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draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-02
Requested revision 02 (document currently at 07)
Type Early Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2024-02-01
Requested 2023-12-18
Requested by Ronald in 't Velt
Authors David Wiggins , Lou Berger , Donald E. Eastlake 3rd
WG chairs Don Fedyk , Ronald in 't Velt , Donald E. Eastlake 3rd
I-D last updated 2024-11-22
IESG document state Waiting for AD Go-Ahead
Completed reviews Tsvart Early review of -02 by David L. Black (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Behcet Sarikaya (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by He Jia (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Susan Hares (diff)
Comments
This Internet-Draft is part of a cluster of four that specify credit-based flow control extensions to the DLEP (RFC 8175) router-modem protocol. TSVART Early Review for the other three drafts (draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-, draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-, draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-) was requested in October 2021. The assigned reviewer was David Black. He did a thorough job and provided good comments, some of which remain to be resolved. After a considerable hiatus, author(s) and document shepherd aim to finally address these. In addition, we humbly request this fourth document to be subjected to TSVART Early Review, preferably assigned to the same reviewer. One issue raised as part of the earlier review was, that the split into three (now four) documents resulted in one very short document, draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-, which basically just defines a single DLEP Extension Type value. Merging of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension- and draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification- was suggested. The current document, draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-, specifies an alternate credit window mechanism (and Extension Type) to draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-, based on IEEE 802.1Q tags instead of DiffServ CodePoints. It is just as short as its DSCP-based counterpart. The WG's rationale for keeping the document division the way it is, can be found in the shepherd write-ups for each of the three earlier I-Ds, e.g., https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension/shepherdwriteup/, in the answers to question 2.
Assignment Reviewer David L. Black
State Completed
Review review-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-02-tsvart-early-black-2023-12-19
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/Sm-BR3R4_min252UBUKxvPKFV0c
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 07)
Result On the right track
Completed 2023-12-19

History

Date By Description
2023-12-19 David L. Black Request for Early review by TSVART Completed: On the Right Track. Reviewer: David Black.
2023-12-18 David L. Black Assignment for David Black accepted
2023-12-18 Magnus Westerlund Request for Early review by TSVART is assigned to David Black
2023-12-18 Ronald in 't Velt Requested Early review by TSVART