Summary: Needs 7 more YES or NO OBJECTION positions to pass.
A fine extension. Just three editorial nits: -- Section 1 — There is no assumption that a YANG data structure can only be used as a top-level abstraction, instead of nested within some other data structure. It’s a little odd to use “instead of” after “there is no assumption”; I can’t explain it fully, but it feels odd to this native English speaker. I suggest this: NEW There is no assumption that a YANG data structure can only be used as a top-level abstraction, and it may also be nested within some other data structure. END similar to the existing YANG "augment" statement. Make it “similarly”. — Section 1.1.1 — The following terms are defined in the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) [RFC8342]. and are not redefined here: The period after the citation should be a comma.
This is a fine document. Can you show and example similar to what in A.3 with 2 addressbook entries?