BGP Colored Prefix Routing (CPR) for SRv6 based Services
draft-ietf-idr-cpr-08
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2025-02-26
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2025-02-26
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08 | (System) | IESG state changed to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent |
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08 | (System) | Announcement was received by RFC Editor |
2025-02-25
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08 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to In Progress |
2025-02-25
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08 | (System) | Removed all action holders (IESG state changed) |
2025-02-25
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08 | Cindy Morgan | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent from Approved-announcement to be sent |
2025-02-25
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08 | Cindy Morgan | IESG has approved the document |
2025-02-25
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08 | Cindy Morgan | Closed "Approve" ballot |
2025-02-25
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08 | Cindy Morgan | Ballot approval text was generated |
2025-02-24
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08 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent from Approved-announcement to be sent::AD Followup |
2025-02-23
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08 | (System) | Changed action holders to John Scudder (IESG state changed) |
2025-02-23
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08 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised I-D Needed |
2025-02-23
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08 | Jie Dong | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-cpr-08.txt |
2025-02-23
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08 | Jie Dong | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Jie Dong) |
2025-02-23
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08 | Jie Dong | Uploaded new revision |
2025-02-21
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07 | John Scudder | See https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/EE8ZSh5yCNAcdNfSIy7NLIG5LWM/ |
2025-02-21
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07 | (System) | Changed action holders to Ran Chen, Jie Dong, Haibo Wang, Ketan Talaulikar, hantao (IESG state changed) |
2025-02-21
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07 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent::Revised I-D Needed from Approved-announcement to be sent::AD Followup |
2025-02-20
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07 | Jenny Bui | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent::AD Followup from IESG Evaluation |
2025-02-19
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07 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Paul Wouters |
2025-02-19
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07 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot comment] Thank you to Vijay K. Gurbani for the GENART review. |
2025-02-19
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07 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Roman Danyliw |
2025-02-19
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07 | Susan Hares | ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did … ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Post WG LC comments Cross-WG Checks: Spring OK with -04 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iFwzRGWi4UYznXpcQ_XvyRr9NUg/ RTG-DIR Checks: Nits, resolved by -04 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-cpr-02-rtgdir-early-qu-2024-05-31/ OPS-DIR checks: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ resolution: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kxoZlXPk9TKosIJgcpl-zKYhKmQ/ Sec-DIR: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0s-TPjb1-ZNqKRf8hDHLKqZGsIg/ Resolution by authors in -04 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZpSHo0VbuQLQSkuahEJ_rA-x_X0/ No response to query (7/8) by 77/19 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Pdy_8J8BBQeANtYL1qj5A9ul3L4/ Note: Forwarding without confirmation from sec-dir reviewer WG LC 4/26 to 5/10, extended to 5/15 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bu4woD9zKcxW16XOWr9iIuol548/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/jw8vQjF2WfOz3T_KNlkOBUuIL7M/ Status: no contention, Strong support from WG participants working on SRv6 Content: CPR was discussed in the context of the CAR/CT work, CAR and CT work both considered the SRv6 and CPR discussion CAR/CT summaries on IDR Wiki: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr Technical part of WG LC discussion to review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/owrPTHXx7pIKmnnoOlxUilLpwyI/ github issue: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues Part of discussion covered: 1. In the past, Color usually belongs to private prefixes, not the locators. However, SR Policy and Flex-Algo mechanism use color on per hop routing. 2. Forwarding process uses insertion not encapsulation. (pull text here) 3. EPE Traffic engineering versus CPR per hop routing (intent based) Post WG-LC directorates RTG-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KEhb7vHaif7-QGHRGPETVMRIpYw/ Github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/2 OPS-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/1 WG adoption call: See shepherd's report in linked draft: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-wang-idr-cpr/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Since this is the last document in IDR's Intent based work (CAR, CT, CPR), the WG LC discussion had low controversy and mild participation. The debates regarding this technology were held as part of the 3 year work on Intent base work. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No appeals. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? This informational draft does not specify additional protocol changes, but provides a description of an applied use of existing protocols. These protocols were applied in 3+ existing networks. The security review points out security concerns with these issues. The authors feel the security considerations section provides enough warnings about these issues. [Note: I have not received a confirmation from the early review, but after 3 weeks of no-response from reviewer - I am submitting this to the IESG.] 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Spring review. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iFwzRGWi4UYznXpcQ_XvyRr9NUg/ Early Review by RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR and SEC-DIR (see links above) 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No formal review 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No Formal review ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Yes. This shepherd's review is bi-product of the CAR/CT discussion that occurred over 5 years. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? OPS-DIR, RTG-DIR, and SEC-DIR Note: SEC-DIR reviewer did not respond to email asking to check -04 for 1 month. Submitting this to the IESG. This shepherd will also try to discuss this at IETF-120 with other security experts. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Informational. Yes. This document does not specify any protocol additions to BGP. This documents describes use of existing features to solve the intent/color-aware problem. Therefore, the status of Informational is correct. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. See links below. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Haibo Wang https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/f6-mpnCDSXq1zLJAb6Dngd40uYI/ Jie Dong https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/aVIAYvvOKNXNlENcKjGWFGjSMpQ/ Ketan Talaulikar https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kjSAw7FZ5Rr23MXEBoFh3So2CMo/ Tao Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/1mGQqOuW5uTyqJDgTseYz0s2mxg/ Chen Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MIH3jdKsHfey6nMko8wvyQErWks/ Contributor: Xinjun Chen: ifocus.chen@huawei.com https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uTmM_Dm8dva5dDcd4J-37V-HQ3Y/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) No NITs. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. All references are in the correct category. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All Normative references are RFCs. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are RFCs. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). This informational RFC makes no request of the IANA registry. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. This informational RFC makes no request of the IANA registry. 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2025-02-19
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07 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot comment] Question #11 of the shepherd writeup doesn't explain, as asked, why Informational is the right status here. I think you could omit Section … [Ballot comment] Question #11 of the shepherd writeup doesn't explain, as asked, why Informational is the right status here. I think you could omit Section 2 (but not its subsections, obviously) and save a bit of space, as it's simply restating part of the table of contents. |
2025-02-19
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07 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Murray Kucherawy |
2025-02-18
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07 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Zaheduzzaman Sarker |
2025-02-14
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07 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - No Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed |
2025-02-13
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07 | Jim Guichard | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jim Guichard |
2025-02-12
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07 | Deb Cooley | [Ballot comment] Thanks to Brian Weis for the secdir review. Section 1, para 3: Nit: spell out the first time: LSR? PE? SAFI? (I'm sure … [Ballot comment] Thanks to Brian Weis for the secdir review. Section 1, para 3: Nit: spell out the first time: LSR? PE? SAFI? (I'm sure there are others) Section 6, para 1, last sentence: 'the impact is acceptable', the impact to what? Making the routing table too big? Or something else? I'd like to see it spelled out what the impact to security is. Section 6, para 2: Is the on-path attacker inside the trusted domain? Or are they on the Internet? If it is the case that the on-path attacker is inside the trusted domain, then that fact should be highlighted in the security considerations. |
2025-02-12
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07 | Deb Cooley | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Deb Cooley |
2025-02-08
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07 | Erik Kline | [Ballot comment] # Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-idr-cpr-07 CC @ekline * comment syntax: - https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md * "Handling Ballot Positions": - https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ ## Comments … [Ballot comment] # Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-idr-cpr-07 CC @ekline * comment syntax: - https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md * "Handling Ballot Positions": - https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ ## Comments ### S4, S6 * Just a reminder that RFC 9602 allocated a prefix for SIDs. By common agreement among participants in the "Consistent Color Domain" filters can be adjusted to default drop all 5f00::/16 traffic but permit the color prefixes in use by AS1/AS2/AS3. No obligation to incorporate this, just food for thought in case you think you might be worth a mention. ## Nits ### S2.1 * "distinguish N different intent" -> "distinguish N different intents" |
2025-02-08
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07 | Erik Kline | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Erik Kline |
2025-02-07
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07 | Linda Dunbar | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Linda Dunbar. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2025-02-07
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07 | Linda Dunbar | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Linda Dunbar. |
2025-02-07
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07 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - No Actions Needed |
2025-02-07
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07 | Jie Dong | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-cpr-07.txt |
2025-02-07
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07 | Jie Dong | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Jie Dong) |
2025-02-07
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07 | Jie Dong | Uploaded new revision |
2025-02-07
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06 | Brian Weis | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Brian Weis. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2025-02-07
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06 | Brian Weis | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Brian Weis. |
2025-02-07
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06 | John Scudder | Ballot has been issued |
2025-02-07
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06 | John Scudder | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for John Scudder |
2025-02-07
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06 | John Scudder | Created "Approve" ballot |
2025-02-07
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06 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead |
2025-02-07
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06 | John Scudder | Ballot writeup was changed |
2025-02-07
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06 | (System) | IESG state changed to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead from In Last Call |
2025-02-06
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06 | David Dong | IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: IANA has completed its review of draft-ietf-idr-cpr-06, which is currently in Last Call, and has the following comments: We understand that this … IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: IANA has completed its review of draft-ietf-idr-cpr-06, which is currently in Last Call, and has the following comments: We understand that this document doesn't require any registry actions. While it's often helpful for a document's IANA Considerations section to remain in place upon publication even if there are no actions, if the authors strongly prefer to remove it, we do not object. If this assessment is not accurate, please respond as soon as possible. For definitions of IANA review states, please see: https://datatracker.ietf.org/help/state/draft/iana-review Thank you, David Dong IANA Services Sr. Specialist |
2025-02-06
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06 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - No Actions Needed from IANA - Review Needed |
2025-01-31
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06 | David Black | Request for Last Call review by TSVART Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: David Black. Sent review to list. |
2025-01-28
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06 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Brian Weis |
2025-01-27
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06 | Vijay Gurbani | Request for Last Call review by GENART Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani. Sent review to list. |
2025-01-27
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06 | Carlos Pignataro | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Linda Dunbar |
2025-01-27
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06 | Magnus Westerlund | Request for Last Call review by TSVART is assigned to David Black |
2025-01-24
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06 | Jean Mahoney | Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Vijay Gurbani |
2025-01-24
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06 | Jenny Bui | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Review Needed |
2025-01-24
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06 | Jenny Bui | The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2025-02-07): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: draft-ietf-idr-cpr@ietf.org, idr-chairs@ietf.org, idr@ietf.org, jgs@juniper.net, shares@ndzh.com … The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2025-02-07): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: draft-ietf-idr-cpr@ietf.org, idr-chairs@ietf.org, idr@ietf.org, jgs@juniper.net, shares@ndzh.com Reply-To: last-call@ietf.org Sender: Subject: Last Call: (BGP Colored Prefix Routing (CPR) for SRv6 based Services) to Informational RFC The IESG has received a request from the Inter-Domain Routing WG (idr) to consider the following document: - 'BGP Colored Prefix Routing (CPR) for SRv6 based Services' as Informational RFC The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2025-02-07. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Abstract This document describes a mechanism to advertise IPv6 prefixes in BGP which are associated with Color Extended Communities to establish end-to-end intent-aware paths for Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6) services. Such IPv6 prefixes are called "Colored Prefixes", and this mechanism is called Colored Prefix Routing (CPR). In SRv6 networks, the Colored prefixes are the SRv6 locators associated with different intent. SRv6 services (e.g. SRv6 VPN services) with specific intent could be assigned with SRv6 Segment Identifiers (SIDs) under the corresponding SRv6 locators, which are advertised as Colored prefixes. This operational methodology allows the SRv6 service traffic to be steered into end-to-end intent-aware paths simply based on the longest prefix matching of SRv6 Service SIDs to the Colored prefixes. The existing IPv6 Address Family and Color Extended Community are reused for the advertisement of IPv6 Colored prefixes without new BGP extensions, thus this mechanism is easy to interoperate and can be deployed incrementally in multi-Autonomous System (AS) networks which belong to the same trusted domain. The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/ The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D: https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/6098/ |
2025-01-24
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06 | Jenny Bui | IESG state changed to In Last Call from Last Call Requested |
2025-01-24
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06 | Jenny Bui | Last call announcement was generated |
2025-01-24
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06 | John Scudder | Last call was requested |
2025-01-24
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06 | John Scudder | Last call announcement was generated |
2025-01-24
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06 | John Scudder | Ballot approval text was generated |
2025-01-24
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06 | John Scudder | Ballot writeup was generated |
2025-01-24
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06 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup |
2025-01-23
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06 | Jie Dong | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-cpr-06.txt |
2025-01-23
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06 | Jie Dong | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Jie Dong) |
2025-01-23
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06 | Jie Dong | Uploaded new revision |
2025-01-23
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05 | Cindy Morgan | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2025-02-20 |
2025-01-22
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05 | (System) | Changed action holders to John Scudder (IESG state changed) |
2025-01-22
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05 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised I-D Needed |
2025-01-22
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05 | Jie Dong | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-cpr-05.txt |
2025-01-22
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05 | (System) | New version approved |
2025-01-22
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05 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Haibo Wang , Jie Dong , Ketan Talaulikar , Ran Chen , hantao |
2025-01-22
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05 | Jie Dong | Uploaded new revision |
2025-01-22
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04 | John Scudder | See https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/hBeLxx8p81IC7NHyX6aTAijf-F0/ |
2025-01-22
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04 | (System) | Changed action holders to Ran Chen, Jie Dong, Haibo Wang, Ketan Talaulikar, hantao (IESG state changed) |
2025-01-22
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04 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation::Revised I-D Needed from AD Evaluation |
2024-10-28
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04 | John Scudder | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation from Publication Requested |
2024-07-19
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04 | Susan Hares | ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did … ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Post WG LC comments Cross-WG Checks: Spring OK with -04 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iFwzRGWi4UYznXpcQ_XvyRr9NUg/ RTG-DIR Checks: Nits, resolved by -04 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-cpr-02-rtgdir-early-qu-2024-05-31/ OPS-DIR checks: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ resolution: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kxoZlXPk9TKosIJgcpl-zKYhKmQ/ Sec-DIR: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0s-TPjb1-ZNqKRf8hDHLKqZGsIg/ Resolution by authors in -04 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZpSHo0VbuQLQSkuahEJ_rA-x_X0/ No response to query (7/8) by 77/19 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Pdy_8J8BBQeANtYL1qj5A9ul3L4/ Note: Forwarding without confirmation from sec-dir reviewer WG LC 4/26 to 5/10, extended to 5/15 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bu4woD9zKcxW16XOWr9iIuol548/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/jw8vQjF2WfOz3T_KNlkOBUuIL7M/ Status: no contention, Strong support from WG participants working on SRv6 Content: CPR was discussed in the context of the CAR/CT work, CAR and CT work both considered the SRv6 and CPR discussion CAR/CT summaries on IDR Wiki: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr Technical part of WG LC discussion to review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/owrPTHXx7pIKmnnoOlxUilLpwyI/ github issue: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues Part of discussion covered: 1. In the past, Color usually belongs to private prefixes, not the locators. However, SR Policy and Flex-Algo mechanism use color on per hop routing. 2. Forwarding process uses insertion not encapsulation. (pull text here) 3. EPE Traffic engineering versus CPR per hop routing (intent based) Post WG-LC directorates RTG-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KEhb7vHaif7-QGHRGPETVMRIpYw/ Github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/2 OPS-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/1 WG adoption call: See shepherd's report in linked draft: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-wang-idr-cpr/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Since this is the last document in IDR's Intent based work (CAR, CT, CPR), the WG LC discussion had low controversy and mild participation. The debates regarding this technology were held as part of the 3 year work on Intent base work. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No appeals. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? This informational draft does not specify additional protocol changes, but provides a description of an applied use of existing protocols. These protocols were applied in 3+ existing networks. The security review points out security concerns with these issues. The authors feel the security considerations section provides enough warnings about these issues. [Note: I have not received a confirmation from the early review, but after 3 weeks of no-response from reviewer - I am submitting this to the IESG.] 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Spring review. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iFwzRGWi4UYznXpcQ_XvyRr9NUg/ Early Review by RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR and SEC-DIR (see links above) 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No formal review 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No Formal review ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Yes. This shepherd's review is bi-product of the CAR/CT discussion that occurred over 5 years. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? OPS-DIR, RTG-DIR, and SEC-DIR Note: SEC-DIR reviewer did not respond to email asking to check -04 for 1 month. Submitting this to the IESG. This shepherd will also try to discuss this at IETF-120 with other security experts. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Informational. Yes. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. See links below. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Haibo Wang https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/f6-mpnCDSXq1zLJAb6Dngd40uYI/ Jie Dong https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/aVIAYvvOKNXNlENcKjGWFGjSMpQ/ Ketan Talaulikar https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kjSAw7FZ5Rr23MXEBoFh3So2CMo/ Tao Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/1mGQqOuW5uTyqJDgTseYz0s2mxg/ Chen Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MIH3jdKsHfey6nMko8wvyQErWks/ Contributor: Xinjun Chen: ifocus.chen@huawei.com https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uTmM_Dm8dva5dDcd4J-37V-HQ3Y/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) No NITs. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. All references are in the correct category. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All Normative references are RFCs. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are RFCs. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). This informational RFC makes no request of the IANA registry. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. This informational RFC makes no request of the IANA registry. 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04 | Susan Hares | IETF WG state changed to Submitted to IESG for Publication from WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up |
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04 | Susan Hares | IESG state changed to Publication Requested from I-D Exists |
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04 | (System) | Changed action holders to John Scudder (IESG state changed) |
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04 | Susan Hares | Responsible AD changed to John Scudder |
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04 | Susan Hares | Document is now in IESG state Publication Requested |
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04 | Susan Hares | Tag Other - see Comment Log cleared. |
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04 | Susan Hares | Changed consensus to Yes from Unknown |
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04 | Susan Hares | ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did … ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Post WG LC comments Cross-WG Checks: Spring OK with -04 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iFwzRGWi4UYznXpcQ_XvyRr9NUg/ RTG-DIR Checks: Nits, resolved by -04 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-cpr-02-rtgdir-early-qu-2024-05-31/ OPS-DIR checks: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ resolution: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kxoZlXPk9TKosIJgcpl-zKYhKmQ/ Sec-DIR: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0s-TPjb1-ZNqKRf8hDHLKqZGsIg/ Resolution by authors in -04 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZpSHo0VbuQLQSkuahEJ_rA-x_X0/ No response to query (7/8) by 77/19 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Pdy_8J8BBQeANtYL1qj5A9ul3L4/ Note: Forwarding without confirmation from sec-dir reviewer WG LC 4/26 to 5/10, extended to 5/15 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bu4woD9zKcxW16XOWr9iIuol548/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/jw8vQjF2WfOz3T_KNlkOBUuIL7M/ Status: no contention, Strong support from WG participants working on SRv6 Content: CPR was discussed in the context of the CAR/CT work, CAR and CT work both considered the SRv6 and CPR discussion CAR/CT summaries on IDR Wiki: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr Technical part of WG LC discussion to review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/owrPTHXx7pIKmnnoOlxUilLpwyI/ github issue: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues Part of discussion covered: 1. In the past, Color usually belongs to private prefixes, not the locators. However, SR Policy and Flex-Algo mechanism use color on per hop routing. 2. Forwarding process uses insertion not encapsulation. (pull text here) 3. EPE Traffic engineering versus CPR per hop routing (intent based) Post WG-LC directorates RTG-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KEhb7vHaif7-QGHRGPETVMRIpYw/ Github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/2 OPS-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/1 WG adoption call: See shepherd's report in linked draft: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-wang-idr-cpr/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Since this is the last document in IDR's Intent based work (CAR, CT, CPR), the WG LC discussion had low controversy and mild participation. The debates regarding this technology were held as part of the 3 year work on Intent base work. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No appeals. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? This informational draft does not specify additional protocol changes, but provides a description of an applied use of existing protocols. These protocols were applied in 3+ existing networks. The security review points out security concerns with these issues. The authors feel the security considerations section provides enough warnings about these issues. [Note: I have not received a confirmation from the early review, but after 3 weeks of no-response from reviewer - I am submitting this to the IESG.] 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Spring review. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iFwzRGWi4UYznXpcQ_XvyRr9NUg/ Early Review by RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR and SEC-DIR (see links above) 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No formal review 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No Formal review ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Yes. This shepherd's review is bi-product of the CAR/CT discussion that occurred over 5 years. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? OPS-DIR, RTG-DIR, and SEC-DIR Note: SEC-DIR reviewer did not respond to email asking to check -04 for 1 month. Submitting this to the IESG. This shepherd will also try to discuss this at IETF-120 with other security experts. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Informational. Yes. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. See links below. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Haibo Wang https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/f6-mpnCDSXq1zLJAb6Dngd40uYI/ Jie Dong https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/aVIAYvvOKNXNlENcKjGWFGjSMpQ/ Ketan Talaulikar https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kjSAw7FZ5Rr23MXEBoFh3So2CMo/ Tao Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/1mGQqOuW5uTyqJDgTseYz0s2mxg/ Chen Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MIH3jdKsHfey6nMko8wvyQErWks/ Contributor: Xinjun Chen: ifocus.chen@huawei.com https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uTmM_Dm8dva5dDcd4J-37V-HQ3Y/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) No NITs. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. All references are in the correct category. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All Normative references are RFCs. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are RFCs. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). This informational RFC makes no request of the IANA registry. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. This informational RFC makes no request of the IANA registry. 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04 | Susan Hares | Needed actions: 1. SEC-DIR - recheck with Security ADs or RTG-DIR ADs at IETF-120 (question 1, 14) ## Document History 1. Does the working group … Needed actions: 1. SEC-DIR - recheck with Security ADs or RTG-DIR ADs at IETF-120 (question 1, 14) ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Post WG LC comments Cross-WG Checks: Spring OK with -04 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iFwzRGWi4UYznXpcQ_XvyRr9NUg/ RTG-DIR Checks: Nits, resolved by -04 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-idr-cpr-02-rtgdir-early-qu-2024-05-31/ OPS-DIR checks: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ resolution: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kxoZlXPk9TKosIJgcpl-zKYhKmQ/ Sec-DIR: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/0s-TPjb1-ZNqKRf8hDHLKqZGsIg/ Resolution by authors in -04 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ZpSHo0VbuQLQSkuahEJ_rA-x_X0/ No response to query (7/8) by 77/19 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Pdy_8J8BBQeANtYL1qj5A9ul3L4/ Note: Forwarding without confirmation from sec-dir reviewer WG LC 4/26 to 5/10, extended to 5/15 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bu4woD9zKcxW16XOWr9iIuol548/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/jw8vQjF2WfOz3T_KNlkOBUuIL7M/ Status: no contention, Strong support from WG participants working on SRv6 Content: CPR was discussed in the context of the CAR/CT work, CAR and CT work both considered the SRv6 and CPR discussion CAR/CT summaries on IDR Wiki: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr Technical part of WG LC discussion to review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/owrPTHXx7pIKmnnoOlxUilLpwyI/ github issue: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues Part of discussion covered: 1. In the past, Color usually belongs to private prefixes, not the locators. However, SR Policy and Flex-Algo mechanism use color on per hop routing. 2. Forwarding process uses insertion not encapsulation. (pull text here) 3. EPE Traffic engineering versus CPR per hop routing (intent based) Post WG-LC directorates RTG-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KEhb7vHaif7-QGHRGPETVMRIpYw/ Github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/2 OPS-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/1 WG adoption call: See shepherd's report in linked draft: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-wang-idr-cpr/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Since this is the last document in IDR's Intent based work (CAR, CT, CPR), the WG LC discussion had low controversy and mild participation. The debates regarding this technology were held as part of the 3 year work on Intent base work. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No appeals. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? This informational draft does not specify additional protocol changes, but provides a description of an applied use of existing protocols. These protocols were applied in 3+ existing networks. The security review points out security concerns with these issues. The authors feel the security considerations section provides enough warnings about these issues. [Note: I have not received a confirmation from the early review, but after 3 weeks of no-response from reviewer - I am submitting this to the IESG.] 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. Spring review. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iFwzRGWi4UYznXpcQ_XvyRr9NUg/ Early Review by RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR and SEC-DIR (see links above) 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No formal review 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No Yang. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No Formal review ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Yes. This shepherd's review is bi-product of the CAR/CT discussion that occurred over 5 years. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? OPS-DIR, RTG-DIR, and SEC-DIR Note: SEC-DIR is being re-ceck 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Haibo Wang https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/f6-mpnCDSXq1zLJAb6Dngd40uYI/ Jie Dong https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/aVIAYvvOKNXNlENcKjGWFGjSMpQ/ Ketan Talaulikar https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kjSAw7FZ5Rr23MXEBoFh3So2CMo/ Tao Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/1mGQqOuW5uTyqJDgTseYz0s2mxg/ Chen Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MIH3jdKsHfey6nMko8wvyQErWks/ Contributor: Xinjun Chen: ifocus.chen@huawei.com https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uTmM_Dm8dva5dDcd4J-37V-HQ3Y/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) No NITs. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. All references are in the correct category. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All Normative references are RFCs. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? All normative references are RFCs. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). This informational RFC makes no request of the IANA registry. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. This informational RFC makes no request of the IANA registry. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/iesg/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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04 | Jie Dong | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-cpr-04.txt |
2024-06-30
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04 | Jie Dong | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Jie Dong) |
2024-06-30
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04 | Jie Dong | Uploaded new revision |
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03 | Brian Weis | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Brian Weis. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
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03 | Brian Weis | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Brian Weis. |
2024-06-11
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03 | Jie Dong | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-cpr-03.txt |
2024-06-11
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03 | (System) | New version approved |
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03 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Haibo Wang , Jie Dong , Ketan Talaulikar , Ran Chen , hantao |
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03 | Jie Dong | Uploaded new revision |
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02 | Susan Hares | Needed actions: 1) Revision to handle: RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, CAR/CT 2) Spring discussion on H.Insert.Red (sent on 6/6) ## Document History 1. Does the working group … Needed actions: 1) Revision to handle: RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, CAR/CT 2) Spring discussion on H.Insert.Red (sent on 6/6) ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Post WG LC comments Cross-WG Checks: Spring comment on use of H.Insert.Red defined in [draft-filsfils-spring-srv6-net-pgm-insertion/] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MocXZIPp_VlfVprgeA6B1CEcFsE/ RTG-DIR Checks: OPS-DIR checks: WG LC 4/26 to 5/10, extended to 5/15 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bu4woD9zKcxW16XOWr9iIuol548/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/jw8vQjF2WfOz3T_KNlkOBUuIL7M/ Status: no contention, Strong support from WG participants working on SRv6 Content: CPR was discussed in the context of the CAR/CT work, CAR and CT work both considered the SRv6 and CPR discussion CAR/CT summaries on IDR Wiki: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr Technical part of WG LC discussion to review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/owrPTHXx7pIKmnnoOlxUilLpwyI/ github issue: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues Part of discussion covered: 1. In the past, Color usually belongs to private prefixes, not the locators. However, SR Policy and Flex-Algo mechanism use color on per hop routing. 2. Forwarding process uses insertion not encapsulation. (pull text here) 3. EPE Traffic engineering versus CPR per hop routing (intent based) Post WG-LC directorates RTG-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KEhb7vHaif7-QGHRGPETVMRIpYw/ Github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/2 OPS-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/1 WG adoption call: See shepherd's report in linked draft: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-wang-idr-cpr/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Since this is the last document in IDR's Intent based work (CAR, CT, CPR), the WG LC discussion had low controversy and mild participation. The debates regarding this technology were held as part of the 3 year work on Intent base work. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No appeals. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? [TBD] ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. RTG-DIR and OPS-DIR Directorate Reviews occurred. SEC-DIR Directorate 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Haibo Wang https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/f6-mpnCDSXq1zLJAb6Dngd40uYI/ Jie Dong https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/aVIAYvvOKNXNlENcKjGWFGjSMpQ/ Ketan Talaulikar https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kjSAw7FZ5Rr23MXEBoFh3So2CMo/ Tao Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/1mGQqOuW5uTyqJDgTseYz0s2mxg/ Chen Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MIH3jdKsHfey6nMko8wvyQErWks/ Contributor: Xinjun Chen: ifocus.chen@huawei.com https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uTmM_Dm8dva5dDcd4J-37V-HQ3Y/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/iesg/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2024-06-06
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02 | Susan Hares | Needed actions: 1) Revision to handle: RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, CAR/CT 2) Spring discussion on H.Insert.Red (sent on 6/6) ## Document History 1. Does the working group … Needed actions: 1) Revision to handle: RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, CAR/CT 2) Spring discussion on H.Insert.Red (sent on 6/6) ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? WG LC 4/26 to 5/10, extended to 5/15 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bu4woD9zKcxW16XOWr9iIuol548/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/jw8vQjF2WfOz3T_KNlkOBUuIL7M/ Status: no contention, Strong support from WG participants working on SRv6 Content: CPR was discussed in the context of the CAR/CT work, CAR and CT work both considered the SRv6 and CPR discussion CAR/CT summaries on IDR Wiki: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr Technical part of WG LC discussion to review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/owrPTHXx7pIKmnnoOlxUilLpwyI/ github issue: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues Part of discussion covered: 1. In the past, Color usually belongs to private prefixes, not the locators. However, SR Policy and Flex-Algo mechanism use color on per hop routing. 2. Forwarding process uses insertion not encapsulation. (pull text here) 3. EPE Traffic engineering versus CPR per hop routing (intent based) Post WG-LC directorates RTG-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KEhb7vHaif7-QGHRGPETVMRIpYw/ Github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/2 OPS-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/1 WG adoption call: See shepherd's report in linked draft: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-wang-idr-cpr/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Since this is the last document in IDR's Intent based work (CAR, CT, CPR), the WG LC discussion had low controversy and mild participation. The debates regarding this technology were held as part of the 3 year work on Intent base work. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No appeals. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? [TBD] ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. RTG-DIR and OPS-DIR Directorate Reviews occurred. SEC-DIR Directorate 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Haibo Wang https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/f6-mpnCDSXq1zLJAb6Dngd40uYI/ Jie Dong https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/aVIAYvvOKNXNlENcKjGWFGjSMpQ/ Ketan Talaulikar https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kjSAw7FZ5Rr23MXEBoFh3So2CMo/ Tao Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/1mGQqOuW5uTyqJDgTseYz0s2mxg/ Chen Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MIH3jdKsHfey6nMko8wvyQErWks/ Contributor: Xinjun Chen: ifocus.chen@huawei.com https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uTmM_Dm8dva5dDcd4J-37V-HQ3Y/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/iesg/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2024-06-06
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02 | Susan Hares | Needed actions: 1) Revision to handle: RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, CAR/CT 2) Note to Spring 2) link to Intent Based work (CAR/CT) ## Document History 1. Does … Needed actions: 1) Revision to handle: RTG-DIR, OPS-DIR, CAR/CT 2) Note to Spring 2) link to Intent Based work (CAR/CT) ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? WG LC 4/26 to 5/10, extended to 5/15 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bu4woD9zKcxW16XOWr9iIuol548/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/jw8vQjF2WfOz3T_KNlkOBUuIL7M/ Status: no contention, Strong support from WG participants working on SRv6 Content: CPR was discussed in the context of the CAR/CT work, CAR and CT work both considered the SRv6 and CPR discussion CAR/CT summaries on IDR Wiki: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr Technical part of WG LC discussion to review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/owrPTHXx7pIKmnnoOlxUilLpwyI/ github issue: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues Part of discussion covered: 1. In the past, Color usually belongs to private prefixes, not the locators. However, SR Policy and Flex-Algo mechanism use color on per hop routing. 2. Forwarding process uses insertion not encapsulation. (pull text here) 3. EPE Traffic engineering versus CPR per hop routing (intent based) Post WG-LC directorates RTG-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KEhb7vHaif7-QGHRGPETVMRIpYw/ Github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/2 OPS-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/1 WG adoption call: See shepherd's report in linked draft: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-wang-idr-cpr/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Since this is the last document in IDR's Intent based work (CAR, CT, CPR), the WG LC discussion had low controversy and mild participation. The debates regarding this technology were held as part of the 3 year work on Intent base work. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No appeals. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? [TBD] ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. RTG-DIR and OPS-DIR Directorate Reviews occurred. SEC-DIR Directorate 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Haibo Wang https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/f6-mpnCDSXq1zLJAb6Dngd40uYI/ Jie Dong https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/aVIAYvvOKNXNlENcKjGWFGjSMpQ/ Ketan Talaulikar https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kjSAw7FZ5Rr23MXEBoFh3So2CMo/ Tao Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/1mGQqOuW5uTyqJDgTseYz0s2mxg/ Chen Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MIH3jdKsHfey6nMko8wvyQErWks/ Contributor: Xinjun Chen: ifocus.chen@huawei.com https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uTmM_Dm8dva5dDcd4J-37V-HQ3Y/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/iesg/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2024-06-06
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02 | Susan Hares | Needed actions: 1) Summary of discussion 2) link to Intent Based work (CAR/CT) 3) Summary of Directorate calls # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents … Needed actions: 1) Summary of discussion 2) link to Intent Based work (CAR/CT) 3) Summary of Directorate calls # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? WG LC 4/26 to 5/10, extended to 5/15 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bu4woD9zKcxW16XOWr9iIuol548/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/jw8vQjF2WfOz3T_KNlkOBUuIL7M/ Status: no contention, Strong support from WG participants working on SRv6 Content: CPR was discussed in the context of the CAR/CT work Technical part of WG LC discussion to review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/owrPTHXx7pIKmnnoOlxUilLpwyI/ github issue: Part of discussion covered: 1. In the past, Color usually belongs to private prefixes, not the locators. However, SR Policy and Flex-Algo mechanism use color on per hop routing. 2. Forwarding process uses insertion not encapsulation. (pull text here) 3. EPE Traffic engineering versus CPR per hop routing (intent based) Post WG-LC directorates RTG-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/KEhb7vHaif7-QGHRGPETVMRIpYw/ Github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/2 OPS-DIR review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bF3TbgqW58XBTqtzmhJXLGzQcQs/ github: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-cpr/issues/1 WG adoption call: 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Haibo Wang https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/f6-mpnCDSXq1zLJAb6Dngd40uYI/ Jie Dong https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/aVIAYvvOKNXNlENcKjGWFGjSMpQ/ Ketan Talaulikar https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kjSAw7FZ5Rr23MXEBoFh3So2CMo/ Tao Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/1mGQqOuW5uTyqJDgTseYz0s2mxg/ Chen Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MIH3jdKsHfey6nMko8wvyQErWks/ Contributor: Xinjun Chen: ifocus.chen@huawei.com https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uTmM_Dm8dva5dDcd4J-37V-HQ3Y/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/iesg/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2024-06-06
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02 | Susan Hares | Needed actions: 1) Summary of discussion 2) link to Intent Based work (CAR/CT) 3) Summary of Directorate calls # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents … Needed actions: 1) Summary of discussion 2) link to Intent Based work (CAR/CT) 3) Summary of Directorate calls # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? WG LC 4/26 to 5/10, extended to 5/15 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/bu4woD9zKcxW16XOWr9iIuol548/ https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/jw8vQjF2WfOz3T_KNlkOBUuIL7M/ Status: no contention, Strong support from WG participants working on SRv6 Content: CPR was discussed in the context of the CAR/CT work Technical part of WG LC discussion to review: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/owrPTHXx7pIKmnnoOlxUilLpwyI/ github issue: Part of discussion covered: 1. In the past, Color usually belongs to private prefixes, not the locators. However, SR Policy and Flex-Algo mechanism use color on per hop routing. 2. Forwarding process uses insertion not encapsulation. (pull text here) 3. EPE Traffic engineering versus CPR per hop routing (intent based) Post WG-LC directorates 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Haibo Wang https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/f6-mpnCDSXq1zLJAb6Dngd40uYI/ Jie Dong https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/aVIAYvvOKNXNlENcKjGWFGjSMpQ/ Ketan Talaulikar https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kjSAw7FZ5Rr23MXEBoFh3So2CMo/ Tao Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/1mGQqOuW5uTyqJDgTseYz0s2mxg/ Chen Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MIH3jdKsHfey6nMko8wvyQErWks/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/iesg/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2024-06-05
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02 | Susan Hares | see announcement on list https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/_a1ztLXm3NpNydpGpVXTIMlxzt4/ Awaiting comments from Spring |
2024-06-05
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02 | Susan Hares | Tag Other - see Comment Log set. |
2024-06-05
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02 | Susan Hares | IETF WG state changed to WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up from In WG Last Call |
2024-05-31
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02 | Dan Romascanu | Request for Early review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Dan Romascanu. Sent review to list. |
2024-05-31
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02 | Yingzhen Qu | Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Yingzhen Qu. Sent review to list. |
2024-05-25
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02 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Brian Weis |
2024-05-25
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02 | Mohit Sethi | Assignment of request for Early review by SECDIR to Mohit Sethi was rejected |
2024-05-22
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02 | Carlos Pignataro | Request for Early review by OPSDIR is assigned to Dan Romascanu |
2024-05-22
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02 | Daniam Henriques | Request for Early review by RTGDIR is assigned to Yingzhen Qu |
2024-05-18
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02 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Mohit Sethi |
2024-05-18
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02 | Kyle Rose | Assignment of request for Early review by SECDIR to Kyle Rose was rejected |
2024-05-18
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02 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Kyle Rose |
2024-05-18
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02 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by RTGDIR |
2024-05-18
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02 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by OPSDIR |
2024-05-18
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02 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by SECDIR |
2024-05-18
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02 | Susan Hares | Needed actions: 1) Summary of discussion 2) link to Intent Based work (CAR/CT) 3) Summary of Directorate calls # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents … Needed actions: 1) Summary of discussion 2) link to Intent Based work (CAR/CT) 3) Summary of Directorate calls # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Haibo Wang https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/f6-mpnCDSXq1zLJAb6Dngd40uYI/ Jie Dong https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/aVIAYvvOKNXNlENcKjGWFGjSMpQ/ Ketan Talaulikar https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/kjSAw7FZ5Rr23MXEBoFh3So2CMo/ Tao Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/1mGQqOuW5uTyqJDgTseYz0s2mxg/ Chen Ran https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/MIH3jdKsHfey6nMko8wvyQErWks/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. 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2024-05-18
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02 | Susan Hares | Notification list changed to shares@ndzh.com because the document shepherd was set |
2024-05-18
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02 | Susan Hares | Document shepherd changed to Susan Hares |
2024-05-15
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02 | Jie Dong | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-cpr-02.txt |
2024-05-15
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02 | Jie Dong | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Jie Dong) |
2024-05-15
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02 | Jie Dong | Uploaded new revision |
2024-05-14
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01 | Jie Dong | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-cpr-01.txt |
2024-05-14
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01 | Jie Dong | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Jie Dong) |
2024-05-14
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01 | Jie Dong | Uploaded new revision |
2024-04-26
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00 | Susan Hares | IETF WG state changed to In WG Last Call from WG Document |
2024-03-12
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00 | Susan Hares | Intended Status changed to Informational from None |
2023-12-18
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00 | Jie Dong | This document now replaces draft-wang-idr-cpr instead of None |
2023-12-18
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00 | Jie Dong | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-cpr-00.txt |
2023-12-18
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00 | Jie Dong | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Jie Dong) |
2023-12-18
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00 | Jie Dong | Uploaded new revision |