Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and MPLS Ancillary Data
draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-15
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2025-01-02
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2024-10-07
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2024-09-30
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15 | Linda Dunbar | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Linda Dunbar. Sent review to list. |
2024-09-30
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15 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to MISSREF |
2024-09-30
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15 | (System) | IESG state changed to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent |
2024-09-30
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15 | (System) | Announcement was received by RFC Editor |
2024-09-30
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2024-09-30
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15 | (System) | Removed all action holders (IESG state changed) |
2024-09-30
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15 | Cindy Morgan | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent from Approved-announcement to be sent |
2024-09-30
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15 | Cindy Morgan | IESG has approved the document |
2024-09-30
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15 | Cindy Morgan | Closed "Approve" ballot |
2024-09-30
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15 | Cindy Morgan | Ballot approval text was generated |
2024-09-30
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15 | Jim Guichard | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent from Approved-announcement to be sent::AD Followup |
2024-09-23
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15 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-15.txt |
2024-09-23
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15 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-09-23
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15 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-09-20
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14 | Magnus Westerlund | Closed request for Last Call review by TSVART with state 'Overtaken by Events' |
2024-09-19
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14 | Yaron Sheffer | Request for Telechat review by SECDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Yaron Sheffer. Sent review to list. |
2024-09-19
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14 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Telechat review by SECDIR is assigned to Yaron Sheffer |
2024-09-19
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14 | Jenny Bui | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent::AD Followup from IESG Evaluation |
2024-09-19
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14 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - No Actions Needed |
2024-09-19
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14 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-14.txt |
2024-09-19
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14 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-09-19
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14 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-09-18
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13 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot comment] Some of the things defined in 1.2.1 (e.g., ISD, PSD, AD) are only used once, and maybe those definitions could be dropped and … [Ballot comment] Some of the things defined in 1.2.1 (e.g., ISD, PSD, AD) are only used once, and maybe those definitions could be dropped and just used directly in place. NAI is defined but never used. |
2024-09-18
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13 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Murray Kucherawy |
2024-09-18
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13 | John Scudder | [Ballot comment] Thanks for the well-written document. One note, I agree with Éric Vyncke that it would be good to qualify the last sentence of … [Ballot comment] Thanks for the well-written document. One note, I agree with Éric Vyncke that it would be good to qualify the last sentence of the abstract, for example with “at time of writing“. |
2024-09-18
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13 | John Scudder | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for John Scudder |
2024-09-18
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13 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Zaheduzzaman Sarker |
2024-09-18
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13 | Éric Vyncke | [Ballot comment] Thanks for the work done in this document, it is clear and easy to read (thanks also to Tony Li for the detailed … [Ballot comment] Thanks for the work done in this document, it is clear and easy to read (thanks also to Tony Li for the detailed shepherd's write-up). Two comments though: # Abstract Should a date be added to the sentence `the ones that are actively discussed by members of the IETF MPLS, PALS, and DetNet working groups` ? # Appendix A `The discussion of these aspirational cases is ongoing.` should the WG have delayed the request for publication until these use cases are refined ? Else, suggest removing the appendix. # References As a side note, there are many drafts in the references, let's hope that this I-D is not too much delayed by draft-ietf-mpls-mna-fwk and that the informal references will still be useful when published. |
2024-09-18
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13 | Éric Vyncke | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Éric Vyncke |
2024-09-17
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13 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot comment] Thanks to Yaron Sheffer for the SecDir review and to the authors for picking up his suggestion for the Security Considerations Section. |
2024-09-17
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13 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Paul Wouters |
2024-09-17
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13 | Gunter Van de Velde | [Ballot comment] (fixing typo) # Gunter Van de Velde, RTG AD, comments for draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-13 # Please find the following non-blocking comments observed when reading the … [Ballot comment] (fixing typo) # Gunter Van de Velde, RTG AD, comments for draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-13 # Please find the following non-blocking comments observed when reading the draft. Please use at your discretion #DETAILED COMMENTS #================= ## classified as [minor] and [major] 173 MPLS Fast Reroute [RFC4090], [RFC5286] and [RFC7490] is a useful and 174 widely deployed tool for minimizing packet loss in the case of a link 175 or node failure. [minor] We should add the most advanced flavor of LFA draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa-17 in this FRR list. 319 misordering, and allow for fragmentation. In this case, the first 320 nibble the data that immediately follows after the MPLS BoS is set to 321 0000b to identify the presence of PW CW. [minor] the "0000b" threw me off-guard. Maybe better to say "0000 (binary)" to align with formal writing conventions. What about considering a to reference section 2.: " If the first nibble of a PW packet carried over an MPLS PSN has a value of 0, this indicates that the packet starts with a PWMCW." 330 Bit Index Explicit Replication (BIER) [RFC8296] traffic can also be 331 encapsulated over MPLS. In this case, BIER has defined 0101b as the 332 value for the first nibble in the data that immediately appears after [minor] s/0101b/0101 (binary)/ |
2024-09-17
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13 | Gunter Van de Velde | Ballot comment text updated for Gunter Van de Velde |
2024-09-17
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13 | Gunter Van de Velde | [Ballot comment] # Gunter Van de Velde, RTG AD, comments for draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-13 # Please find the following non-blocking comments observed when reading the draft. Please … [Ballot comment] # Gunter Van de Velde, RTG AD, comments for draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-13 # Please find the following non-blocking comments observed when reading the draft. Please use at your discretion #DETAILED COMMENTS #================= ## classified as [minor] and [major] 173 MPLS Fast Reroute [RFC4090], [RFC5286] and [RFC7490] is a useful and 174 widely deployed tool for minimizing packet loss in the case of a link 175 or node failure. [minor] We should add the most advanced flavor of LFA draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa-17 in this FRR list. 319 misordering, and allow for fragmentation. In this case, the first 320 nibble the data that immediately follows after the MPLS BoS is set to 321 0000b to identify the presence of PW CW. [minor] the "0000b" threw me off-guard. Maybe better to say "0000 (binary)" to align with formal writing conventions. What about considering a to reference section 2.: " If the first nibble of a PW packet carried over an MPLS PSN has a value of 0, this indicates that the packet starts with a PWMCW." 330 Bit Index Explicit Replication (BIER) [RFC8296] traffic can also be 331 encapsulated over MPLS. In this case, BIER has defined 0101b as the 332 value for the first nibble in the data that immediately appears after [minor] s/0000b/0000 (binary)/ |
2024-09-17
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13 | Gunter Van de Velde | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Gunter Van de Velde |
2024-09-16
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13 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - No Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed |
2024-09-16
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13 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Roman Danyliw has been changed to No Objection from No Record |
2024-09-16
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13 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot comment] Thank you to Vijay Gurbani for the GENART review. |
2024-09-16
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13 | Roman Danyliw | Ballot comment text updated for Roman Danyliw |
2024-09-16
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13 | Magnus Westerlund | Assignment of request for Last Call review by TSVART to Tommy Pauly was marked no-response |
2024-09-14
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13 | Erik Kline | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Erik Kline |
2024-09-13
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13 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-13.txt |
2024-09-13
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13 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-09-13
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13 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-09-13
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12 | Yaron Sheffer | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Yaron Sheffer. Sent review to list. |
2024-09-13
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12 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - No Actions Needed |
2024-09-13
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12 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-12.txt |
2024-09-13
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12 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-09-13
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12 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-09-12
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11 | Jenny Bui | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2024-09-19 |
2024-09-12
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11 | Jim Guichard | Ballot has been issued |
2024-09-12
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11 | Jim Guichard | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Jim Guichard |
2024-09-12
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11 | Jim Guichard | Created "Approve" ballot |
2024-09-12
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11 | Jim Guichard | IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead |
2024-09-12
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11 | Jim Guichard | Ballot writeup was changed |
2024-09-11
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11 | (System) | IESG state changed to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead from In Last Call |
2024-09-07
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11 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Yaron Sheffer |
2024-09-04
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11 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - No Actions Needed from IANA - Review Needed |
2024-09-04
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11 | David Dong | (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: IANA has completed its review of draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-11, which is currently in Last Call, and has the following comments: We … (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: IANA has completed its review of draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-11, which is currently in Last Call, and has the following comments: We understand that this document doesn't require any registry actions. While it's often helpful for a document's IANA Considerations section to remain in place upon publication even if there are no actions, if the authors strongly prefer to remove it, we do not object. If this assessment is not accurate, please respond as soon as possible. For definitions of IANA review states, please see: https://datatracker.ietf.org/help/state/draft/iana-review Thank you, David Dong IANA Services Sr. Specialist |
2024-09-03
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11 | Magnus Westerlund | Request for Last Call review by TSVART is assigned to Tommy Pauly |
2024-09-02
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11 | Vijay Gurbani | Request for Last Call review by GENART Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier … Request for Last Call review by GENART Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2024-09-02
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11 | Vijay Gurbani | Request for Last Call review by GENART Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani. |
2024-09-02
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11 | Bruno Decraene | Request for Last Call review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Bruno Decraene. Sent review to list. |
2024-09-01
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11 | Daniam Henriques | Request for Last Call review by RTGDIR is assigned to Bruno Decraene |
2024-08-29
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11 | Carlos Pignataro | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Linda Dunbar |
2024-08-29
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11 | Jean Mahoney | Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Vijay Gurbani |
2024-08-28
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11 | Liz Flynn | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Review Needed |
2024-08-28
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11 | Liz Flynn | The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2024-09-11): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases@ietf.org, james.n.guichard@futurewei.com, loa@pi.nu, mpls-chairs@ietf.org, mpls@ietf.org … The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2024-09-11): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases@ietf.org, james.n.guichard@futurewei.com, loa@pi.nu, mpls-chairs@ietf.org, mpls@ietf.org, tony.li@tony.li Reply-To: last-call@ietf.org Sender: Subject: Last Call: (Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and MPLS Ancillary Data) to Informational RFC The IESG has received a request from the Multiprotocol Label Switching WG (mpls) to consider the following document: - 'Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and MPLS Ancillary Data' as Informational RFC The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2024-09-11. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Abstract This document presents use cases that have a common feature in that they may be addressed by encoding network action indicators and associated ancillary data within MPLS packets. There is community interest in extending the MPLS data plane to carry such indicators and ancillary data to address the use cases that are described in this document. The use cases described in this document are not an exhaustive set, but rather the ones that are actively discussed by members of the IETF MPLS, PALS, and DetNet working groups. The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases/ No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. |
2024-08-28
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11 | Liz Flynn | IESG state changed to In Last Call from Last Call Requested |
2024-08-28
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11 | Liz Flynn | Last call announcement was generated |
2024-08-28
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11 | Jim Guichard | Last call was requested |
2024-08-28
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11 | Jim Guichard | Last call announcement was generated |
2024-08-28
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11 | Jim Guichard | Ballot approval text was generated |
2024-08-28
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11 | Jim Guichard | Ballot writeup was generated |
2024-08-28
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11 | Jim Guichard | IESG state changed to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup |
2024-08-28
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11 | Jim Guichard | Requested Last Call review by RTGDIR |
2024-08-28
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11 | Jim Guichard | Requested Last Call review by OPSDIR |
2024-08-28
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11 | Jim Guichard | Requested Last Call review by SECDIR |
2024-08-27
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11 | (System) | Changed action holders to Jim Guichard (IESG state changed) |
2024-08-27
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11 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised I-D Needed |
2024-08-27
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11 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-11.txt |
2024-08-27
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11 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-08-27
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11 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-08-27
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10 | (System) | Changed action holders to Greg Mirsky, Tarek Saad, Kiran Makhijani, Haoyu Song (IESG state changed) |
2024-08-27
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10 | Jim Guichard | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation::Revised I-D Needed from AD Evaluation |
2024-08-27
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10 | Jim Guichard | AD review provided === https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/mpls/2rGVtq7bNhwlzA4THQI46EaDl54/ === |
2024-08-23
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10 | Jim Guichard | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation from Publication Requested |
2024-07-09
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10 | Tony Li | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? This document reached broad agreement. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There has been controversy over all aspects of MNA. There were no specific points that were especially controversial. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No one seems extremely discontent at this point. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Not applicable. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. MPLS, PALS and DETNET are actively collaborating on MNA. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. Not applicable. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? Not applicable. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. Not applicable. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? The document is definitely needed to help motivate and bound MNA development. It is reasonably clearly written and complete. It contains no 'design' per se, so it is neither correct nor incorrect. It is ready for the Area Director. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? This document falls under the routing area. This document touches on network programming and network slicing, but as it does not propose solutions for these topics, it does not require further review. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? This document is intended to be Informational. This is appropriate because this is a catalog of use cases and does not specify a standard. MNA solutions will follow in subsequent documents. Datatracker has been updated to indicate that this is Informational. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. All authors and contributors were polled and responded that they had no IPR against this draft. No IPR claims have been filed. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Yes, all authors and contributors have responded. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) I see no issues. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. There are only informative references, which seems appropriate. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. None. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? None. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No, this will not change the status of any other RFC. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). The IANA considerations section seems appropriate. This document does not propose a standard, so there is nothing for IANA to do. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. This document does not create any new registries. 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10 | Tony Li | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? This document reached broad agreement. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There has been controversy over all aspects of MNA. There were no specific points that were especially controversial. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No one seems extremely discontent at this point. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Not applicable. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. MPLS, PALS and DETNET are actively collaborating on MNA. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. Not applicable. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? Not applicable. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. Not applicable. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? The document is definitely needed to help motivate and bound MNA development. It is reasonably clearly written and complete. It contains no 'design' per se, so it is neither correct nor incorrect. It is ready for the Area Director. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? This document falls under the routing area. This document touches on network programming and network slicing, but as it does not propose solutions for these topics, it does not require further review. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? This document is intended to be Informational. This is appropriate because this is a catalog of use cases and does not specify a standard. MNA solutions will follow in subsequent documents. Datatracker has been updated to indicate that this is Informational. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. All authors and contributors were polled and responded that they had no IPR against this draft. No IPR claims have been filed. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Yes, all authors and contributors have responded. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) I see no issues. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. There are only informative references, which seems appropriate. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. None. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? None. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No, this will not change the status of any other RFC. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). The IANA considerations section seems appropriate. This document does not propose a standard, so there is nothing for IANA to do. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. This document does not create any new registries. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/iesg/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2024-07-09
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10 | Tony Li | IETF WG state changed to Submitted to IESG for Publication from WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up |
2024-07-09
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10 | Tony Li | IESG state changed to Publication Requested from I-D Exists |
2024-07-09
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10 | Tony Li | IESG state changed to Publication Requested from I-D Exists |
2024-07-09
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10 | Tony Li | Responsible AD changed to Jim Guichard |
2024-07-09
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10 | (System) | Changed action holders to Jim Guichard (IESG state changed) |
2024-07-09
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10 | Tony Li | Document is now in IESG state Publication Requested |
2024-07-09
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10 | Tony Li | Responsible AD changed to Jim Guichard |
2024-07-09
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10 | Tony Li | Document is now in IESG state Publication Requested |
2024-07-09
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10 | Tony Li | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? This document reached broad agreement. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There has been controversy over all aspects of MNA. There were no specific points that were especially controversial. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No one seems extremely discontent at this point. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Not applicable. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. MPLS, PALS and DETNET are actively collaborating on MNA. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. Not applicable. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? Not applicable. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. Not applicable. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? The document is definitely needed to help motivate and bound MNA development. It is reasonably clearly written and complete. It contains no 'design' per se, so it is neither correct nor incorrect. It is ready for the Area Director. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? This document falls under the routing area. This document touches on network programming and network slicing, but as it does not propose solutions for these topics, it does not require further review. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? This document is intended to be Informational. This is appropriate because this is a catalog of use cases and does not specify a standard. MNA solutions will follow in subsequent documents. Datatracker has been updated to indicate that this is Informational. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. All authors and contributors were polled and responded that they had no IPR against this draft. No IPR claims have been filed. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. Yes, all authors and contributors have responded. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) I see no issues. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. There are only informative references, which seems appropriate. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. None. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? None. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No, this will not change the status of any other RFC. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). The IANA considerations section seems appropriate. This document does not propose a standard, so there is nothing for IANA to do. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. This document does not create any new registries. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://wiki.ietf.org/group/iesg/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2024-07-09
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10 | Tony Li | Intended Status changed to Informational from None |
2024-07-08
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10 | Tony Li | IETF WG state changed to WG Consensus: Waiting for Write-Up from In WG Last Call |
2024-07-08
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10 | Tony Li | IETF WG state changed to In WG Last Call from WG Document |
2024-06-20
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10 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-10.txt |
2024-06-20
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10 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-06-20
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10 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-06-12
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09 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-09.txt |
2024-06-12
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09 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-06-12
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09 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-06-04
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08 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-08.txt |
2024-06-04
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08 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-06-04
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08 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-05-20
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07 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-07.txt |
2024-05-20
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07 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-05-20
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07 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-05-16
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06 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-06.txt |
2024-05-16
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06 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-05-16
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06 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-05-06
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05 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-05.txt |
2024-05-06
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05 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-05-06
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05 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2024-04-13
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04 | Dhruv Dhody | Request for Early review by RTGDIR Completed: Has Issues. Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody. Sent review to list. |
2024-04-09
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04 | Daniam Henriques | Request for Early review by RTGDIR is assigned to Dhruv Dhody |
2024-04-09
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04 | Tony Li | Requested Early review by RTGDIR |
2024-04-02
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04 | Tony Li | Notification list changed to loa@pi.nu, tony.li@tony.li from loa@pi.nu because the document shepherd was set |
2024-04-02
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04 | Tony Li | Document shepherd changed to Tony Li |
2024-02-10
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04 | Greg Mirsky | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-04.txt |
2024-02-10
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04 | Greg Mirsky | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Greg Mirsky) |
2024-02-10
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04 | Greg Mirsky | Uploaded new revision |
2023-11-03
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03 | Adrian Farrel | Added to session: IETF-118: mpls Thu-1200 |
2023-10-22
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03 | Tarek Saad | Document shepherd changed to (None) |
2023-09-15
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03 | Tarek Saad | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-03.txt |
2023-09-15
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03 | (System) | New version approved |
2023-09-15
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03 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Greg Mirsky , Haoyu Song , Kiran Makhijani , Tarek Saad |
2023-09-15
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03 | Tarek Saad | Uploaded new revision |
2023-09-14
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02 | (System) | Document has expired |
2023-06-21
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02 | Loa Andersson | Notification list changed to loa@pi.nu because the document shepherd was set |
2023-06-21
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02 | Loa Andersson | Document shepherd changed to Loa Andersson |
2023-03-13
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02 | Tarek Saad | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-02.txt |
2023-03-13
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02 | Tarek Saad | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Tarek Saad) |
2023-03-13
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02 | Tarek Saad | Uploaded new revision |
2022-10-24
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01 | Tarek Saad | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-01.txt |
2022-10-24
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01 | Tarek Saad | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Tarek Saad) |
2022-10-24
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01 | Tarek Saad | Uploaded new revision |
2022-06-20
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00 | Loa Andersson | This document now replaces draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases instead of None |
2022-05-19
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00 | Tarek Saad | New version available: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-00.txt |
2022-05-19
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00 | Nicolai Leymann | WG -00 approved |
2022-05-19
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00 | Tarek Saad | Set submitter to "Tarek Saad ", replaces to (none) and sent approval email to group chairs: mpls-chairs@ietf.org |
2022-05-19
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00 | Tarek Saad | Uploaded new revision |