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Subject: Last Call: <draft-ietf-ntp-interleaved-modes-04.txt> (NTP Interleaved Modes) to Proposed Standard


The IESG has received a request from the Network Time Protocol WG (ntp) to
consider the following document: - 'NTP Interleaved Modes'
  <draft-ietf-ntp-interleaved-modes-04.txt> as Proposed Standard

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2021-04-14. Exceptionally, comments may
be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning
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Abstract


  This document extends the specification of Network Time Protocol
  (NTP) version 4 in RFC 5905 with special modes called the NTP
  interleaved modes, that enable NTP servers to provide their clients
  and peers with more accurate transmit timestamps that are available
  only after transmitting NTP packets.  More specifically, this
  document describes three modes: interleaved client/server,
  interleaved symmetric, and interleaved broadcast.




The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ntp-interleaved-modes/



No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.

Just a few random thoughts.  Feel free to ignore.  I'll advance this
draft -04 to request LC, so no need to rev a -05 at this time.

[[ comments / questions / nits ]]

[ section 2 ]

* It's probably just me, but "to the following request" read to me as though
  there would be, following this sentence, a description of the next request.
  Up to you, but perhaps "to the subsequent request"?

* The diagram in Figure 1 (and 2 and 3) is very helpful, thank you.

  If I may, though, I found the use of "'" to be slightly confusing.  It
  clashed with my expectations from (increasingly remote in time) maths
  where I would consider x' to be a future/subsequent value different from
  x (where the direction of change is reversed, if you see what I mean).

  I see that it's important to keep the T1/T3/... formula text consistent
  and simple.  Perhaps consider an alternate modifier symbol, like t1~, t11~
  or something (~ sometimes is used to indicate "approximate" values,
  I think)?

  If you do consider this, then don't forget to make Figures 2 and 3
  consistent as well.

(1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header?

Proposed standard. The RFC type is indicated on the title page header.

This document updates RFC5905, replacing text from RFC5095 to recommend the use of transport-protocol ephemeral port randomization for NTP modes where use of the service port is not required. Thus, it requires a Standards Track document.


(2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections:

Technical Summary:

Relevant content can frequently be found in the abstract and/or introduction of the document. If not, this may be an indication that there are deficiencies in the abstract or introduction.

The Network Time Protocol can operate in several modes.  Some of these modes are based on the receipt of unsolicited packets, and therefore require the use of a well-known port as the local port number.  However, in the case of NTP modes where the use of a well-known port is not required, employing such well-known port unnecessarily increases the ability of attackers to perform blind/off-path attacks.  This document formally updates RFC5905, recommending the use of transport-protocol ephemeral port randomization for those modes where use of the NTP well-known port is not required.
 
 
Working Group Summary:

Was there anything in WG process that is worth noting? For example, was there controversy about particular points or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough?

There was nothing particularly noteworthy in the WG process.


Document Quality:

Are there existing implementations of the protocol? Have a significant number of vendors indicated their plan to implement the specification? Are there any reviewers that merit special mention as having done a thorough review, e.g., one that resulted in important changes or a conclusion that the document had no substantive issues? If there was a MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, Media Type or other expert review, what was its course (briefly)? In the case of a Media Type review, on what date was the request posted?

There are multiple implementations of the document. They are discussed in Section 5, entitled "Implementation Status".


Personnel:

Who is the Document Shepherd? Who is the Responsible Area Director?

Karen O'Donoghue is the Document Shepherd. Erik Kline is the Responsible Area Director.


(3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the Document Shepherd. If this version of the document is not ready for publication, please explain why the document is being forwarded to the IESG.

This document is an update of RFC5905. The document shepherd has reviewed the proposed change to that document, and has performed a thorough read of the entire document.


(4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed?

No.


(5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, AAA, DNS, DHCP, XML, or internationalization? If so, describe the review that took place.

No.


(6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here.

There are no concerns.


(7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. If not, explain why?

All co-authors have confirmed conformance.


(8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? If so, summarize any WG discussion and conclusion regarding the IPR disclosures.

No.


(9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it?

There is WG consensus behind the document.


(10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.)

No.


(11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. (See http://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ and the Internet-Drafts Checklist). Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough.

ID nits was run on 11 Feb 2021. The results at that time were:
Summary: 0 errors (**), 0 flaws (~~), 3 warnings (==), 2 comments (--).
These are minor issues that will be addressed during the next stage of publication including the update of an outdated informative reference.

(12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

None required.


(13) Have all references within this document been identified as either normative or informative?

Yes.


(14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the plan for their completion?

No.


(15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? If so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last Call procedure.

There are no downward references.


(16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? Are those RFCs listed on the title page header, listed in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If the RFCs are not listed in the Abstract and Introduction, explain why, and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to the other RFCs is discussed. If this information is not in the document, explain why the WG considers it unnecessary.

This document updates RFC5905. This is listed on the title page header and the abstract, and discussed in the introduction.


(17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all protocol extensions that the document makes are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that newly created IANA registries include a detailed specification of the initial contents for the registry, that allocations procedures for future registrations are defined, and a reasonable name for the new registry has been suggested (see RFC 8126).

There are no IANA considerations.


(18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future allocations. Provide any public guidance that the IESG would find useful in selecting the IANA Experts for these new registries.

None.


(19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, YANG modules, etc.

None.


(20) If the document contains a YANG module, has the module been checked with any of the recommended validation tools (https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools) for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in RFC8342?

This document does not contain a YANG module.

(1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header?

Proposed standard. The RFC type is indicated on the title page header.

This document updates RFC5905, replacing text from RFC5095 to recommend the use of transport-protocol ephemeral port randomization for NTP modes where use of the service port is not required. Thus, it requires a Standards Track document.


(2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections:

Technical Summary:

Relevant content can frequently be found in the abstract and/or introduction of the document. If not, this may be an indication that there are deficiencies in the abstract or introduction.

The Network Time Protocol can operate in several modes.  Some of these modes are based on the receipt of unsolicited packets, and therefore require the use of a well-known port as the local port number.  However, in the case of NTP modes where the use of a well-known port is not required, employing such well-known port unnecessarily increases the ability of attackers to perform blind/off-path attacks.  This document formally updates RFC5905, recommending the use of transport-protocol ephemeral port randomization for those modes where use of the NTP well-known port is not required.
 
 
Working Group Summary:

Was there anything in WG process that is worth noting? For example, was there controversy about particular points or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough?

There was nothing particularly noteworthy in the WG process.


Document Quality:

Are there existing implementations of the protocol? Have a significant number of vendors indicated their plan to implement the specification? Are there any reviewers that merit special mention as having done a thorough review, e.g., one that resulted in important changes or a conclusion that the document had no substantive issues? If there was a MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, Media Type or other expert review, what was its course (briefly)? In the case of a Media Type review, on what date was the request posted?

There are multiple implementations of the document. They are discussed in Section 5, entitled "Implementation Status".


Personnel:

Who is the Document Shepherd? Who is the Responsible Area Director?

Karen O'Donoghue is the Document Shepherd. Erik Kline is the Responsible Area Director.


(3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the Document Shepherd. If this version of the document is not ready for publication, please explain why the document is being forwarded to the IESG.

This document is an update of RFC5905. The document shepherd has reviewed the proposed change to that document, and has performed a thorough read of the entire document.


(4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed?

No.


(5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, AAA, DNS, DHCP, XML, or internationalization? If so, describe the review that took place.

No.


(6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here.

There are no concerns.


(7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. If not, explain why?

All co-authors have confirmed conformance.


(8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? If so, summarize any WG discussion and conclusion regarding the IPR disclosures.

No.


(9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it?

There is WG consensus behind the document.


(10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.)

No.


(11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. (See http://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ and the Internet-Drafts Checklist). Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough.

ID nits was run on 11 Feb 2021. The results at that time were:
Summary: 0 errors (**), 0 flaws (~~), 3 warnings (==), 2 comments (--).
These are minor issues that will be addressed during the next stage of publication including the update of an outdated informative reference.

(12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

None required.


(13) Have all references within this document been identified as either normative or informative?

Yes.


(14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the plan for their completion?

No.


(15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? If so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last Call procedure.

There are no downward references.


(16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? Are those RFCs listed on the title page header, listed in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If the RFCs are not listed in the Abstract and Introduction, explain why, and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to the other RFCs is discussed. If this information is not in the document, explain why the WG considers it unnecessary.

This document updates RFC5905. This is listed on the title page header and the abstract, and discussed in the introduction.


(17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all protocol extensions that the document makes are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that newly created IANA registries include a detailed specification of the initial contents for the registry, that allocations procedures for future registrations are defined, and a reasonable name for the new registry has been suggested (see RFC 8126).

There are no IANA considerations.


(18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future allocations. Provide any public guidance that the IESG would find useful in selecting the IANA Experts for these new registries.

None.


(19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, YANG modules, etc.

None.


(20) If the document contains a YANG module, has the module been checked with any of the recommended validation tools (https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools) for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in RFC8342?

This document does not contain a YANG module.