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Date Rev. By Action
2024-03-01
14 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-14.txt
2024-03-01
14 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2024-03-01
14 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-12-23
13 Tero Kivinen Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Wes Hardaker. Submission of review completed at an earlier date.
2023-12-20
13 Tero Kivinen Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Wes Hardaker.
2023-12-10
13 Mach Chen Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Mach Chen. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date.
2023-12-10
13 Mach Chen Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Mach Chen.
2023-12-04
13 Susan Hares IETF WG state changed to Waiting for Implementation from WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up
2023-11-15
13 Gunter Van de Velde Closed request for Early review by OPSDIR with state 'Overtaken by Events'
2023-11-09
13 Daniam Henriques Request for Early review by RTGDIR is assigned to Mach Chen
2023-11-09
13 Daniam Henriques Assignment of request for Early review by RTGDIR to Martin Vigoureux was withdrawn
2023-11-06
13 Susan Hares Missing IPR statement on Bin Wen for draft-13.  Need to resolve this prior to submitting to AD for publication.
2023-11-06
13 Susan Hares IETF WG state changed to WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up from In WG Last Call
2023-11-06
13 Susan Hares
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents
*This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858]

## Document History

1. Does the working group …
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents
*This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858]

## Document History

1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a
  few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement?

Adoption call:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/

Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/

Post-adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability

WG LC: (8/29/2023 to 9/12/2023)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/J_wTlYxkznBVtTMmzlQE6POXJtE/

2nd WG LC on -13 changes: (10/10/2023 to 10/17/1023)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/g6nfpUYizaBjxIsTDyCsHaIQfW8/

Needing IPR statement to close 2nd WG LC
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/pbavQnKgFiPpEEokmY09wtgIZ_0/


2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where
  the consensus was particularly rough?

Discussion:
1) name of draft - (need the reference)
2) [check for questions ] 
3) [WG] combined drafts

3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If
  so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the
  responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this
  questionnaire is publicly available.)

4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of
  the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated
  plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere,
  either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere
  (where)?

## Additional Reviews

5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other
  IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit
  from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which
  reviews took place.

6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria,
  such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module
  been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and
  formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is
  the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module
  comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified
  in [RFC 8342][5]?

8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the
  final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code,
  BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc.

## Document Shepherd Checks

9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this
  document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready
  to be handed off to the responsible Area Director?

10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their
    reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified
    and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent
    reviews?

11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best
    Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13],
    [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type
    of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent?

12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual
    property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To
    the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If
    not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links
    to publicly-available messages when applicable.

John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net
(on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/
-13.txt:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3MHx1Yxl04A21mYtvUxlinVLl70/


Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com
(-13.txt):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ej-uKKRaKhKxHQ_qhYoJNqw7HQQ/

Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com
(-13.txt)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DekpJzjLtWMxHViNml0kGJnqqOE/

Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net
(-13.txt)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/PMb02RLWAtrd2LUg0JqutRw67Ek/

Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com
(-13.txt):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ECzM0xGQC4QoPvrE8V1_fRYNVfY/

James Uttaro (AT&T)  (ju1738@att.com)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/HyV6wkuUcmK64-T2yRb9JXbPJPM/

Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com
joint: (missing -13.txt, but filed on -09).
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/iyWos4rpLQ24FQe7gELuce01KFU/

13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be
    listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page
    is greater than five, please provide a justification.

14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits
    tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on
    authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates
    some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.)

15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG
    Statement on Normative and Informative References][16].

16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did
    the community have sufficient access to review any such normative
    references?

17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP
    97
][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so,
    list them.

18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be
    submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state?
    If so, what is the plan for their completion?

19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If
    so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs
    listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the
    introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document
    where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.

20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section,
    especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document.
    Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are
    associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm
    that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm
    that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents,
    allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]).

21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for
    future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear?
    Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate.

[1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/
[2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html
[3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html
[4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools
[5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html
[6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics
[7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79
[8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/
[9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html
[10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97
[11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html
[12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5
[13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1
[14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2
[15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview
[16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/
[17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/

2023-11-02
13 Tero Kivinen Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Wes Hardaker
2023-10-27
13 Susan Hares
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents
*This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858]

## Document History

1. Does the working group …
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents
*This version is dated 4 July 2022. [RFC4858]

## Document History

1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a
  few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement?

Adoption call:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/

Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/

Post-adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability

WG LC: (8/29/2023 to 9/12/2023)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/J_wTlYxkznBVtTMmzlQE6POXJtE/

2nd WG LC on -13 changes: (10/10/2023 to 10/17/1023)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/g6nfpUYizaBjxIsTDyCsHaIQfW8/

Needing IPR statement to close 2nd WG LC
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/pbavQnKgFiPpEEokmY09wtgIZ_0/


2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where
  the consensus was particularly rough?

Discussion:
1) name of draft - (need the reference)
2) [check for questions ] 
3) [WG] combined drafts

3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If
  so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the
  responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this
  questionnaire is publicly available.)

4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of
  the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated
  plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere,
  either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere
  (where)?

## Additional Reviews

5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other
  IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit
  from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which
  reviews took place.

6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria,
  such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module
  been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and
  formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is
  the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module
  comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified
  in [RFC 8342][5]?

8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the
  final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code,
  BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc.

## Document Shepherd Checks

9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this
  document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready
  to be handed off to the responsible Area Director?

10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their
    reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified
    and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent
    reviews?

11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best
    Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13],
    [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type
    of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent?

12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual
    property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To
    the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If
    not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links
    to publicly-available messages when applicable.

John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net
(on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/
-13.txt:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3MHx1Yxl04A21mYtvUxlinVLl70/


Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com
(-13.txt):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ej-uKKRaKhKxHQ_qhYoJNqw7HQQ/

Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com
(-13.txt)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DekpJzjLtWMxHViNml0kGJnqqOE/

Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net
(-13.txt)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/PMb02RLWAtrd2LUg0JqutRw67Ek/

Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com
(-13.txt):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ECzM0xGQC4QoPvrE8V1_fRYNVfY/

James Uttaro (AT&T)  (ju1738@att.com)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/HyV6wkuUcmK64-T2yRb9JXbPJPM/

Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com
joint: [Missing]

13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be
    listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page
    is greater than five, please provide a justification.

14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits
    tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on
    authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates
    some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.)

15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG
    Statement on Normative and Informative References][16].

16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did
    the community have sufficient access to review any such normative
    references?

17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP
    97
][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so,
    list them.

18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be
    submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state?
    If so, what is the plan for their completion?

19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If
    so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs
    listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the
    introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document
    where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.

20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section,
    especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document.
    Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are
    associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm
    that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm
    that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents,
    allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]).

21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for
    future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear?
    Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate.

[1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/
[2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html
[3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html
[4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools
[5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html
[6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics
[7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79
[8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/
[9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html
[10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97
[11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html
[12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5
[13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1
[14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2
[15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview
[16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/
[17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/

2023-10-27
13 Susan Hares Changed consensus to Yes from Unknown
2023-10-27
13 Susan Hares Intended Status changed to Proposed Standard from None
2023-10-26
13 Daniam Henriques Request for Early review by RTGDIR is assigned to Martin Vigoureux
2023-10-26
13 Susan Hares Requested Early review by RTGDIR
2023-10-26
13 Susan Hares Requested Early review by OPSDIR
2023-10-26
13 Susan Hares Requested Early review by SECDIR
2023-10-26
13 Susan Hares
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents

*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*

Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the …
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents

*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*

Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is
answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call
and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your
diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is
further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors
and editors to complete these checks.

Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure
to answer all of them.

## Document History

1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a
  few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement?

Adoption call:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/

Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/

Post-adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability

WG LC: (8/29/2023 to 9/12/2023)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/J_wTlYxkznBVtTMmzlQE6POXJtE/

2nd WG LC on -13 changes: (10/10/2023 to 10/17/1023)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/g6nfpUYizaBjxIsTDyCsHaIQfW8/

Needing IPR statement to close 2nd WG LC
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/pbavQnKgFiPpEEokmY09wtgIZ_0/


2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where
  the consensus was particularly rough?

3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If
  so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the
  responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this
  questionnaire is publicly available.)

4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of
  the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated
  plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere,
  either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere
  (where)?

## Additional Reviews

5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other
  IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit
  from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which
  reviews took place.

6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria,
  such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module
  been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and
  formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is
  the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module
  comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified
  in [RFC 8342][5]?

8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the
  final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code,
  BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc.

## Document Shepherd Checks

9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this
  document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready
  to be handed off to the responsible Area Director?

10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their
    reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified
    and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent
    reviews?

11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best
    Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13],
    [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type
    of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent?

12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual
    property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To
    the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If
    not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links
    to publicly-available messages when applicable.
John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net
(on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/
-13.txt:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3MHx1Yxl04A21mYtvUxlinVLl70/


Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com
(-13.txt):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ej-uKKRaKhKxHQ_qhYoJNqw7HQQ/

Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com
(-13.txt)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DekpJzjLtWMxHViNml0kGJnqqOE/

Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net
(-13.txt) [missing]

Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com
(-13.txt):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ECzM0xGQC4QoPvrE8V1_fRYNVfY/

James Uttaro (AT&T)  (ju1738@att.com)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/HyV6wkuUcmK64-T2yRb9JXbPJPM/

Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com
joint: [Missing]

13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be
    listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page
    is greater than five, please provide a justification.

14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits
    tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on
    authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates
    some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.)

15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG
    Statement on Normative and Informative References][16].

16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did
    the community have sufficient access to review any such normative
    references?

17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP
    97
][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so,
    list them.

18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be
    submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state?
    If so, what is the plan for their completion?

19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If
    so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs
    listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the
    introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document
    where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.

20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section,
    especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document.
    Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are
    associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm
    that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm
    that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents,
    allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]).

21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for
    future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear?
    Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate.

[1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/
[2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html
[3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html
[4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools
[5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html
[6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics
[7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79
[8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/
[9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html
[10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97
[11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html
[12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5
[13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1
[14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2
[15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview
[16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/
[17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/

2023-10-20
13 Susan Hares
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents

*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*

Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the …
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents

*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*

Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is
answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call
and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your
diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is
further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors
and editors to complete these checks.

Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure
to answer all of them.

## Document History

1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a
  few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement?

Adoption call:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/

Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/

Post-adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability

WG LC: (8/29/2023 to 9/12/2023)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/J_wTlYxkznBVtTMmzlQE6POXJtE/

2nd WG LC on -13 changes: (10/10/2023 to 10/17/1023)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/g6nfpUYizaBjxIsTDyCsHaIQfW8/


2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where
  the consensus was particularly rough?

3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If
  so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the
  responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this
  questionnaire is publicly available.)

4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of
  the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated
  plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere,
  either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere
  (where)?

## Additional Reviews

5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other
  IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit
  from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which
  reviews took place.

6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria,
  such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module
  been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and
  formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is
  the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module
  comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified
  in [RFC 8342][5]?

8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the
  final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code,
  BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc.

## Document Shepherd Checks

9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this
  document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready
  to be handed off to the responsible Area Director?

10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their
    reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified
    and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent
    reviews?

11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best
    Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13],
    [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type
    of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent?

12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual
    property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To
    the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If
    not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links
    to publicly-available messages when applicable.
John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net
(on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/
-13.txt:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3MHx1Yxl04A21mYtvUxlinVLl70/


Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com
(-13.txt):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ej-uKKRaKhKxHQ_qhYoJNqw7HQQ/

Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com
(-13.txt)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DekpJzjLtWMxHViNml0kGJnqqOE/


Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net
joint: [missing]

Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com
(-13.txt):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ECzM0xGQC4QoPvrE8V1_fRYNVfY/

James Uttaro (AT&T)  (ju1738@att.com)
joint: [Missing]

Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com
joint: [Missing]

13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be
    listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page
    is greater than five, please provide a justification.

14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits
    tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on
    authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates
    some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.)

15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG
    Statement on Normative and Informative References][16].

16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did
    the community have sufficient access to review any such normative
    references?

17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP
    97
][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so,
    list them.

18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be
    submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state?
    If so, what is the plan for their completion?

19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If
    so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs
    listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the
    introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document
    where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.

20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section,
    especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document.
    Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are
    associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm
    that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm
    that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents,
    allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]).

21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for
    future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear?
    Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate.

[1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/
[2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html
[3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html
[4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools
[5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html
[6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics
[7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79
[8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/
[9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html
[10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97
[11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html
[12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5
[13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1
[14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2
[15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview
[16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/
[17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/

2023-10-20
13 Susan Hares
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents

*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*

Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the …
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents

*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*

Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is
answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call
and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your
diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is
further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors
and editors to complete these checks.

Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure
to answer all of them.

## Document History

1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a
  few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement?

Adoption call:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/

Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/

Post adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability


2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where
  the consensus was particularly rough?

3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If
  so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the
  responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this
  questionnaire is publicly available.)

4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of
  the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated
  plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere,
  either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere
  (where)?

## Additional Reviews

5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other
  IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit
  from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which
  reviews took place.

6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria,
  such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module
  been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and
  formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is
  the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module
  comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified
  in [RFC 8342][5]?

8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the
  final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code,
  BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc.

## Document Shepherd Checks

9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this
  document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready
  to be handed off to the responsible Area Director?

10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their
    reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified
    and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent
    reviews?

11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best
    Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13],
    [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type
    of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent?

12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual
    property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To
    the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If
    not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links
    to publicly-available messages when applicable.
John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net
(on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/
-13.txt:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/3MHx1Yxl04A21mYtvUxlinVLl70/


Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com
(-13.txt):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Ej-uKKRaKhKxHQ_qhYoJNqw7HQQ/

Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com
(-13.txt)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/DekpJzjLtWMxHViNml0kGJnqqOE/


Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net
joint: [missing]

Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com
(-13.txt):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/ECzM0xGQC4QoPvrE8V1_fRYNVfY/

James Uttaro (AT&T)  (ju1738@att.com)
joint: [Missing]

Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com
joint: [Missing]

13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be
    listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page
    is greater than five, please provide a justification.

14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits
    tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on
    authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates
    some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.)

15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG
    Statement on Normative and Informative References][16].

16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did
    the community have sufficient access to review any such normative
    references?

17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP
    97
][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so,
    list them.

18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be
    submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state?
    If so, what is the plan for their completion?

19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If
    so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs
    listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the
    introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document
    where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.

20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section,
    especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document.
    Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are
    associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm
    that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm
    that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents,
    allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]).

21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for
    future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear?
    Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate.

[1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/
[2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html
[3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html
[4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools
[5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html
[6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics
[7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79
[8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/
[9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html
[10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97
[11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html
[12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5
[13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1
[14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2
[15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview
[16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/
[17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/

2023-10-09
13 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-13.txt
2023-10-09
13 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-10-09
13 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-09-26
12 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-12.txt
2023-09-26
12 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-09-26
12 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-09-21
11 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-11.txt
2023-09-21
11 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-09-21
11 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-09-14
10 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-10.txt
2023-09-14
10 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-09-14
10 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-08-28
09 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-09.txt
2023-08-28
09 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-08-28
09 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-08-28
08 Susan Hares Will poll for IPR starting (8/28/2023), and follow with WG LC upon version -09.
2023-08-28
08 Susan Hares IETF WG state changed to In WG Last Call from WG Document
2023-08-25
08 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-08.txt
2023-08-25
08 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-08-25
08 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-08-16
07 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-07.txt
2023-08-16
07 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-08-16
07 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-08-15
06 Gyan Mishra Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Gyan Mishra. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date.
2023-08-15
06 Gyan Mishra Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Gyan Mishra.
2023-08-08
06 Tero Kivinen Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Wes Hardaker. Submission of review completed at an earlier date.
2023-08-06
06 Tero Kivinen Request for Early review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Wes Hardaker.
2023-07-24
06 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-06.txt
2023-07-24
06 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-07-24
06 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-07-23
05 Joel Jaeggli Request for Early review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Joel Jaeggli. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date.
2023-07-23
05 Joel Jaeggli Request for Early review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Joel Jaeggli.
2023-07-18
05 Gunter Van de Velde Request for Early review by OPSDIR is assigned to Joel Jaeggli
2023-07-18
05 Gunter Van de Velde Closed request for Early review by OPSDIR with state 'Overtaken by Events': duplicate review request - closing one of the review requests
2023-07-17
05 Susan Hares Requested Early review by OPSDIR
2023-07-13
05 Tero Kivinen Request for Early review by SECDIR is assigned to Wes Hardaker
2023-07-10
05 Haomian Zheng Request for Early review by RTGDIR is assigned to Gyan Mishra
2023-07-10
05 Susan Hares Requested Early review by RTGDIR
2023-07-10
05 Susan Hares Requested Early review by OPSDIR
2023-07-10
05 Susan Hares Requested Early review by SECDIR
2023-07-10
05 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-05.txt
2023-07-10
05 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-07-10
05 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-07-07
04 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-04.txt
2023-07-07
04 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-07-07
04 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2023-02-20
03 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-03.txt
2023-02-20
03 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2023-02-20
03 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2022-12-21
02 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-02.txt
2022-12-21
02 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2022-12-21
02 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2022-10-12
01 Susan Hares
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents

*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*

Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the …
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents

*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*

Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is
answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call
and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your
diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is
further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors
and editors to complete these checks.

Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure
to answer all of them.

## Document History

1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a
  few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement?

Adoption call:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/

Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/

Post adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability


2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where
  the consensus was particularly rough?

3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If
  so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the
  responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this
  questionnaire is publicly available.)

4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of
  the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated
  plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere,
  either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere
  (where)?

## Additional Reviews

5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other
  IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit
  from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which
  reviews took place.

6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria,
  such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module
  been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and
  formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is
  the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module
  comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified
  in [RFC 8342][5]?

8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the
  final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code,
  BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc.

## Document Shepherd Checks

9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this
  document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready
  to be handed off to the responsible Area Director?

10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their
    reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified
    and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent
    reviews?

11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best
    Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13],
    [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type
    of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent?

12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual
    property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To
    the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If
    not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links
    to publicly-available messages when applicable.
John Scudder jgs@juniepr.net
(on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/
Joint: [missing]

Bruno Decraene (editor) bruno.decraene@orange.com
joint: [missing]

Wim Henderickx (Nokia) wim.henderickx@nokia.com
joint: [missing]

Kireeti Kompella (Juniper) kireeti@juniper.net
joint: [missing]

Satya Mohanty (cisco) satyamoh@cisco.com
joint: [missing]

James Uttaro (AT&T)  (ju1738@att.com)
joint: [Missing]

Bin Wen (Comcast) Bin_Wen@comcast.com
joint: [Missing]

13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be
    listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page
    is greater than five, please provide a justification.

14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits
    tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on
    authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates
    some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.)

15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG
    Statement on Normative and Informative References][16].

16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did
    the community have sufficient access to review any such normative
    references?

17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP
    97
][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so,
    list them.

18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be
    submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state?
    If so, what is the plan for their completion?

19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If
    so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs
    listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the
    introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document
    where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.

20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section,
    especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document.
    Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are
    associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm
    that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm
    that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents,
    allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]).

21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for
    future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear?
    Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate.

[1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/
[2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html
[3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html
[4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools
[5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html
[6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics
[7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79
[8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/
[9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html
[10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97
[11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html
[12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5
[13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1
[14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2
[15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview
[16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/
[17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/

2022-10-12
01 Susan Hares
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents

*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*

Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the …
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents

*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*

Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is
answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call
and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your
diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is
further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors
and editors to complete these checks.

Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure
to answer all of them.

## Document History

1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a
  few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement?

Adoption call:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/LBx4UK9zO3If2O3qnEiR9EalWoo/

Shepherd's report on Adoption call result: 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/cMS-cS7EFIXdI4UAl7hVrxFGnbE/

Post adoption call draft was merged with draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability


2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where
  the consensus was particularly rough?

3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If
  so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the
  responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this
  questionnaire is publicly available.)

4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of
  the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated
  plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere,
  either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere
  (where)?

## Additional Reviews

5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other
  IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit
  from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which
  reviews took place.

6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria,
  such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module
  been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and
  formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is
  the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module
  comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified
  in [RFC 8342][5]?

8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the
  final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code,
  BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc.

## Document Shepherd Checks

9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this
  document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready
  to be handed off to the responsible Area Director?

10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their
    reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified
    and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent
    reviews?

11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best
    Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13],
    [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type
    of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent?

12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual
    property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To
    the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If
    not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links
    to publicly-available messages when applicable.
John Scudder (on draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label)
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/uBaAl8dwIP4lyIS4257fh0fJJQo/



13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be
    listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page
    is greater than five, please provide a justification.

14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits
    tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on
    authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates
    some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.)

15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG
    Statement on Normative and Informative References][16].

16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did
    the community have sufficient access to review any such normative
    references?

17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP
    97
][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so,
    list them.

18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be
    submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state?
    If so, what is the plan for their completion?

19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If
    so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs
    listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the
    introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document
    where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.

20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section,
    especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document.
    Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are
    associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm
    that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm
    that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents,
    allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]).

21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for
    future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear?
    Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate.

[1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/
[2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html
[3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html
[4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools
[5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html
[6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics
[7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79
[8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/
[9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html
[10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97
[11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html
[12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5
[13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1
[14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2
[15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview
[16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/
[17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/

2022-10-12
01 Susan Hares Notification list changed to shares@ndzh.com because the document shepherd was set
2022-10-12
01 Susan Hares Document shepherd changed to Susan Hares
2022-10-10
01 John Scudder This document now replaces draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label, draft-ietf-idr-next-hop-capability instead of draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label
2022-10-10
01 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-01.txt
2022-10-10
01 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2022-10-10
01 John Scudder Uploaded new revision
2022-09-29
00 John Scudder This document now replaces draft-scudder-idr-entropy-label instead of None
2022-09-29
00 John Scudder New version available: draft-ietf-idr-entropy-label-00.txt
2022-09-29
00 John Scudder New version accepted (logged-in submitter: John Scudder)
2022-09-29
00 John Scudder Uploaded new revision