Review request
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-02 |
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Requested revision | 02 (document currently at 07) | |
Type | Early Review | |
Team | Transport Area Review Team (tsvart) | |
Deadline | 2024-02-01 | |
Requested | 2023-12-18 | |
Requested by | Ronald in 't Velt | |
Authors | David Wiggins , Lou Berger , Donald E. Eastlake 3rd | |
WG chairs | Don Fedyk , Ronald in 't Velt , Donald E. Eastlake 3rd | |
I-D last updated | 2024-11-22 | |
IESG document state | Waiting for AD Go-Ahead | |
Completed reviews |
Tsvart Early review of -02
by David L. Black
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Behcet Sarikaya (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by He Jia (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Valery Smyslov (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Susan Hares (diff) |
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Comments |
This Internet-Draft is part of a cluster of four that specify credit-based flow control extensions to the DLEP (RFC 8175) router-modem protocol. TSVART Early Review for the other three drafts (draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-, draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-, draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-) was requested in October 2021. The assigned reviewer was David Black. He did a thorough job and provided good comments, some of which remain to be resolved. After a considerable hiatus, author(s) and document shepherd aim to finally address these. In addition, we humbly request this fourth document to be subjected to TSVART Early Review, preferably assigned to the same reviewer. One issue raised as part of the earlier review was, that the split into three (now four) documents resulted in one very short document, draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-, which basically just defines a single DLEP Extension Type value. Merging of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension- and draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification- was suggested. The current document, draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-, specifies an alternate credit window mechanism (and Extension Type) to draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-, based on IEEE 802.1Q tags instead of DiffServ CodePoints. It is just as short as its DSCP-based counterpart. The WG's rationale for keeping the document division the way it is, can be found in the shepherd write-ups for each of the three earlier I-Ds, e.g., https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension/shepherdwriteup/, in the answers to question 2. |
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Assignment | Reviewer | David L. Black |
State | Completed | |
Review |
review-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-02-tsvart-early-black-2023-12-19
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Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/Sm-BR3R4_min252UBUKxvPKFV0c | |
Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 07) | |
Result | On the right track | |
Completed | 2023-12-19 |
History
Date | By | Description |
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2023-12-19 | David L. Black | Request for Early review by TSVART Completed: On the Right Track. Reviewer: David Black. |
2023-12-18 | David L. Black | Assignment for David Black accepted |
2023-12-18 | Magnus Westerlund | Request for Early review by TSVART is assigned to David Black |
2023-12-18 | Ronald in 't Velt | Requested Early review by TSVART |