Drone Remote Identification Protocol (DRIP) Requirements and Terminology
draft-ietf-drip-reqs-18

Yes

Murray Kucherawy
Éric Vyncke

No Objection

Erik Kline
Roman Danyliw
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
(Alvaro Retana)
(Robert Wilton)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 13 and is now closed.

Murray Kucherawy
Yes
Comment (2021-07-01 for -16) Sent 
This is all very interesting.  And it's nice to see aviation (a hobby of mine) needing and seeking this kind of help from technology.  I'm looking forward to the actual protocol work.  Thanks for doing such a thorough job on such a foundational document.

Thanks, too, for providing a free alternative to F3411-19.
Éric Vyncke
Yes
Erik Kline
No Objection
Comment (2021-06-30 for -16) Not sent 
[ _general_ ]

* I know these are industry-standard terms and often appear as quoted text
  but, as a matter of observation, it might be good to get in the general
  habit of s/{un}manned/{un}crewed/g wherever feasible.

[S1.2] [nit]

* "needing access to the ...Service or external lookups" ->
  "needing access to the ...Service for external lookups"?

[S4.1.1] [question]

* Vis. GEN-3, given the possibly dynamic nature of Type 3 is the UAS ID
  expected to be unique or is the tuple of {UAS_ID, observation_time} the
  thing that is unique (and therefore the thing to be looked up)?

  Ah, I see ID-4 kinda talks to this issue.
Roman Danyliw
(was Discuss) No Objection
Comment (2021-09-08) Sent for earlier 
Thank you to Linda Dunbar for the SECDIR review.

Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS and COMMENT points.


==[ OLD
** Section 1.1.  Is there a reference for IEEE 802.11 Beacon modes?

** Section 4.3.1. Is there a clear definition somewhere of (a) private information; and (b) safety critical information? 

** Section 4.3.1.  PRIV-2.

DRIP MUST NOT encrypt safety critical data to be
           transmitted over Broadcast RID in any situation where it is
           unlikely that local Observers authorized to access the
           plaintext will be able to decrypt it or obtain it from a
           service able to decrypt it.

How would DRIP “know” that the local Observers are unlikely to be to be able to decrypt the information?
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
No Objection
Alvaro Retana Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -16) Not sent 

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Robert Wilton Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                No Objection 
                                
                                    (2021-07-01 for -16)
                                
                                
                                    
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Thank you for an interesting, clear, and well written document.

Regards,
Rob