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draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-17
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2025-03-30
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17 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-17.txt |
2025-03-30
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17 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2025-03-30
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17 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2025-03-30
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16 | (System) | Document has expired |
2024-09-26
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16 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-16.txt |
2024-09-26
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16 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2024-09-26
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16 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2024-09-20
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15 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-15.txt |
2024-09-20
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15 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2024-09-20
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15 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2024-09-02
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14 | (System) | Document has expired |
2024-03-01
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14 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-14.txt |
2024-03-01
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14 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2024-03-01
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14 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-12-23
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13 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Wes Hardaker. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2023-12-20
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13 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Wes Hardaker. |
2023-12-10
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13 | Mach Chen | Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Mach Chen. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2023-12-10
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13 | Mach Chen | Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Mach Chen. |
2023-12-04
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13 | Susan Hares | IETF WG state changed to Waiting for Implementation from WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up |
2023-11-15
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13 | Gunter Van de Velde | Closed request for Early review by OPSDIR with state 'Overtaken by Events' |
2023-11-09
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13 | Daniam Henriques | Request for Early review by RTGDIR is assigned to Mach Chen |
2023-11-09
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13 | Daniam Henriques | Assignment of request for Early review by RTGDIR to Martin Vigoureux was withdrawn |
2023-11-06
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13 | Susan Hares | Missing IPR statement on Bin Wen for draft-13. Need to resolve this prior to submitting to AD for publication. |
2023-11-06
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13 | Susan Hares | IETF WG state changed to WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up from In WG Last Call |
2023-11-06
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13 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858] ## Document History 1. Does the working group … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858] ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Adoption call: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/ Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/ Post-adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability WG LC: (8/29/2023 to 9/12/2023) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/J_wTlYxkznBVtTMmzlQE6POXJtE/ 2nd WG LC on -13 changes: (10/10/2023 to 10/17/1023) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/g6nfpUYizaBjxIsTDyCsHaIQfW8/ Needing IPR statement to close 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/pbavQnKgFiPpEEokmY09wtgIZ_0/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Discussion: 1) name of draft - (need the reference) 2) [check for questions ] 3) [WG] combined drafts 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net (on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/ -13.txt: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3MHx1Yxl04A21mYtvUxlinVLl70/ Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com (-13.txt): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ej-uKKRaKhKxHQ_qhYoJNqw7HQQ/ Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com (-13.txt) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DekpJzjLtWMxHViNml0kGJnqqOE/ Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net (-13.txt) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/PMb02RLWAtrd2LUg0JqutRw67Ek/ Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com (-13.txt): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ECzM0xGQC4QoPvrE8V1_fRYNVfY/ James Uttaro (AT&T) (ju1738@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/HyV6wkuUcmK64-T2yRb9JXbPJPM/ Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com joint: (missing -13.txt, but filed on -09). https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iyWos4rpLQ24FQe7gELuce01KFU/ 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2023-11-02
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13 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Wes Hardaker |
2023-10-27
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13 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858] ## Document History 1. Does the working group … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858] ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Adoption call: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/ Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/ Post-adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability WG LC: (8/29/2023 to 9/12/2023) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/J_wTlYxkznBVtTMmzlQE6POXJtE/ 2nd WG LC on -13 changes: (10/10/2023 to 10/17/1023) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/g6nfpUYizaBjxIsTDyCsHaIQfW8/ Needing IPR statement to close 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/pbavQnKgFiPpEEokmY09wtgIZ_0/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Discussion: 1) name of draft - (need the reference) 2) [check for questions ] 3) [WG] combined drafts 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net (on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/ -13.txt: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3MHx1Yxl04A21mYtvUxlinVLl70/ Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com (-13.txt): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ej-uKKRaKhKxHQ_qhYoJNqw7HQQ/ Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com (-13.txt) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DekpJzjLtWMxHViNml0kGJnqqOE/ Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net (-13.txt) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/PMb02RLWAtrd2LUg0JqutRw67Ek/ Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com (-13.txt): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ECzM0xGQC4QoPvrE8V1_fRYNVfY/ James Uttaro (AT&T) (ju1738@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/HyV6wkuUcmK64-T2yRb9JXbPJPM/ Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com joint: [Missing] 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2023-10-27
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13 | Susan Hares | Changed consensus to Yes from Unknown |
2023-10-27
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13 | Susan Hares | Intended Status changed to Proposed Standard from None |
2023-10-26
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13 | Daniam Henriques | Request for Early review by RTGDIR is assigned to Martin Vigoureux |
2023-10-26
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13 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by RTGDIR |
2023-10-26
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13 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by OPSDIR |
2023-10-26
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13 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by SECDIR |
2023-10-26
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13 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Adoption call: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/ Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/ Post-adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability WG LC: (8/29/2023 to 9/12/2023) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/J_wTlYxkznBVtTMmzlQE6POXJtE/ 2nd WG LC on -13 changes: (10/10/2023 to 10/17/1023) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/g6nfpUYizaBjxIsTDyCsHaIQfW8/ Needing IPR statement to close 2nd WG LC https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/pbavQnKgFiPpEEokmY09wtgIZ_0/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net (on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/ -13.txt: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3MHx1Yxl04A21mYtvUxlinVLl70/ Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com (-13.txt): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ej-uKKRaKhKxHQ_qhYoJNqw7HQQ/ Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com (-13.txt) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DekpJzjLtWMxHViNml0kGJnqqOE/ Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net (-13.txt) [missing] Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com (-13.txt): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ECzM0xGQC4QoPvrE8V1_fRYNVfY/ James Uttaro (AT&T) (ju1738@att.com) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/HyV6wkuUcmK64-T2yRb9JXbPJPM/ Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com joint: [Missing] 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2023-10-20
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13 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Adoption call: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/ Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/ Post-adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability WG LC: (8/29/2023 to 9/12/2023) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/J_wTlYxkznBVtTMmzlQE6POXJtE/ 2nd WG LC on -13 changes: (10/10/2023 to 10/17/1023) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/g6nfpUYizaBjxIsTDyCsHaIQfW8/ 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net (on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/ -13.txt: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3MHx1Yxl04A21mYtvUxlinVLl70/ Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com (-13.txt): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ej-uKKRaKhKxHQ_qhYoJNqw7HQQ/ Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com (-13.txt) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DekpJzjLtWMxHViNml0kGJnqqOE/ Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net joint: [missing] Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com (-13.txt): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ECzM0xGQC4QoPvrE8V1_fRYNVfY/ James Uttaro (AT&T) (ju1738@att.com) joint: [Missing] Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com joint: [Missing] 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2023-10-20
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13 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Adoption call: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/ Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/ Post adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net (on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/ -13.txt: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3MHx1Yxl04A21mYtvUxlinVLl70/ Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com (-13.txt): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ej-uKKRaKhKxHQ_qhYoJNqw7HQQ/ Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com (-13.txt) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DekpJzjLtWMxHViNml0kGJnqqOE/ Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net joint: [missing] Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com (-13.txt): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ECzM0xGQC4QoPvrE8V1_fRYNVfY/ James Uttaro (AT&T) (ju1738@att.com) joint: [Missing] Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com joint: [Missing] 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2023-10-09
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13 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-13.txt |
2023-10-09
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13 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-10-09
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13 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-09-26
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12 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-12.txt |
2023-09-26
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12 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-09-26
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12 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-09-21
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11 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-11.txt |
2023-09-21
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11 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-09-21
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11 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-09-14
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10 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-10.txt |
2023-09-14
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10 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-09-14
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10 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-08-28
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09 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-09.txt |
2023-08-28
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09 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-08-28
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09 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-08-28
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08 | Susan Hares | Will poll for IPR starting (8/28/2023), and follow with WG LC upon version -09. |
2023-08-28
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08 | Susan Hares | IETF WG state changed to In WG Last Call from WG Document |
2023-08-25
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08 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-08.txt |
2023-08-25
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08 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-08-25
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08 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-08-16
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07 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-07.txt |
2023-08-16
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07 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-08-16
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07 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-08-15
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06 | Gyan Mishra | Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Gyan Mishra. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2023-08-15
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06 | Gyan Mishra | Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Gyan Mishra. |
2023-08-08
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06 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Wes Hardaker. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2023-08-06
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06 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Wes Hardaker. |
2023-07-24
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06 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-06.txt |
2023-07-24
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06 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-07-24
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06 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-07-23
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05 | Joel Jaeggli | Request for Early review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Joel Jaeggli. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2023-07-23
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05 | Joel Jaeggli | Request for Early review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Joel Jaeggli. |
2023-07-18
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05 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Early review by OPSDIR is assigned to Joel Jaeggli |
2023-07-18
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05 | Gunter Van de Velde | Closed request for Early review by OPSDIR with state 'Overtaken by Events': duplicate review request - closing one of the review requests |
2023-07-17
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05 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by OPSDIR |
2023-07-13
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05 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Wes Hardaker |
2023-07-10
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05 | Haomian Zheng | Request for Early review by RTGDIR is assigned to Gyan Mishra |
2023-07-10
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05 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by RTGDIR |
2023-07-10
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05 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by OPSDIR |
2023-07-10
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05 | Susan Hares | Requested Early review by SECDIR |
2023-07-10
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05 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-05.txt |
2023-07-10
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05 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-07-10
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05 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-07-07
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04 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-04.txt |
2023-07-07
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04 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-07-07
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04 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2023-02-20
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03 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-03.txt |
2023-02-20
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03 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2023-02-20
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03 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2022-12-21
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02 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-02.txt |
2022-12-21
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02 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2022-12-21
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02 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2022-10-12
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01 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Adoption call: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/ Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/ Post adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net (on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/ Joint: [missing] Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com joint: [missing] Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com joint: [missing] Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net joint: [missing] Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com joint: [missing] James Uttaro (AT&T) (ju1738@att.com) joint: [Missing] Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com joint: [Missing] 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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01 | Susan Hares | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? Adoption call: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/ Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/ Post adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. John Scudder (on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label) https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/ 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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01 | Susan Hares | Notification list changed to shares@ndzh.com because the document shepherd was set |
2022-10-12
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01 | Susan Hares | Document shepherd changed to Susan Hares |
2022-10-10
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01 | John Scudder | This document now replaces draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label, draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability instead of draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label |
2022-10-10
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01 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-01.txt |
2022-10-10
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01 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2022-10-10
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01 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |
2022-09-29
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00 | John Scudder | This document now replaces draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label instead of None |
2022-09-29
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00 | John Scudder | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-00.txt |
2022-09-29
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00 | John Scudder | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder) |
2022-09-29
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00 | John Scudder | Uploaded new revision |