BGP Classful Transport Planes
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-39
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2025-03-14
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39 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to RFC-Ed-Ack from Waiting on RFC Editor |
2025-03-11
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39 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to Waiting on RFC Editor from In Progress |
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39 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to Waiting on Authors from In Progress |
2025-03-04
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39 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to EDIT |
2025-03-04
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39 | (System) | IESG state changed to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent |
2025-03-04
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39 | (System) | Announcement was received by RFC Editor |
2025-03-03
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39 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to In Progress |
2025-03-03
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39 | Jenny Bui | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent from Approved-announcement to be sent |
2025-03-03
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39 | Jenny Bui | IESG has approved the document |
2025-03-03
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39 | Jenny Bui | Closed "Approve" ballot |
2025-03-03
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39 | Jenny Bui | Ballot approval text was generated |
2025-03-01
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39 | (System) | Removed all action holders (IESG state changed) |
2025-03-01
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39 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent from IESG Evaluation::AD Followup |
2025-02-28
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39 | (System) | Changed action holders to John Scudder (IESG state changed) |
2025-02-28
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39 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised I-D Needed |
2025-02-28
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39 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - Actions Needed |
2025-02-28
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39 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-39.txt |
2025-02-28
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39 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2025-02-28
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39 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2025-02-28
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38 | John Scudder | The previous debate about SHOULD/MUST is closed; however in doing my final check before sending the document to the RFC Editor, I noticed that somehow … The previous debate about SHOULD/MUST is closed; however in doing my final check before sending the document to the RFC Editor, I noticed that somehow version 38 has a regression in it. Version 37: Requirements Language The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 RFC 2119 [RFC2119] RFC 8174 [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all capitals, as shown here. Version 38: Requirements Language The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in RFC 2119 [RFC2119]. The version in 37 is correct, citing BCP 14 and not just RFC 2119. Can you revert to that language and publish an update? Thanks. |
2025-02-26
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38 | John Scudder | See https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3GsnIynTucIv2ByhgAtmO8ApOMc/ although to be clear, either a revised I-D to take in the proposed change, or a reply that the authors/WG have considered it … See https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3GsnIynTucIv2ByhgAtmO8ApOMc/ although to be clear, either a revised I-D to take in the proposed change, or a reply that the authors/WG have considered it and prefer the document as written, is OK as a resolution. |
2025-02-26
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38 | (System) | Changed action holders to Kaliraj Vairavakkalai, Natrajan Venkataraman (IESG state changed) |
2025-02-26
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38 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation::Revised I-D Needed from IESG Evaluation::AD Followup |
2025-02-25
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38 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot comment] Thank you to Reese Enghardt for the GENART review. Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS feedback. ** What’s the experiment to motivate the … [Ballot comment] Thank you to Reese Enghardt for the GENART review. Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS feedback. ** What’s the experiment to motivate the experimental status? What does success look like? ** Section 4.3 Reserved: 2-octet reserved bits field. This field MUST be set to zero on transmission. This field SHOULD be ignored on reception, and MUST be left unaltered. Under what circumstances would the Reserved fields NOT be ignored on reception? |
2025-02-25
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38 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Roman Danyliw has been changed to No Objection from Discuss |
2025-02-20
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38 | Jenny Bui | IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation::AD Followup from IESG Evaluation |
2025-02-19
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38 | Amanda Baber | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed |
2025-02-19
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38 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-38.txt |
2025-02-19
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38 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2025-02-19
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38 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2025-02-19
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37 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot discuss] ** Section 13.4 describes a registry and associated values, but then also says “IANA does not need to maintain this registry.” What is … [Ballot discuss] ** Section 13.4 describes a registry and associated values, but then also says “IANA does not need to maintain this registry.” What is the purpose of this sub-section if the entirety of Section 13 is guidance to IANA? Have I misunderstood what that there isn’t an action for IANA? |
2025-02-19
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37 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot comment] Thank you to Reese Enghardt for the GENART review. ** As a process check, I was surprised to see that there wasn’t an … [Ballot comment] Thank you to Reese Enghardt for the GENART review. ** As a process check, I was surprised to see that there wasn’t an IETF LC or telechat review assigned from RTGDIR, OPSDIR, or SECDIR for this document. ** What’s the experiment to motivate the experimental status? What does success look like? ** idnits reports: == The document seems to lack the recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if it appears to use RFC 2119 keywords -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? ** Section 2. Editorial. Check this long list of acronyms for actual use in this document. -- I spot checked PHP and didn’t find it used -- I spot checked iSN and it’s used exactly once; why use an acronym then? -- Acronyms appear to be defined here but then again in the text. Why twice? For example, Ultimate Hop Pop (UHP) is expanded here but also in Section 8.3; BN is expanded here and then again in the definition of Tunnel Domain in this same section. ** Section 2.1. Editorial. Consider if you need to define “greenfield” and “brownfield” networks in this section and couldn’t do it inline. The terms are used exactly once in a single paragraph in Section 1. You’ve already read the term before you even get to their definition in Section 2.1 and they are never used again. ** Section 4.3 Reserved: 2-octet reserved bits field. This field MUST be set to zero on transmission. This field SHOULD be ignored on reception, and MUST be left unaltered. Under what circumstances would the Reserved fields NOT be ignored on reception? |
2025-02-19
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37 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded for Roman Danyliw |
2025-02-19
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37 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - Actions Needed |
2025-02-19
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37 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-37.txt |
2025-02-19
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37 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2025-02-19
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37 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2025-02-19
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36 | Jim Guichard | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jim Guichard |
2025-02-18
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36 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | [Ballot comment] Thanks for working on this document. Thanks to Olivier Bonaventure the early TSVART review. Section 11.4 and 11.5 are good addition to this … [Ballot comment] Thanks for working on this document. Thanks to Olivier Bonaventure the early TSVART review. Section 11.4 and 11.5 are good addition to this document. |
2025-02-18
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36 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Zaheduzzaman Sarker |
2025-02-18
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36 | Deb Cooley | [Ballot comment] Many thanks to Magnus Nyström for his three secdir reviews. Section 14, para 1: The 'walled garden' approach is not mentioned anywhere else … [Ballot comment] Many thanks to Magnus Nyström for his three secdir reviews. Section 14, para 1: The 'walled garden' approach is not mentioned anywhere else in the draft. From the Yoav Nir's secdir review of the idr-bgp-car draft (where similar language was removed): " a) Does the security text provide an adequate description of the formation of the "walled garden" via BGP TCP security, address considerations, preventing DOS service attacks, and strong BGP security (BGP origin and BGPsec). b) does the security text provide an adequate description of how to detect if traffic goes outside of the "walled garden"? " |
2025-02-18
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36 | Deb Cooley | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Deb Cooley |
2025-02-10
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36 | Gunter Van de Velde | [Ballot comment] I have been following and reading the draft during its lifecycle in the WG |
2025-02-10
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36 | Gunter Van de Velde | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Gunter Van de Velde |
2025-02-09
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36 | Erik Kline | [Ballot comment] # Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-36 CC @ekline * comment syntax: - https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md * "Handling Ballot Positions": - https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ ## Comments … [Ballot comment] # Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-36 CC @ekline * comment syntax: - https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md * "Handling Ballot Positions": - https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ ## Comments ### S4 * In SR Policy terms, color is a non-zero 32-bit integer (RFC 9256 S2.1). Is the Transport Class ID similarly constrained to be non-zero? If so, that should probably be state here (in/around the last paragraph, perhaps). Aha, I see text in S4.3 and S7.9 about zero being reserved for "best effort". Seems like there could be some text somewhere (anywhere) warning the SR-Policy-aware reader of the subtlety here. ## Nits ### S3 * "between SN1 and PE11" -> "between SN11 and PE11" ### Appendix C * "produced by networking industry" -> "produced by the networking industry" ### Appendix C.1 * "and SRv6 SID are planned" -> "and SRv6 SIDs are planned" |
2025-02-09
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36 | Erik Kline | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Erik Kline |
2025-02-07
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36 | David Dong | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed |
2025-02-07
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36 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA - Not OK |
2025-02-07
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36 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-36.txt |
2025-02-07
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36 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2025-02-07
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36 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2025-02-07
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35 | John Scudder | Ballot has been issued |
2025-02-07
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35 | John Scudder | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for John Scudder |
2025-02-07
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35 | John Scudder | Created "Approve" ballot |
2025-02-07
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35 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead |
2025-02-07
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35 | John Scudder | Ballot writeup was changed |
2025-02-07
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35 | (System) | IESG state changed to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead from In Last Call |
2025-02-06
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35 | David Dong | IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: IANA has completed its review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-35. If any part of this review is inaccurate, please let us know. IANA has a question … IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: IANA has completed its review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-35. If any part of this review is inaccurate, please let us know. IANA has a question about one of the actions requested in the IANA Considerations section of this document. The IANA understands that, upon approval of this document, there are seven actions which we must complete. First, in the SAFI Values registry in the Subsequent Address Family Identifiers (SAFI) Parameters registry group located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/safi-namespace/ the existing early registration for: Value: 76 Description: Classful Transport SAFI will have its reference changed to [ RFC-to-be ]. Second, in the BGP Transitive Extended Community Types in the Border Gateway Protocol (BGP) Extended Communities registry group located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities/ the existing early registration for: Type Value: 0x0a Name: Transport Class will have its reference changed to [ RFC-to-be ]. Third, in the BGP Non-Transitive Extended Community Types also in the Border Gateway Protocol (BGP) Extended Communities registry group located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities/ the existing early registration for: Type Value: 0x4a Name: Non-Transitive Transport Class will have its reference changed to [ RFC-to-be ]. Fourth, a new registry is to be created called the Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types registry. The new registry will be located in the Border Gateway Protocol (BGP) Extended Communities registry group located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities/ The registry procedure for the new registry will be: Range Registration Procedure ------+----------------------- 0x00-0xBF First Come First Served 0xC0-0xFF IETF Review The reference for the new registry will be [ RFC-to-be ]. There is a single initial registration in the new registry as follows: Sub-Type Value: 0x02 Name: Route Target Reference: [ RFC-to-be ] A note will be added to the top of the registry with the following text: This registry contains values of the second octet (the "Sub-Type" field) of an extended community when the value of the first octet (the "Type" field) is 0x0a. Fifth, a new registry is to be created called the Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types registry. The new registry will be located in the Border Gateway Protocol (BGP) Extended Communities registry group located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities/ The registry procedure for the new registry will be: Range Registration Procedure ------+----------------------- 0x00-0xBF First Come First Served 0xC0-0xFF IETF Review The reference for the new registry will be [ RFC-to-be ]. There is a single initial registration in the new registry as follows: Sub-Type Value: 0x02 Name: Route Target Reference: [ RFC-to-be ] A note will be added to the top of the registry with the following text: This registry contains values of the second octet (the "Sub-Type" field) of an extended community when the value of the first octet (the "Type" field) is 0x4a. Sixth, in the Sub-TLVs for TLV Types 1, 16, and 21 sub-registry of the TLVs registry on the Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Label Switched Paths (LSPs) Ping Parameters registry page located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/mpls-lsp-ping-parameters/ the existing early registrations for: Sub-Type: 31744 Sub-TLV Name: IPv4 BGP Classful Transport Sub-Type: 31745 Sub-TLV Name: IPv6 BGP Classful Transport will be made permanent and their references changed to [ RFC-to-be ]. Seventh, Section 13.4 refers to a registry for Transport Class IDs. IANA Question --> Section 13.4 says, "IANA does not need to maintain this registry." However, it is not clear if the registry (and it's parent registry group) should be created on the IANA Matrix at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/ Should this new registry be created with a note that all future Transport Class IDs will be allocated by Private Use as defined in [RFC8126)? We understand that these seven actions are the only ones required to be completed upon approval of this document. NOTE: The actions requested in this document will not be completed until the document has been approved for publication as an RFC. This message is meant only to confirm the list of actions that will be performed. For definitions of IANA review states, please see: https://datatracker.ietf.org/help/state/draft/iana-review Thank you, David Dong IANA Services Sr. Specialist |
2025-02-06
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35 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Not OK from IANA - Review Needed |
2025-02-03
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35 | Reese Enghardt | Request for Last Call review by GENART Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: Reese Enghardt. Sent review to list. |
2025-01-24
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35 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-35.txt |
2025-01-24
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35 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2025-01-24
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35 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2025-01-24
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34 | John Scudder | Changed consensus to Yes from Unknown |
2025-01-24
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34 | Jean Mahoney | Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Reese Enghardt |
2025-01-24
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34 | Jenny Bui | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Review Needed |
2025-01-24
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34 | Jenny Bui | The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2025-02-07): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: balajir@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct@ietf.org, dreshma@juniper.net … The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2025-02-07): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: balajir@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct@ietf.org, dreshma@juniper.net, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, idr-chairs@ietf.org, idr@ietf.org, ietf@nop.hu, israel.means@att.com, jgs@juniper.net, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, mrajesh@juniper.net, shares@ndzh.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net Reply-To: last-call@ietf.org Sender: Subject: Last Call: (BGP Classful Transport Planes) to Experimental RFC The IESG has received a request from the Inter-Domain Routing WG (idr) to consider the following document: - 'BGP Classful Transport Planes' as Experimental RFC The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2025-02-07. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Abstract This document specifies a mechanism referred to as "Intent Driven Service Mapping". The mechanism uses BGP to express intent based association of overlay routes with underlay routes having specific Traffic Engineering (TE) characteristics satisfying a certain Service Level Agreement (SLA). This is achieved by defining new constructs to group underlay routes with sufficiently similar TE characteristics into identifiable classes (called "Transport Classes"), that overlay routes use as an ordered set to resolve reachability (Resolution Schemes) towards service endpoints. These constructs can be used, for example, to realize the "IETF Network Slice" defined in TEAS Network Slices framework. Additionally, this document specifies protocol procedures for BGP that enable dissemination of service mapping information in a network that may span multiple cooperating administrative domains. These domains may be administered either by the same provider or by closely coordinating providers. A new BGP address family that leverages RFC 4364 ("BGP/MPLS IP Virtual Private Networks (VPNs)" procedures and follows RFC 8277 ("Using BGP to Bind MPLS Labels to Address Prefixes") NLRI encoding is defined to enable each advertised underlay route to be identified by its class. This new address family is called "BGP Classful Transport", a.k.a., BGP CT. The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/ The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D: https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/6057/ https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/6058/ https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/4845/ https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/4340/ https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/4759/ https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/5562/ https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/5563/ |
2025-01-24
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34 | Jenny Bui | IESG state changed to In Last Call from Last Call Requested |
2025-01-24
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34 | Jenny Bui | Last call announcement was generated |
2025-01-23
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34 | John Scudder | Last call was requested |
2025-01-23
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34 | John Scudder | Last call announcement was generated |
2025-01-23
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34 | John Scudder | Ballot approval text was generated |
2025-01-23
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34 | John Scudder | Ballot writeup was generated |
2025-01-23
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34 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup |
2025-01-23
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34 | (System) | Changed action holders to John Scudder (IESG state changed) |
2025-01-23
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34 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised I-D Needed |
2025-01-23
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34 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-34.txt |
2025-01-23
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34 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2025-01-23
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34 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2025-01-23
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33 | Cindy Morgan | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2025-02-20 |
2025-01-17
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33 | John Scudder | See https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZSergNshZc35pV6NSpE9XLzUJvE/ |
2025-01-17
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33 | (System) | Changed action holders to Kaliraj Vairavakkalai, Natrajan Venkataraman (IESG state changed) |
2025-01-17
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33 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation::Revised I-D Needed from AD Evaluation |
2024-10-18
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33 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation from Publication Requested |
2024-04-26
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33 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Shepherd's note to AD note: Please review … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Shepherd's note to AD note: Please review the security section first and consider the issues for both CAR and CT. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY Shepherd's follow-up: All NITs resolved by -30 OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ Shepherd's review: All Nits resolved by -30. SEC-DIR Review: Authors resolved in -30, except for NIT email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9)) Resolved by -32, but AD should look at the github issue #69 (closed issue) https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - On the Right Track. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/hml_nr-BAbzXk7RnKCCy-EVXLuw/ TSV-DIR: From the viewpoint of the transport area, there are two important points that need to be discussed when considering such tunnels: 1) MTU problems if the tunnel configurations differ, and 2) DSCP issues if DSPC is used to provide non-best effort services. Status: -30 contained fixes for TSV-DIR, but no 2nd review. Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: CT updated based on feedback (missing link in IDR Mail) Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7)Final Checks a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check d) RFC9012 issues 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? All items addressed, but these are the key points RTG-DIR and OPS-IDR review examines whether these new "intent-aware" (color) are able to be created and used. The early review cycles ended with "OK with NITs". The NITs have been address (see github for tracking of NITs). The Transport area review (TSV-DIR) was only looking at whether the network was on the right path to allow intents to create "intent" (color) network-wide paths of a certain type. Applications through transport layers are the ones to signal a particular intent and need. The desired answer from TSV-DIR is "on the right track". SEC-DIR review of CT and CTv6 mentioned that these drafts look to BGP security solutions (BGPsec and Origin validation) to provide additional security without giving the details on the solutions. During an investigation of the BGPsec a few things turned up about BGPSec. The shepherd notes that RFC8374 points out that BGPsec (RFC8205) only included the AFI in the "hash" to resolve a problem (see sections 2.2.1 and 6.2.1). Section 2.2.1 includes the AFI/SAFI in Figure 8, but may assume only IPv4 (AFI=1) and IPv6 (AFI=2). Due to this unclear text, both BGP intent-based solutions (CAR and CT) merely state that BGPsec and Origin Validation could be extended. It is beyond the scope of these individual drafts to raise the wider issue of BGPsec applications for many new AFI/SAFIs. It is an an issues that needs addressing by the IDR WG. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/72 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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33 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Shepherd's note to AD note: Please review … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Shepherd's note to AD note: Please review the security section first and consider the issues for both CAR and CT. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY Shepherd's follow-up: All NITs resolved by -30 OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ Shepherd's review: All Nits resolved by -30. SEC-DIR Review: Authors resolved in -30, except for NIT email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9)) Resolved by -32, but AD should look at the github issue #69 (closed issue) https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - On the Right Track. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/hml_nr-BAbzXk7RnKCCy-EVXLuw/ TSV-DIR: From the viewpoint of the transport area, there are two important points that need to be discussed when considering such tunnels: 1) MTU problems if the tunnel configurations differ, and 2) DSCP issues if DSPC is used to provide non-best effort services. Status: -30 contained fixes for TSV-DIR, but no 2nd review. Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: CT updated based on feedback (missing link in IDR Mail) Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7)Final Checks a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check d) RFC9012 issues 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? All items addressed, but these are the key points RTG-DIR and OPS-IDR review examines whether these new "intent-aware" (color) are able to be created and used. The early review cycles ended with "OK with NITs". The NITs have been address (see github for tracking of NITs). The Transport area review (TSV-DIR) was only looking at whether the network was on the right path to allow intents to create "intent" (color) network-wide paths of a certain type. Applications through transport layers are the ones to signal a particular intent and need. The desired answer from TSV-DIR is "on the right track". SEC-DIR review of CT and CTv6 mentioned that these drafts look to BGP security solutions (BGPsec and Origin validation) to provide additional security without giving the details on the solutions. During an investigation of the BGPsec a few things turned up about BGPSec. The shepherd notes that RFC8374 points out that BGPsec (RFC8205) only included the AFI in the "hash" to resolve a problem (see sections 2.2.1 and 6.2.1). Section 2.2.1 includes the AFI/SAFI in Figure 8, but may assume only IPv4 (AFI=1) and IPv6 (AFI=2). Due to this unclear text, both BGP intent-based solutions (CAR and CT) merely state that BGPsec and Origin Validation could be extended. It is beyond the scope of these individual drafts to raise the wider issue of BGPsec applications for many new AFI/SAFIs. It is an an issues that needs addressing by the IDR WG. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/72 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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33 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] ## Document History 1. Does the working … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY Shepherd's follow-up: All NITs resolved by -30 OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ Shepherd's review: All Nits resolved by -30. SEC-DIR Review: Authors resolved in -30, except for NIT email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9)) Resolved by -32, but AD should look at the github issue #69 (closed issue) https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - On the Right Track. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/hml_nr-BAbzXk7RnKCCy-EVXLuw/ TSV-DIR: From the viewpoint of the transport area, there are two important points that need to be discussed when considering such tunnels: 1) MTU problems if the tunnel configurations differ, and 2) DSCP issues if DSPC is used to provide non-best effort services. Status: -30 contained fixes for TSV-DIR, but no 2nd review. Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: CT updated based on feedback (missing link in IDR Mail) Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7)Final Checks a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check d) RFC9012 issues 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? All items addressed, but these are the key points RTG-DIR and OPS-IDR review examines whether these new "intent-aware" (color) are able to be created and used. The early review cycles ended with "OK with NITs". The NITs have been address (see github for tracking of NITs). The Transport area review (TSV-DIR) was only looking at whether the network was on the right path to allow intents to create "intent" (color) network-wide paths of a certain type. Applications through transport layers are the ones to signal a particular intent and need. The desired answer from TSV-DIR is "on the right track". SEC-DIR review of CT and CTv6 mentioned that these drafts look to BGP security solutions (BGPsec and Origin validation) to provide additional security without giving the details on the solutions. During an investigation of the BGPsec a few things turned up about BGPSec. The shepherd notes that RFC8374 points out that BGPsec (RFC8205) only included the AFI in the "hash" to resolve a problem (see sections 2.2.1 and 6.2.1). Section 2.2.1 includes the AFI/SAFI in Figure 8, but may assume only IPv4 (AFI=1) and IPv6 (AFI=2). Due to this unclear text, both BGP intent-based solutions (CAR and CT) merely state that BGPsec and Origin Validation could be extended. It is beyond the scope of these individual drafts to raise the wider issue of BGPsec applications for many new AFI/SAFIs. It is an an issues that needs addressing by the IDR WG. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/72 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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33 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] ## Document History 1. Does the working … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY Shepherd's follow-up: All NITs resolved by -30 OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ Shepherd's review: All Nits resolved by -30. SEC-DIR Review: Authors resolved in -30, except for NIT email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9)) Resolved by -32, but AD should look at the github issue #69 (closed issue) https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - On the Right Track. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/hml_nr-BAbzXk7RnKCCy-EVXLuw/ TSV-DIR: From the viewpoint of the transport area, there are two important points that need to be discussed when considering such tunnels: 1) MTU problems if the tunnel configurations differ, and 2) DSCP issues if DSPC is used to provide non-best effort services. Status: -30 contained fixes for TSV-DIR, but no 2nd review. Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: CT updated based on feedback (missing link in IDR Mail) Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7)Final Checks a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check d) RFC9012 issues 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? All items addressed, but these are the key points RTG-DIR and OPS-IDR review examines whether these new "intent-aware" (color) are able to be created and used. The early review cycles ended with "OK with NITs". The NITs have been address (see github for tracking of NITs). The Transport area review (TSV-DIR) was only looking at whether the network was on the right path to allow intents to create "intent" (color) network-wide paths of a certain type. Applications through transport layers are the ones to signal a particular intent and need. The desired answer from TSV-DIR is "on the right track". SEC-DIR review of CT and CTv6 mentioned that these drafts look to BGP security solutions (BGPsec and Origin validation) to provide additional security without giving the details on the solutions. During an investigation of the BGPsec a few things turned up about BGPSec. The shepherd notes that RFC8374 points out that BGPsec (RFC8205) only included the AFI in the "hash" to resolve a problem (see sections 2.2.1 and 6.2.1). Section 2.2.1 includes the AFI/SAFI in Figure 8, but may assume only IPv4 (AFI=1) and IPv6 (AFI=2). Due to this unclear text, both BGP intent-based solutions (CAR and CT) merely state that BGPsec and Origin Validation could be extended. It is beyond the scope of these individual drafts to raise the wider issue of BGPsec applications for many new AFI/SAFIs. It is an an issues that needs addressing by the IDR WG. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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33 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) Check on Updates for … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) Check on Updates for RFC9012 - document in github ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY Shepherd's follow-up: All NITs resolved by -30 OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ Shepherd's review: All Nits resolved by -30. SEC-DIR Review: Authors resolved in -30, except for NIT email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9)) Resolved by -32, but AD should look at the github issue #69 (closed issue) https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - On the Right Track. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/hml_nr-BAbzXk7RnKCCy-EVXLuw/ TSV-DIR: From the viewpoint of the transport area, there are two important points that need to be discussed when considering such tunnels: 1) MTU problems if the tunnel configurations differ, and 2) DSCP issues if DSPC is used to provide non-best effort services. Status: -30 contained fixes for TSV-DIR, but no 2nd review. Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: CT updated based on feedback (missing link in IDR Mail) Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7)Final Checks a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check d) RFC9012 issues 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? All items addressed, but these are the key points RTG-DIR and OPS-IDR review examines whether these new "intent-aware" (color) are able to be created and used. The early review cycles ended with "OK with NITs". The NITs have been address (see github for tracking of NITs). The Transport area review (TSV-DIR) was only looking at whether the network was on the right path to allow intents to create "intent" (color) network-wide paths of a certain type. Applications through transport layers are the ones to signal a particular intent and need. The desired answer from TSV-DIR is "on the right track". SEC-DIR review of CT and CTv6 mentioned that these drafts look to BGP security solutions (BGPsec and Origin validation) to provide additional security without giving the details on the solutions. During an investigation of the BGPsec a few things turned up about BGPSec. The shepherd notes that RFC8374 points out that BGPsec (RFC8205) only included the AFI in the "hash" to resolve a problem (see sections 2.2.1 and 6.2.1). Section 2.2.1 includes the AFI/SAFI in Figure 8, but may assume only IPv4 (AFI=1) and IPv6 (AFI=2). Due to this unclear text, both BGP intent-based solutions (CAR and CT) merely state that BGPsec and Origin Validation could be extended. It is beyond the scope of these individual drafts to raise the wider issue of BGPsec applications for many new AFI/SAFIs. It is an an issues that needs addressing by the IDR WG. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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32 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Shepherd's final check list: 1) Check on … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Shepherd's final check list: 1) Check on Updates for RFC9012 - document in github 2) Print final copy of the shepherd write-up Note for AD review: Please read SEC-DIR review and SEC-DIR as first step. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY Shepherd's follow-up: All NITs resolved by -30 OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ Shepherd's review: All Nits resolved by -30. SEC-DIR Review: Authors resolved in -30, except for NITs. email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9)) Resolved by -32, but AD should look at the github issue #69 (closed issue) https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - On the Right Track. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/hml_nr-BAbzXk7RnKCCy-EVXLuw/ TSV-DIR: From the viewpoint of the transport area, there are two important points that need to be discussed when considering such tunnels: 1) MTU problems if the tunnel configurations differ, and 2) DSCP issues if DSPC is used to provide non-best effort services. Status: -30 contained fixes for TSV-DIR, but no 2nd review. Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: CT updated based on feedback (missing link in IDR Mail) Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Early Reviews by RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR. 8) NITS run on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct a) Line length problem - this is tools error. b) Additional RFC (RFC6811 and RFC9256) without links RFC6811 - relates to the SEC-DIR review. It would be good to discuss the security review with the AD before adding a pointer to this in the text. RFC9256 - Segment Routing Policy Architecture Again, I agree with the authors that RFC9256 should be mentioned. It would be helpful to know if the AD wishes this reference in a particular place. out-of-date draft: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color-02 This will be updated in the next revision. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? All items addressed, but these are the key points RTG-DIR and OPS-IDR review examines whether these new "intent-aware" (color) are able to be created and used. The early review cycles ended with "OK with NITs". The NITs have been address (see github for tracking of NITs). The Transport area review (TSV-DIR) was only looking at whether the network was on the right path to allow intents to create "intent" (color) network-wide paths of a certain type. Applications through transport layers are the ones to signal a particular intent and need. The desired answer from TSV-DIR is "on the right track". SEC-DIR review of CT and CTv6 mentioned that these drafts look to BGP security solutions (BGPsec and Origin validation) to provide additional security without giving the details on the solutions. During an investigation of the BGPsec a few things turned up about BGPSec. The shepherd notes that RFC8374 points out that BGPsec (RFC8205) only included the AFI in the "hash" to resolve a problem (see sections 2.2.1 and 6.2.1). Section 2.2.1 includes the AFI/SAFI in Figure 8, but may assume only IPv4 (AFI=1) and IPv6 (AFI=2). Due to this unclear text, both BGP intent-based solutions (CAR and CT) merely state that BGPsec and Origin Validation could be extended. It is beyond the scope of these individual drafts to raise the wider issue of BGPsec applications for many new AFI/SAFIs. It is an an issues that needs addressing by the IDR WG. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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32 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) Check 2) Check on … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) Check 2) Check on Updates for RFC9012 - document in github 3) Print final copy of the shepherd write-up ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY Shepherd's follow-up: All NITs resolved by -30 OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ Shepherd's review: All Nits resolved by -30. SEC-DIR Review: Authors resolved in -30, except for NIT email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9)) Resolved by -32, but AD should look at the github issue #69 (closed issue) https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - On the Right Track. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/hml_nr-BAbzXk7RnKCCy-EVXLuw/ TSV-DIR: From the viewpoint of the transport area, there are two important points that need to be discussed when considering such tunnels: 1) MTU problems if the tunnel configurations differ, and 2) DSCP issues if DSPC is used to provide non-best effort services. Status: -30 contained fixes for TSV-DIR, but no 2nd review. Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: CT updated based on feedback (missing link in IDR Mail) Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? All items addressed, but these are the key points RTG-DIR and OPS-IDR review examines whether these new "intent-aware" (color) are able to be created and used. The early review cycles ended with "OK with NITs". The NITs have been address (see github for tracking of NITs). The Transport area review (TSV-DIR) was only looking at whether the network was on the right path to allow intents to create "intent" (color) network-wide paths of a certain type. Applications through transport layers are the ones to signal a particular intent and need. The desired answer from TSV-DIR is "on the right track". SEC-DIR review of CT and CTv6 mentioned that these drafts look to BGP security solutions (BGPsec and Origin validation) to provide additional security without giving the details on the solutions. During an investigation of the BGPsec a few things turned up about BGPSec. The shepherd notes that RFC8374 points out that BGPsec (RFC8205) only included the AFI in the "hash" to resolve a problem (see sections 2.2.1 and 6.2.1). Section 2.2.1 includes the AFI/SAFI in Figure 8, but may assume only IPv4 (AFI=1) and IPv6 (AFI=2). Due to this unclear text, both BGP intent-based solutions (CAR and CT) merely state that BGPsec and Origin Validation could be extended. It is beyond the scope of these individual drafts to raise the wider issue of BGPsec applications for many new AFI/SAFIs. It is an an issues that needs addressing by the IDR WG. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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32 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) Update github issues - … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) Update github issues - SEC-DIR, NITS, 2) Check on Updates for RFC9012 - document in github 3) Print final copy of the shepherd write-up ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: Authors resolved in -30, except for NIT email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9), but no response as of 4/17. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - On the Right Track. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/hml_nr-BAbzXk7RnKCCy-EVXLuw/ TSV-DIR: From the viewpoint of the transport area, there are two important points that need to be discussed when considering such tunnels: - MTU problems if the tunnel configurations differ - DSCP issues if DSPC is used to provide non-best effort services. Status: -30 contained fixes for TSV-DIR, but no 2nd review. (change on 3/18). Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: CT updated based on feedback (missing link in IDR Mail) Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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31 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) Check on Updates for … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) Check on Updates for RFC9012 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: Authors resolved in -30, except for NIT email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9), but no response as of 4/17. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - On the Right Track. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/hml_nr-BAbzXk7RnKCCy-EVXLuw/ TSV-DIR: From the viewpoint of the transport area, there are two important points that need to be discussed when considering such tunnels: - MTU problems if the tunnel configurations differ - DSCP issues if DSPC is used to provide non-best effort services. Status: -30 contained fixes for TSV-DIR, but no 2nd review. (change on 3/18). Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: CT updated based on feedback (missing link in IDR Mail) Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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31 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) link to Dhruv's review … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) link to Dhruv's review of CT drafts (need to dig) 2) Waiting response on SecDir review of -30 (sent 4/9) 3) Check on Updates for RFC9012 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: Authors resolved in -30, except for NIT email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9), but no response as of 4/17. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - On the Right Track. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/hml_nr-BAbzXk7RnKCCy-EVXLuw/ TSV-DIR: From the viewpoint of the transport area, there are two important points that need to be discussed when considering such tunnels: - MTU problems if the tunnel configurations differ - DSCP issues if DSPC is used to provide non-best effort services. Status: -30 contained fixes for TSV-DIR, but no 2nd review. (change on 3/18). Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: CT updated based on feedback (missing link in IDR Mail) Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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31 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) link to Dhruv's review … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) link to Dhruv's review of CT drafts (need to dig) 2) Waiting response on SecDir review of -30 (sent 4/9) 3) Check on Updates for RFC9012 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Authors resolved in -30, except for NIT email link: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fYulGchhf6oWPWhVWHxqx6WNupI/ github: assigned github issue #69 github link:https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69 Status: Shepherd awaiting clarification email (sent 4/9), but no response as of 4/17. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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30 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) link to Dhruv's review … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) link to Dhruv's review of CT drafts (need to dig) 2) Waiting response on SecDir review of -30 (sent 4/9) 3) Check on Updates for RFC9012 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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30 | Magnus Nyström | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Magnus Nyström. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
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30 | Magnus Nyström | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Magnus Nyström. |
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30 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Magnus Nyström |
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30 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 3) link to Dhruv's review … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 3) link to Dhruv's review of CT drafts 4) Ask for SecDir review of -30 ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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30 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 3) link to Dhruv's review … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 3) link to Dhruv's review of CT drafts 4) Resolve SEC-DIR issues (github issue 69) 5) Pending Early Directorate reviews: IANA (github issue 63) and TSV-DIR review 6) Check on nits issues (github issue 70) ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Uh39xPb20FTsmORAjgRlce8bwfc/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) IPR - Xiahou Xu … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) IPR - Xiahou Xu - IPR statement for -27, Gyan statement on IPR 2) Implementation report clarified - where SRv6 is concerned. 3) link to Dhruv's review of CT drafts 4) Resolve SEC-DIR issues (github issue 69) 5) Pending Early Directorate reviews: IANA (github issue 63) and TSV-DIR review 6) Check on nits issues (github issue 70) 7) Ask RTG-AD for normative/non-normative check. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/rJC4O726QqUoDEqFTffOF9EvX_U/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) IPR - Xiahou Xu … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) IPR - Xiahou Xu - IPR statement for -27, Gyan statement on IPR 2) Implementation report clarified - where SRv6 is concerned. 3) link to Dhruv's review of CT drafts 4) Resolve SEC-DIR issues (github issue 69) 5) Pending Early Directorate reviews: IANA (github issue 63) and TSV-DIR review 6) Check on nits issues (github issue 70) 7) Ask RTG-AD for normative/non-normative check. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) IPR - Xiahou Xu … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) IPR - Xiahou Xu - IPR statement for -27, Gyan statement on IPR 2) Implementation report clarified - where SRv6 is concerned. 3) link to Dhruv's review of CT drafts 4) Resolve SEC-DIR issues (github issue 69) 5) Pending Early Directorate reviews: IANA (github issue 63) and TSV-DIR review 6) Check on nits issues (github issue 70) 7) Ask RTG-AD for normative/non-normative check. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) IPR - Xiahou Xu … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) IPR - Xiahou Xu - IPR statement for -27, Gyan statement on IPR 2) implementation report for CT-SRv6 3) link to Dhruv's review of CT drafts 4) Resolve SEC-DIR issues (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) 5) Pending: IANA and TSV-DIR review ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. 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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) IPR - Xiahou Xu … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: 1) IPR - Xiahou Xu - IPR statement for -27, Gyan statement on IPR 2) implementation report for CT-SRv6 3) link to Dhruv's review of CT drafts 4) Resolve SEC-DIR issues (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) 5) Pending: IANA and TSV-DIR review ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-18) "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - (-19) 6 problems + 4 questions (must be resolved) TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -03 Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eh3IdjyMjJVQSwOx2CD95iKg1-4/ CoAuthors: Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ei8WY3sVYAhnECr1w40Y8C5zQ-Y/ Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/NSxyfq98238jOIllMgIrBF54aeg/ Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [2nd WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FWf7jsy7mFJDiW3stAWeJ_DU0oU/ Contributors: Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/SfJQVDClw7y8vXYoG8wlLKRgyLQ/ Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/4T2BDGnaZUmtWUPjFVIOAFL-ZoI/ Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/M1c3trnvMiVn3_QQU9FqbkuvHA0/ Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/lhBotT08JzICX-uPUfhMUSA7uzc/ Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [from 1st WG LC] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DBuobWpmj_ce0IOUWDTZU7m095E/ Contributor for [-12] missing in [-27] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) - dropped as of [-11] before 1st WG LC. Missing IPR statement. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 2 editors on front page. All IPR statements good for -27 except for Xiahou Xu. issue with Gyan Mishra - no longer contributor after -11 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) [pending] NITS - see github reference (see https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/70) - 2 lines over 72 length, but it seems the tools. -(2477): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding -(2501): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. Each of IDR chairs have walked through Normative and Informative references. [Pending - Asking for RTG-AD (John Scudder) to do early review on normative/non-normative references. ] Note: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 references an informative reference: BGP-CT-UPDATE-PACKING-TEST] which is a document on the IETF IDR WG Github. Read access is allowed for all. see: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/1a75d4d10d4df0f1fd7dcc041c2c868704b092c7/update-packing-test-results.txt 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are freely available and published RFCs. See comment above regarding 1 informative reference at IETF IDR WG github.; 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references that are not at RFC level. Informative references are RFCs, drafts, or one github reference (see #15 above). 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? not applicable. If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.- not applicable. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. yes, confirmed Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Yes, confirmed. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). yes, Confirmed. [pending] Due to a complexity, an early request to review IANA allocation has been sent. New registries: Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry Non-Transitive Transport Class Extended Community Sub-Types Registry BGP CT Parameters 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. No IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review are listed in this draft. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: a) implementation report for ct-srv6 … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: a) implementation report for ct-srv6 b) link to Dhruv's review of CT draft. c) ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - see above, final one "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - see above, final one "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - 6 problems + 4 questions for review - needs to be resolved. TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. IANA Early review: IANA early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 IANA section. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang in the document 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No automated checking ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Checks completed: 1) Pre-Adoption by Jeff Haas and discussion among chairs 2) Careful Adoption review resulted in a list of issues that needed to be resolved: (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CAR-CTAdoption) 3) Adoption call issues added to github for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27 (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) 4) 1st WG LC - Prior to 1st WG LC: Shepherd verified that issues were addressed and early Early Directorate reviews requested, 1st WG LC: Shepherd report written (see https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/CT-WGLC and https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. 5) 2nd WG LC Prior to 2nd WG LC: a) Shepherd verified that issues raised in 1st WG LC were addressed. b) Review provided by IDR Chair team: Jie Dong, Keyur Patel, and Jeff Haas. c) IDR Chair team resolutions were made - via email and meetings of technical issues. d) Early reviews requested (RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, SEC-DIR, and TSV-DIR) open reviews: resolution of SEC-DIR and lack of TSV-DIR d) Meeting with CAR and CT editor teams during 2nd WGLC e) two interims in 2024 - January 29 and February 26 - review status 6) Post WG LC a) Shepherd reports with editorial nits [resolved] b) Shepherd report loaded into github as issues [Resolved] c) Review issues with document editors before -27 submission [Resolved] b) IANA review of -27 requested. [pending] c) github issue loaded with Security Directorate review comments 7) Current waiting status: a) Response from IANA review of -27 b) Response from SEC-DIR resolution check c) final NITS check 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? See Early Review comments. For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 3/12/2024 status: Pending resolution: SEC-DIR Early review resolution - check text + SEC-DIR Reviewer (https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/69) Pending reviews: TSV Early Review, IANA early review, IETF-119 RTG-AD discussion 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Experimental draft. Why? IDR cannot settle on a single solution for Intent-based (Color) routing. The top 2 solutions are forwarded as experimental drafts to allow operational deployment to give feedback. Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Yes . 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC -26 [-27] Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) Authors: Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) [missing] Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [missing] Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) [missing] Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) [missing] Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) [missing] Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) [missing] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) [missing] Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) [missing] Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [missing]. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. 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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: a) implementation report for ct-srv6 … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: a) implementation report for ct-srv6 b) link to Dhruv's review of CT draft. c) ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Directorate Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - see above, final one "has nits" OPS-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - see above, final one "has nits" SEC-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews - 6 problems + 4 questions for review - needs to be resolved. TSV-DIR review: 1 early review requested - no response. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) Authors: Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) [missing] Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [missing] Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) [missing] Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) [missing] Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) [missing] Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) [missing] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) [missing] Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) [missing] Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [missing]. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. 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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: a) implementation report for ct-srv6 … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Need information: a) implementation report for ct-srv6 b) link to Dhruv's review of CT draft. c) ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. During 2nd WG LC: Concern on Split of CT drafts into 3 drafts: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Robert Raszuk raised a Concern regarding the splitting of the CT draft into three parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). Robert objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09, so Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft was not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. ------ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 has normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. Dependencies with PCE Dhruv Dhody reviewed the interactions with PCE drafts. He sent comments to the CT authors. CT authors updated their drafts with changes. Dependencies with BESS: BESS chairs were queried about reviewing the CAR and CT drafts. No direct information was received. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. ## Reviews: (tracked by Datatracker) with comments from shepherd RTG-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09 (Med Boucadair)- status: has issues, excellent review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/aawFfvd29zERSBK4ydDDhxEQGRw Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Jonathan Hardwick) - status: has nits, good review https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/FLGmC0-ufqPsZpH_LmgL2eWmWhY OPS-DIR reviews: Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12 (Bo Wu) - status: Has issues, Quality: good review, 4 issues mentioned https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12-opsdir-early-wu-2023-08-03/ Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (Bo Wu) - status: has nits, Quality: good review, 2nd review by the same reviewer as -12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-opsdir-early-wu-2024-01-05/ SEC-DIR Review: comments from the WG chair on SEC-DIR early review: Intent (Color) could have security issues in this draft. The service data (customer data) is being tracked by intent and placed over service quality tunnels. In one view, it is just more layering. In an alternate view, the color exposes some abstract qualities of the network. Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Issues stated: 1) Why does the definition of "new AFI/SAFI to pass routes" not change any underlying security characteristics? This should be explained better. 2) Where is it stated in the document - "Mechanisms described in this document follow a "Walled Garden" approach? This should be explained better. 3) It is stated that BGP origin validation "could" be used to "increase assurance" that information has not been falsified. Firstly, "could" does not say much to an implementer. Is this intended to be "SHOULD"? What's the risk of not using origin validation? And conversely, what assurance is given if BGP origin validation is not used (the "increased assurance" part). 4) It is stated that: "In order to mitigate the risk of the diversion of traffic from its intended destination, [the] existing BGPsec solution could be extended, and supported for this SAFI." What does "could" mean here? 5) It is also stated that "as long as filtering [and other measures] are applied diligently, "risk of [traffic diversion] is eliminated". Is this really the case? That it is entirely eliminated? 6) Not being an expert in this area, I just want to call out the following items that I ask the authors to ensure that they are covered: 1. Is there anything in here which increases the risk of dDoS attacks? 2. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks related to unintended information disclosure? 3. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to spoofing of endpoint identities etc.? 4. Do the mechanisms and constructs in this document introduce any new risks due to modification of information exchanged, e.g., between AS endpoints? Early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19 (by Magnus Nystrom)- status: has issues. Authors did not resolve -18 issues https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19-secdir-early-nystrom-2024-01-15/ Shepherd's note: Assigned github issue #69 to resolve before publication request sent to IESG. TSV-Review: (due date 3/6/2024) - no response from review Shepherd's comment for TSV-DIR: Please look at this draft from the viewpoint of having intent (color) aware customer traffic forwarded over a VPN overlay (tunnels) that forwarded over a set of intent (color) aware underlay of tunnels. Please consider the problems with tunnels in your review of this text. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Andrew mentioned he received feedback that there would be discomfort if the CAR and CT do not progress to the Experimental simultaneously. See Andrew Alston for additional details. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: (TBD) 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS before 2nd WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Received feedback from Spring chairs (Alvaro Retana) The following drafts were in the option queue: draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color draft-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04 (ct-srv6) Nothing was received from BESS. RTG-DIR reviews: 2 early reviews 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No requirement for formal review (MIB, Yang, Media type, and URI) A yang module for CT will be added to the list of Yang modules to create for BGP. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) Authors: Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) [missing] Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [missing] Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) [missing] Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) [missing] Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) [missing] Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) [missing] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) [missing] Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) [missing] Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [missing]. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. 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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Note that some numbered items contain multiple … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. 2nd WG LC of CAR/CT: This WG LC did not have a lot of CAR/CT editor discussions because the IDR Shepherding Chair had a private discussion between editors prior to the 2nd WG LC. Split discussions in 2nd WG LC: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ A Concern was raised by Robert Raszuk regarding the splitting of the CT draft into 3 parts (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6, and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr). He objected to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fwd-rr being a WG draft. The IDR chairs felt the text was in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct since version -09. Due to Robert's concerns about being surprised as WG draft were not justified. However, it does point to the value of the IDR chairs splitting this work out of the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct draft. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/29CYvVl0RnW0hJSU3il3p_cqt80/ Dependencies on Spring: a) Functional dependency - caused only theoretical scaling results Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, this WG Shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof in CT. b) Normative dependency on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids-04. There is a normative dependency on an individual draft that is waiting for adoption. The Spring chairs have been notified that IDR has a normative dependencies on draft-ietf-idr-salih-spring-srv6-inter-domain-sids. ----- Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Discomfort has been mention if the CAR and CT do not both progress to Experimental at the same time. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation report: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct Implementation of CT: Juniper, Freertg Implementation of CT-srv6: [need info] ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Reviews requested from PCE, Spring, and BESS prior to WG LC. Received reviews from PCE: [need link] Reviews not rec 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) Authors: Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) [missing] Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [missing] Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) [missing] Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) [missing] Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) [missing] Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) [missing] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) [missing] Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) [missing] Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [missing]. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. 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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Note that some numbered items contain multiple … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [see RFC4858 for details] Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki and the IDR github repository: ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues Post 2nd WG LC Shepherd's review of -26.txt https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/7PIQx2nE0Y4d-lR7bIpTPL_TMR0/ Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ ---- 1st WG LC: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt (6/26/2023 to 7/17/2023 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ extension to 7/28: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Qr8GhdlEi8viaZxOCaWii3cA51s/ Extension to 8/01: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fC--NIU7VlyOjmNJwIcsXhXFvSk/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/CT-WGLC Email message notifying the WG of 1 WG LC Shepherd's report: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/klBUhMe9AsdflYhIYVEhSIps_lg/ --------- Adoption call results: (as part of status) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0V6pBTQyCmh3t3h9cMqxZ3N0s7Q/ Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Rough Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. Rough 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG LC for CAR and CT found the editors/authors/contributors of CAR commenting on the CT draft (Just as CT authors commented on CAR draft). In some ways, this lively debate helped find problems in the specifications. Dependencies on Spring: a) Due to a lack of adoption of the Spring Requirements document draft-hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color-03, the WG shepherd allowed the scaling results to be theoretical without proof. Alternatives for SRv6 without CAR or CT. A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted as an informational draft. This informational draft provides a way to encode intent for SRv6 by operational practices rather than a new protocol. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) Discomfort has been mention if the CAR and CT do not both progress to Experimental at the same time. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation: Juniper Implementation ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) Authors: Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) [missing] Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [missing] Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) [missing] Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) [missing] Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) [missing] Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) [missing] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) [missing] Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) [missing] Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [missing]. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. 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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858 Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858 Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ 1st WG LC: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://trac.ietf.org/trac/idr/wiki/CAR-CT%20Adoption%20call%20(7/6/2022%20to%207/27/2022) Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG remained split between CAR and CT technologies. Enough editorial and technical problems were found with both CAR and CT that a 2nd WG LC was planned. An alternative draft A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted that IDR Chairs felt there were still remaining issues prior to publication in both CAR and CT Drafts. While there 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation: Juniper Implementation ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) Authors: Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) [missing] Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [missing] Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) [missing] Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) [missing] Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) [missing] Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) [missing] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) [missing] Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) [missing] Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [missing]. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2024-03-12
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27 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858 Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858 Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? The CT progression after adoption is tracked on both the IDR Wiki Summary of calls: (in reverse time order) 2nd WG LC: 2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ud2coGDvdXYy7x-SHPSK2Onwjx4/ Status: Consensus on publication of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct and draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-srv6 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/oNY5gAcE21y1bke6tBzeb76uVo4/ 1st WG LC: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KYZbOsg2y4jcOfjV31pee5uhMjQ/ status: No consensus reached The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://trac.ietf.org/trac/idr/wiki/CAR-CT%20Adoption%20call%20(7/6/2022%20to%207/27/2022) Adoption call: Time: 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ This adoption call was preceded by the following: Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Adoption decision: The IDR chairs agree with Jeff Haas's (IDR Co-chair) summary posted on March 21, 2022, that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical but operationally different. IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental drafts. Experience in the market place will help determine which is better operationally. 1st WG LC of CAR/CT: The IDR WG remained split between CAR and CT technologies. Enough editorial and technical problems were found with both CAR and CT that a 2nd WG LC was planned. An alternative draft A third draft (draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00) was adopted that IDR Chairs felt there were still remaining issues prior to publication in both CAR and CT Drafts. While there 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation: Juniper Implementation ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: 2nd WG LC Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZL7tOk3fgqeIRM5dfKfx_GbIh2w/ Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) Authors: Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iniOhZ1BknkBhe2l8DYL5aL_lGk/ Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) [missing] Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [missing] Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) [missing] Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) [missing] Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) [missing] Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) [missing] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) [missing] Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) [missing] Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/r09fylzRRgssJqDoQnhy66qCr-g/ Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [missing]. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2024-03-12
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27 | Susan Hares | IETF WG state changed to WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up from In WG Last Call |
2024-03-04
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27 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-27.txt |
2024-03-04
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27 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2024-03-04
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27 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2024-02-20
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26 | Magnus Westerlund | Request for Early review by TSVART is assigned to Olivier Bonaventure |
2024-02-20
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26 | Magnus Westerlund | Assignment of request for Early review by TSVART to Bob Briscoe was marked no-response |
2024-02-16
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26 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-26.txt |
2024-02-16
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26 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2024-02-16
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26 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2024-02-16
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25 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-25.txt |
2024-02-16
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25 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2024-02-16
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25 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2024-02-16
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24 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-24.txt |
2024-02-16
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24 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2024-02-16
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24 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2024-02-07
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23 | Gunter Van de Velde | Closed request for Early review by OPSDIR with state 'Overtaken by Events' |
2024-02-07
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23 | Gunter Van de Velde | Assignment of request for Early review by OPSDIR to Bo Wu was marked no-response |
2024-02-01
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23 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-23.txt |
2024-02-01
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23 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2024-02-01
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23 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2024-01-26
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22 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-22.txt |
2024-01-26
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22 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2024-01-26
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22 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2024-01-23
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21 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-21.txt |
2024-01-23
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21 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2024-01-23
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21 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2024-01-21
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20 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-20.txt |
2024-01-21
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20 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2024-01-21
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20 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2024-01-15
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19 | Magnus Nyström | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Magnus Nyström. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2024-01-15
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19 | Magnus Nyström | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Magnus Nyström. |
2024-01-06
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19 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Magnus Nyström |
2024-01-05
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19 | Bo Wu | Request for Early review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Bo Wu. Sent review to list. |
2023-12-23
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19 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Magnus Nyström. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2023-12-22
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19 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-19.txt |
2023-12-22
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19 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-12-22
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19 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-12-21
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18 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Early review by OPSDIR is assigned to Bo Wu |
2023-12-20
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18 | Daniam Henriques | Closed request for Early review by RTGDIR with state 'Withdrawn': Completed by Jonathan Hardwick on 2023-12-18 |
2023-12-20
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18 | Magnus Westerlund | Request for Early review by TSVART is assigned to Bob Briscoe |
2023-12-19
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18 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by TSVART |
2023-12-19
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18 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by RTGDIR |
2023-12-19
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18 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by OPSDIR |
2023-12-19
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18 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by SECDIR |
2023-12-19
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19 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Magnus Nyström. |
2023-12-18
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18 | Jonathan Hardwick | Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Jonathan Hardwick. |
2023-12-15
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18 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Magnus Nystrom |
2023-12-15
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18 | Tero Kivinen | Closed request for Early review by SECDIR with state 'Overtaken by Events' |
2023-12-15
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18 | Tero Kivinen | Assignment of request for Early review by SECDIR to Nancy Cam-Winget was marked no-response |
2023-12-08
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18 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Early review by OPSDIR is assigned to Bo Wu |
2023-12-04
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18 | Daniam Henriques | Request for Early review by RTGDIR is assigned to Jonathan Hardwick |
2023-12-04
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18 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by RTGDIR |
2023-12-04
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18 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by OPSDIR |
2023-12-04
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18 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by SECDIR |
2023-11-05
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18 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-18.txt |
2023-11-05
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18 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-11-05
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18 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-10-20
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17 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-17.txt |
2023-10-20
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17 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-10-20
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17 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-09-22
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16 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-16.txt |
2023-09-22
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16 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-09-22
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16 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-09-21
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15 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-15.txt |
2023-09-21
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15 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-09-21
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15 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-08-21
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14 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-14.txt |
2023-08-21
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14 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-08-21
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14 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-08-14
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13 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-13.txt |
2023-08-14
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13 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-08-14
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13 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-08-03
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12 | Bo Wu | Request for Early review by OPSDIR Completed: Not Ready. Reviewer: Bo Wu. Sent review to list. |
2023-07-10
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12 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-12.txt |
2023-07-10
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12 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-07-10
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12 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-07-05
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11 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-11.txt |
2023-07-05
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11 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-07-05
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11 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-07-05
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10 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-10.txt |
2023-07-05
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10 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-07-05
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10 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-07-05
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Jenny Bui | Posted related IPR disclosure Juniper Networks, Inc.'s Statement about IPR related to draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct | |
2023-07-05
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Jenny Bui | Posted related IPR disclosure Juniper Networks, Inc.'s Statement about IPR related to draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct | |
2023-06-30
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09 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Early review by OPSDIR is assigned to Bo Wu |
2023-06-29
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09 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Nancy Cam-Winget |
2023-06-28
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09 | Mohamed Boucadair | Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Mohamed Boucadair. Sent review to list. |
2023-06-26
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09 | Haomian Zheng | Request for Early review by RTGDIR is assigned to Mohamed Boucadair |
2023-06-26
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09 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by RTGDIR |
2023-06-26
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09 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by OPSDIR |
2023-06-26
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09 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by SECDIR |
2023-06-26
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09 | Susan Hares | IETF WG state changed to In WG Last Call from WG Document |
2023-06-26
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09 | Susan Hares | Intended Status changed to Experimental from None |
2023-06-26
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09 | Susan Hares | Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net … Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net, shares@ndzh.com from israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net because the document shepherd was set |
2023-06-26
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09 | Susan Hares | Document shepherd changed to Susan Hares |
2023-06-26
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09 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-09.txt |
2023-06-26
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09 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-06-26
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09 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-06-25
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08 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-08.txt |
2023-06-25
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08 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-06-25
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08 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-06-20
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07 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-07.txt |
2023-06-20
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07 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-06-20
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07 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-06-18
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06 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-06.txt |
2023-06-18
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06 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-06-18
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06 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-06-16
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05 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-05.txt |
2023-06-16
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05 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-06-16
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05 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-06-09
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04 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-04.txt |
2023-06-09
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04 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-06-09
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04 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-04-09
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03 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-03.txt |
2023-04-09
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03 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-04-09
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03 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-03-28
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02 | Jie Dong | Added to session: IETF-116: idr Thu-0030 |
2023-03-27
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02 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-02.txt |
2023-03-27
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02 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-03-27
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02 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2023-02-15
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01 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-01.txt |
2023-02-15
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01 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2023-02-15
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01 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |
2022-10-12
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00 | Susan Hares | Added to session: IETF-115: idr Mon-1300 |
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00 | Susan Hares | Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net … Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net, shares@ndzh.com from israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net because the document shepherd was set |
2022-10-12
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00 | Susan Hares | Document shepherd changed to Susan Hares |
2022-10-12
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00 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Adoption call: Adoption call for CAR was held on 7/6/2022 to 7/27/2022 in 3 mail threads. This adoption call was preceded by the following: Presentations from IETF-108 to IETF-113 IDR interim on January 24, 2022 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2022-idr-02/session/idr) Email Discussion before IETF-113 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/e69NRd9i2aG0WUxFkShEfQHZsHo/ Note: The IDR chairs agree with the summary of Jeff Haas (IDR Co-chair) posted on March 21, 2022 - that for route resolution and route origination/propagation, BGP-CAR and BGP-CT are functionally identical, but operationally different. Part 1 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27):Informational Questions https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/FhoK04HsSy9tR7ioV7AD0Vv6Ir4/ Part 2 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/6 to 7/27): Adoption call https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/AP_ClbZgpkX6CNy7TaZiU8SMD5w/ Part 3 of CAR/CT Adoption call (7/14 to 7/27) - Please note that Part 3 has a specific format for posting. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/fTFYwF54WRHcj7PDt2t7sOQg6vo/ The shepherd's write-up on this topic is available on the IDR wiki https://trac.ietf.org/trac/idr/wiki/CAR-CT%20Adoption%20call%20(7/6/2022%20to%207/27/2022) 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? IDR WG could not come to a consensus on CAR vs. CT. IDR Chairs elected to adopt both CAR and CT drafts as experimental. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Implementation: Juniper Implementation ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Editors: Kaliraj Vairavakkali (kaliraj@juniper.net) Natrajan Venkataraman (natv@juniper.net) Authors: Israel Means (israel.means@att.com) [missing] Csaba Mates (ietf@nop.hu) [missing] Deepak J. Gowda (dgowda@extremenetworks.com) [missing] Balaji Rajagoplan (balajir@juniper.net) [missing] Reshma Das (dreshma@juniper.net) [missing] Rajesh M (mrajesh@juniper.net) [missing] Chaitanya Yadlapalli (cy098d@att.com) [missing] Gyan Mishra (gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com) [missing] Mazen Khaddam (mazen.khaddam@cox.com) [missing] Rafal Jan Szarecki (Google) [missing] Xiaohu Xu (Captialonline) [missing]. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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00 | Susan Hares | Document shepherd changed to Susan Hares |
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00 | Susan Hares | Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net … Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net, shares@ndzh.com from israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net because the document shepherd was set |
2022-10-12
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00 | Susan Hares | Document shepherd changed to Susan Hares |
2022-10-12
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00 | Susan Hares | Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net … Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net, shares@ndzh.com from israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net because the document shepherd was set |
2022-10-12
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00 | Susan Hares | Document shepherd changed to Susan Hares |
2022-10-12
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00 | Susan Hares | Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net … Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net, shares@ndzh.com from israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net because the document shepherd was set |
2022-10-12
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00 | Susan Hares | Document shepherd changed to Susan Hares |
2022-10-12
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00 | Susan Hares | Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net … Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net, shares@ndzh.com from israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net because the document shepherd was set |
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00 | Susan Hares | Document shepherd changed to Susan Hares |
2022-10-11
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00 | Susan Hares | Notification list changed to israel.means@att.com, ietf@nop.hu, dgowda@extremenetworks.com, balajir@juniper.net, dreshma@juniper.net, mrajesh@juniper.net, cy098d@att.com, gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com, mazen.khaddam@cox.com, szarecki@google.com, xiaohu.xu@capitalonline.net |
2022-09-06
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00 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | This document now replaces draft-ietf-idr-bgp-classful-transport-planes instead of None |
2022-09-06
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00 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-00.txt |
2022-09-06
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00 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai) |
2022-09-06
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00 | Kaliraj Vairavakkalai | Uploaded new revision |