. This makes sense for a protocol definition with multiple implementations. Datatracker is up to date. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. The disclosed IPR is at https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/1236/. I raised this before I was a chair, in July 2021: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/xiCVf2dhr84Nrv7PptoHvYiLTzY/ There hasn't been any pushback from the WG about this IPR. Both authors have explicitly confirmed no additional IPR: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/95pR6si77GlgQJE7oplEjRDDZ-s/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/wxv0fy925st5FlKHaJM_z_nh91I/ 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Confirmation received from the authors, Roger Pantos, Gabriel, Jonathan, Abtin, Kangping, Nathan, Steve, Esko, Peter, Marc and Tim. I was unable to find current contact details for Kiren Sekar & Chris Sharp. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) ID Nits ------- "No nits found." Content Guidelines ------------------ Draft -03 contained the issues described below. None of these remain in -05, so they are included only for interest. * The Security Considerations didn't meet the standard of "meaningful". * IANA Considerations weren't entirely clear. * Two abbreviations lacked expansions on first use. They are not considered well-known in the RFC Editor's abbreviations list: EDNS(0) Extension Mechanisms for DNS (EDNS(0)) DNS-SD DNS-based Service Discovery (DNS-SD) * The following uses of SHOULD failed to state valid reasons for varying from the recommendation, and the implications of doing so. 4.1 DNS Update requestors SHOULD send an Update Lease option with any DNS Update that is not intended to be present indefinitely. 4.1 The Update Lease option SHOULD specify a time interval that is no shorter than 30 minutes (1800 seconds). 5.1 The Refresh message SHOULD NOT include any update prerequisites that would, if the state produced by the previous update or Refresh is still in effect, fail. 5.1 The update SHOULD NOT be constructed to fail in the case that the state produced by the previous update or Refresh has for some reason been garbage collected. 5.2 Requestors SHOULD Refresh resource records after 75% of the original lease has elapsed. 5.2 If the requestor uses UDP and does not receive a response from the server, the requestor SHOULD retry after 2 seconds. 5.2 The requestor SHOULD continue to retry, doubling the length of time between each retry, or retry using TCP. 5.2.1 If the requestor uses UDP, the requestor MUST NOT coalesce Refresh messages if doing so would cause truncation of the message; in this case, either multiple messages or TCP SHOULD be used. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. No. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? No. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). The considerations section was made clearer. No other issues arise. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. None. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2023-03-16
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05 | Chris Box | A second WGLC just to be absolutely sure that the WG is happy with draft -05. |
2023-03-16
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05 | Chris Box | Tag Revised I-D Needed - Issue raised by WGLC cleared. |
2023-03-16
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05 | Chris Box | IETF WG state changed to In WG Last Call from Waiting for WG Chair Go-Ahead |
2023-03-16
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05 | Chris Box | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Broad agreement. DNSSD has historically been a pretty small WG with a very small number of vocal participants, but this draft is required for Matter (part of CSA) and that brought in vocal participants and implementers. The draft in its current shape represents the broad agreement of these folks. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? None in the WG. Apple have used this since 2005 but didn't seek standardisation at the time. They brought it to the WG at IETF111 as it's a component of SRP. There was brief debate about whether it should sit in DNSSD. It was discussed with DNSOP chairs and agreed to call for adoption into DNSSD. The adoption call went to both groups, but there was no pushback. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? We're aware of at least two implementations already in production or going into production soon, with more to come after publication. It is a mandatory part of the Matter spec, so implementations are likely to expand greatly over the next few years. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. We have obtained reviews from multiple individuals involved with Matter. They support publication of the draft. No directorate reviews performed but we have agreed with our AD that he will request INT and IoT directorate review at IETF Last Call stage. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. It does not contain any of the above. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? Not applicable. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. It does not contain any of the above. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? * Needed Yes, there is demand for this coming from Matter and the IoT space. * Clearly written In general, yes. It's a short and simple document. * Complete Yes. * Correctly designed Yes, ascertained by agreement from the WG and the mechanism making sense to me. * Ready for AD Yes, as soon as it has completed the second WGLC which is about to be initiated. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? I identified the following areas in draft -03, which are now resolved in -05. * SEC area states '"This document introduces no new security considerations [on top of the base protocol spec]" is rarely true.'. The document's sentence 'The addition of a record lifetime to facilitate automated garbage collection does not itself add any significant new security concerns.' required expanding. * TSV area states 'If a protocol contains timers, the reviewer should consider whether there is a default value given, or a formula/algorithm for managing the timer. Is there potential for multiple nodes, connections, or other protocol instances have their timers synchronize and cause undesirable effects? E.g. should the timer be randomly dithered.' Draft -03 contained potential for message synchronization after power failure, so the requirements for timer behaviour in -05 have been significantly tightened up. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Proposed Standard. This makes sense for a protocol definition with multiple implementations. Datatracker is up to date. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. The disclosed IPR is at https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/1236/. I raised this before I was a chair, in July 2021: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/xiCVf2dhr84Nrv7PptoHvYiLTzY/ There hasn't been any pushback from the WG about this IPR. Both authors have explicitly confirmed no additional IPR: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/95pR6si77GlgQJE7oplEjRDDZ-s/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnssd/wxv0fy925st5FlKHaJM_z_nh91I/ 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Confirmation received from the authors, Roger Pantos, Gabriel, Jonathan, Abtin, Kangping, Nathan, Steve, Esko, Peter, Marc. Tim Wicinski is pending. I was unable to find current contact details for Kiren Sekar & Chris Sharp. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) ID Nits ------- "No nits found." Content Guidelines ------------------ Draft -03 contained the issues described below. None of these remain in -05, so they are included only for interest. * The Security Considerations didn't meet the standard of "meaningful". * IANA Considerations weren't entirely clear. * Two abbreviations lacked expansions on first use. They are not considered well-known in the RFC Editor's abbreviations list: EDNS(0) Extension Mechanisms for DNS (EDNS(0)) DNS-SD DNS-based Service Discovery (DNS-SD) * The following uses of SHOULD failed to state valid reasons for varying from the recommendation, and the implications of doing so. 4.1 DNS Update requestors SHOULD send an Update Lease option with any DNS Update that is not intended to be present indefinitely. 4.1 The Update Lease option SHOULD specify a time interval that is no shorter than 30 minutes (1800 seconds). 5.1 The Refresh message SHOULD NOT include any update prerequisites that would, if the state produced by the previous update or Refresh is still in effect, fail. 5.1 The update SHOULD NOT be constructed to fail in the case that the state produced by the previous update or Refresh has for some reason been garbage collected. 5.2 Requestors SHOULD Refresh resource records after 75% of the original lease has elapsed. 5.2 If the requestor uses UDP and does not receive a response from the server, the requestor SHOULD retry after 2 seconds. 5.2 The requestor SHOULD continue to retry, doubling the length of time between each retry, or retry using TCP. 5.2.1 If the requestor uses UDP, the requestor MUST NOT coalesce Refresh messages if doing so would cause truncation of the message; in this case, either multiple messages or TCP SHOULD be used. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. No. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? No. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). The considerations section was made clearer. No other issues arise. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. None. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2023-03-13
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05 | Ted Lemon | New version available: draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-05.txt |
2023-03-13
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05 | Ted Lemon | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Ted Lemon) |
2023-03-13
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05 | Ted Lemon | Uploaded new revision |
2023-02-16
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04 | David Schinazi | Intended Status changed to Proposed Standard from None |
2023-01-30
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04 | Ted Lemon | New version available: draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-04.txt |
2023-01-30
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04 | Ted Lemon | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Ted Lemon) |
2023-01-30
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04 | Ted Lemon | Uploaded new revision |
2022-10-10
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03 | David Schinazi | Notification list changed to chris.box.ietf@gmail.com because the document shepherd was set |
2022-10-10
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03 | David Schinazi | Document shepherd changed to Chris Box |
2022-10-07
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03 | Ted Lemon | New version available: draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-03.txt |
2022-10-07
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03 | Ted Lemon | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Ted Lemon) |
2022-10-07
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03 | Ted Lemon | Uploaded new revision |
2022-08-23
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02 | Chris Box | Tag Revised I-D Needed - Issue raised by WGLC set. |
2022-08-23
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02 | Chris Box | IETF WG state changed to Waiting for WG Chair Go-Ahead from WG Document |
2022-07-11
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02 | Ted Lemon | New version available: draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-02.txt |
2022-07-11
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02 | Ted Lemon | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Ted Lemon) |
2022-07-11
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02 | Ted Lemon | Uploaded new revision |
2022-06-06
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01 | David Schinazi | Changed consensus to Yes from Unknown |
2022-04-24
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01 | Ted Lemon | New version available: draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-01.txt |
2022-04-24
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01 | Ted Lemon | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Ted Lemon) |
2022-04-24
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01 | Ted Lemon | Uploaded new revision |
2021-10-25
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00 | David Schinazi | This document now replaces draft-sekar-dns-ul instead of None |
2021-10-25
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00 | Ted Lemon | New version available: draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-00.txt |
2021-10-25
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00 | (System) | WG -00 approved |
2021-10-22
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00 | Ted Lemon | Set submitter to "Ted Lemon ", replaces to draft-sekar-dns-ul and sent approval email to group chairs: dnssd-chairs@ietf.org |
2021-10-22
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00 | Ted Lemon | Uploaded new revision |