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RADIUS Authentication Client MIB for IPv6
draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-04

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Date Rev. By Action
2006-08-31
04 (System) This was part of a ballot set with: draft-ietf-radext-rfc2619bis
2006-07-14
04 Amy Vezza State Changes to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent by Amy Vezza
2006-07-10
04 Amy Vezza IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent
2006-07-10
04 Amy Vezza IESG has approved the document
2006-07-10
04 Amy Vezza Closed "Approve" ballot
2006-07-07
04 (System) Removed from agenda for telechat - 2006-07-06
2006-07-06
04 Amy Vezza State Changes to Approved-announcement to be sent from IESG Evaluation by Amy Vezza
2006-07-06
04 Lisa Dusseault [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Lisa Dusseault by Lisa Dusseault
2006-07-06
04 David Kessens [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for David Kessens by David Kessens
2006-07-06
04 Jon Peterson [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jon Peterson by Jon Peterson
2006-07-05
04 Ross Callon [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Ross Callon by Ross Callon
2006-07-05
04 Cullen Jennings [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Cullen Jennings by Cullen Jennings
2006-07-05
04 Bill Fenner [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Bill Fenner by Bill Fenner
2006-07-05
04 Mark Townsley [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Mark Townsley by Mark Townsley
2006-07-05
04 Sam Hartman [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Sam Hartman by Sam Hartman
2006-07-05
04 Jari Arkko [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jari Arkko by Jari Arkko
2006-07-03
04 Ted Hardie [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Ted Hardie by Ted Hardie
2006-07-03
04 Magnus Westerlund [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Magnus Westerlund by Magnus Westerlund
2006-07-02
04 Dan Romascanu Note field has been cleared by Dan Romascanu
2006-06-30
04 Brian Carpenter [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Brian Carpenter by Brian Carpenter
2006-06-30
04 Lars Eggert [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Lars Eggert by Lars Eggert
2006-06-29
04 (System) New version available: draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-04.txt
2006-06-29
04 Dan Romascanu State Changes to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for Writeup by Dan Romascanu
2006-06-29
04 Dan Romascanu Placed on agenda for telechat - 2006-07-06 by Dan Romascanu
2006-06-29
04 Dan Romascanu
[Note]: 'Version 04 was submitted on Monday 6/26, prior to the I-D submission deadline. Please use this version for review, as soon as it shows …
[Note]: 'Version 04 was submitted on Monday 6/26, prior to the I-D submission deadline. Please use this version for review, as soon as it shows up in the I-D repository.' added by Dan Romascanu
2006-06-29
04 Dan Romascanu [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Dan Romascanu
2006-06-29
04 Dan Romascanu Ballot has been issued by Dan Romascanu
2006-06-29
04 Dan Romascanu Created "Approve" ballot
2006-06-12
04 (System) State has been changed to Waiting for Writeup from In Last Call by system
2006-05-29
04 Amy Vezza Last call sent
2006-05-29
04 Amy Vezza State Changes to In Last Call from Last Call Requested by Amy Vezza
2006-05-29
04 Dan Romascanu State Changes to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup by Dan Romascanu
2006-05-29
04 Dan Romascanu Last Call was requested by Dan Romascanu
2006-05-29
04 (System) Ballot writeup text was added
2006-05-29
04 (System) Last call text was added
2006-05-29
04 (System) Ballot approval text was added
2006-05-15
04 (System) Sub state has been changed to AD Follow up from New Id Needed
2006-05-15
03 (System) New version available: draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-03.txt
2006-03-30
04 Dan Romascanu Shepherding AD has been changed to Dan Romascanu from Bert Wijnen
2006-03-24
04 Bert Wijnen State Changes to AD Evaluation::Revised ID Needed from AD Evaluation::External Party by Bert Wijnen
2006-03-19
04 Bert Wijnen State Changes to AD Evaluation::External Party from Publication Requested by Bert Wijnen
2006-03-19
04 Bert Wijnen
AD review posted to WG list.
Waiting for response from WG chairs.

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-radiusext@ops.ietf.org
[mailto:owner-radiusext@ops.ietf.org]On Behalf Of Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
Sent: …
AD review posted to WG list.
Waiting for response from WG chairs.

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-radiusext@ops.ietf.org
[mailto:owner-radiusext@ops.ietf.org]On Behalf Of Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
Sent: Saturday, March 18, 2006 23:44
To: radiusext@ops.ietf.org
Cc: Dan Romascanu (E-mail); David Kessens (E-mail)
Subject: AD review of rfc2618bis-02 through rfc2621bis-02


Editor and WG,

Dan had already done MIB doctor review and he is basically OK
I believe). So I did a quick check in my role as AD.

  draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-02.txt
  draft-ietf-radext-rfc2619bis-02.txt
  draft-ietf-radext-rfc2620bis-02.txt
  draft-ietf-radext-rfc2621bis-02.txt


I did just do draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-02.txt
The others probably have similar minor issues.

As far as I am concerned, we can do IETF Last Call (these go
for standards track so we must do IETF LC) now. You can then
consider below comments as the first set of IETF LC comments.
And then address them right after IETF Last Call, or maybe you
want to wait and see if there are any IESG comments that you
could address at the same time. By that time, Dan will tell
you how to proceed.

Bert
---- comments
somewhat MUST change comments (easy, and basically admin
bureaucracy, but would be good to change):

  We do want a copyright statement in the DESCRIPTION clause of a module
  identity. So change
  OLD:
          DESCRIPTION
                "The MIB module for entities implementing the client
                side of the Remote Authentication Dial-In User Service
                (RADIUS) authentication protocol."
  NEW:
          DESCRIPTION
                "The MIB module for entities implementing the client
                side of the Remote Authentication Dial-In User Service
                (RADIUS) authentication protocol.
                Copyright (C) The Internet Society (2006).  This version
                of this MIB module is part of RFC xxxx; see the RFC
                itself for full legal notices."
          -- RFC Ed.: replace xxxx with actual RFC number & remove this note


-  radiusAuthServerInetAddress OBJECT-TYPE
        SYNTAX    InetAddress
        MAX-ACCESS read-only
        STATUS    current
        DESCRIPTION
              "The IP address of the RADIUS authentication
                server referred to in this table entry, using
                the version neutral IP address format."
        ::= { radiusAuthServerExtEntry 3 }

  according to RFC4001, you MUST specify which object of SYNTAX
  InetAddressType controls the format of this object. I t is clear
  which one  it is, b ut it would be good to add that.

- radiusAuthClientServerInetPortNumber
  According to RFC4001, you must specify what the value zero means
  for this object.

- for this one
  radiusAuthClientExtMIBCompliance MODULE-COMPLIANCE
        STATUS  current
        DESCRIPTION
              "The compliance statement for authentication
              clients implementing the RADIUS Authentication
              Client IPv6 Extensions MIB.  Implementation of
              this module is for entities that support IPv6,
              or support IPv4 and IPv6."
        MODULE  -- this module
              MANDATORY-GROUPS { radiusAuthClientExtMIBGroup }

        ::= { radiusAuthClientMIBCompliances 2 }

  I think it would be better to do:

  radiusAuthClientExtMIBCompliance MODULE-COMPLIANCE
        STATUS  current
        DESCRIPTION
              "The compliance statement for authentication
              clients implementing the RADIUS Authentication
              Client IPv6 Extensions MIB.  Implementation of
              this module is for entities that support IPv6,
              or support IPv4 and IPv6."
        MODULE  -- this module
              MANDATORY-GROUPS { radiusAuthClientExtMIBGroup }

        OBJECT    radiusAuthServerInetAddressType
        SYNTAX    InetAddressType { ipv4(1), ipv6(2) }
        DESCRIPTION
          "An implementation is only required to support IPv4 and
            globally unique IPv6 addresses."

        OBJECT    radiusAuthServerInetAddress
        SYNTAX    InetAddress (SIZE(4|16))
        DESCRIPTION
          "An implementation is only required to support IPv4 and
            globally unique IPv6 addresses."

- real nits and admin stuff

  !! Contains embedded space:
  P004 L021:    textual conventions defined in this memo [RFC 4001] that support all

  !! Missing citation for Normative reference:
  P020 L018:    [RFC2574]  Blumenthal, U. and B. Wijnen, "User-based Security Model

  !! Missing citation for Normative reference:
  P020 L022:    [RFC2575]  Wijnen, B., Presuhn, R., and K. McCloghrie, "View-based

  !! Missing citation for Normative reference:
  P020 L049:    [RFC3411]  Harrington, D., Presuhn, R., and B. Wijnen, "An

  !! Missing citation for Normative reference:
  P021 L006:    [RFC3418]  Presuhn, R., "Management Information Base (MIB) for the

  RFC2574 and RFC2575 should be replaced by RFC3414 and RFC3415

  RFC3410 is better listed as an Informative reference.

  In general, pls re-check all citations/references.
2006-03-19
04 Bert Wijnen State Change Notice email list have been change to dnelson@enterasys.com, aboba@internaut.com, bernard_aboba@hotmail.com;dromasca@avaya.com from dnelson@enterasys.com, aboba@internaut.com, bernard_aboba@hotmail.com
2006-02-03
04 David Kessens Shepherding AD has been changed to Bert Wijnen from David Kessens
2006-01-26
04 Dinara Suleymanova Draft Added by Dinara Suleymanova in state Publication Requested
2006-01-23
02 (System) New version available: draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-02.txt
2005-10-20
01 (System) New version available: draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-01.txt
2005-08-31
00 (System) New version available: draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-00.txt