Document shepherd write-up for 2011-07-02
(1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document?
> Steven Blake, PCN co-chair <firstname.lastname@example.org>
Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the
document and, in particular, does he or she believe this
version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication?
> Yes & yes.
(1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members
and from key non-WG members?
> WG members - Yes
Does the Document Shepherd have
any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that
have been performed?
(1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document
needs more review from a particular or broader perspective,
e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with
AAA, internationalization or XML?
(1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or
issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director
and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he
or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or
has concerns whether there really is a need for it.
event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated
that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those
> Not applicable
Has an IPR disclosure related to this document
been filed? If so, please include a reference to the
disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion on
(1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it
represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with
others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and
agree with it?
> This document has been under development for several years.
> The -04 version generated significant discussion on the
> working group mailing list. The editor addressed the comments
> to everyone's satisfaction. There are no vocal dissenters.
(1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme
discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in
separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It
should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is
entered into the ID Tracker.)
(1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the
document satisfies all ID nits? (See the Internet-Drafts Checklist
and http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are
not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document
met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB
Doctor, media type and URI type reviews?
> The document passes ID-nits.
(1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and
> The document is a rationale document and has no normative
> references. The reference section is entitled "Informative
Are there normative references to documents that
are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear
state? If such normative references exist, what is the
strategy for their completion? Are there normative references
that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If
so, list these downward references to support the Area
Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967].
> Not applicable.
(1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA
consideration section exists and is consistent with the body
of the document?
> An IANA Considerations section exists, but no requests are
> made to IANA.
If the document specifies protocol
extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA
registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If
the document creates a new registry, does it define the
proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation
procedure for future registrations? Does it suggest a
reasonable name for the new registry? See [RFC5226]. If the
document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd
conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG
can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation?
> Not applicable
(1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the
document that are written in a formal language, such as XML
code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in
an automated checker?
> Not applicable
(1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document
Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document
Announcement Write-Up? Recent examples can be found in the
"Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval
announcement contains the following sections:
> The PCN mechanism in routers in the interior of a PCN domain marks
> packets when certain configured rates are exceeded. The PCN working
> group explored a number of approaches for encoding this pre-congestion
> information into the IP header. This document describes the various
> approaches that were examined and discusses the constraints that had
> to be satisfied by a viable encoding mechanism.
Working Group Summary
> The document was subject to thorough review by the PCN working
> group, and strong consensus for publication was reached.
> The document was reviewed by the document shephard (Steven Blake).