RADIUS Extensions for DHCP-Configured Services
draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-12

Yes

Paul Wouters
Éric Vyncke
(Robert Wilton)

No Objection

Erik Kline
John Scudder
Murray Kucherawy
Roman Danyliw
Warren Kumari
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
(Alvaro Retana)
(Andrew Alston)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 10 and is now closed.

Paul Wouters
Yes
Comment (2023-03-14 for -11) Sent 
       This document targets deployments where a trusted relationship is in place between
       the RADIUS client and server with communication optionally secured by IPsec or
       Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC6614].

I don't understand what this sentence is trying to say.

Does table 7 really clarify the sentences used earlier that say exactly the same thing but more compact?

Why "Expert Review" and not "Specification Required" or "RFC Required" ? 


    Registration requests are to be sent to radius-dhcp-review@ietf.org

I thought we didn't put these emails in the documents anymore? But I guess IANA will get back to you on that.

NITS:

    As a reminder,

I would remove this part of the text.
Éric Vyncke
(was Discuss) Yes
Comment (2023-03-30) Sent 
Thanks for addressing my previous DISCUSS[1], I sincerely think that the document is better now.

Regards

-éric

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/yV4NKUp6tcmFGTkXomh7s1vmwhY/
Erik Kline
No Objection
Comment (2023-02-25 for -10) Not sent 
# Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-10
CC @ekline

## Nits

### S1

* "such as policy" -> "such a policy"
John Scudder
No Objection
Murray Kucherawy
No Objection
Roman Danyliw
No Objection
Warren Kumari
No Objection
Comment (2023-03-15 for -11) Sent 
Firstly, thank you to the authors for the document. Also much thanks to Ralf Weber for reviewing and updating his DNSDIR review (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-10-dnsdir-telechat-weber-2023-03-12/), and the authors for addressing the nits.

Like Eric I wonder what should happen with a RADIUS client receiving a non-permitted DHCP option - but perhaps this is already well known and understood?
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
No Objection
Robert Wilton Former IESG member
Yes
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                            Alvaro Retana Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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                            Andrew Alston Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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