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Thank you for resolving my Discuss point! Original ballot Comment section preserved below: Thanks for the generally well-written document! There are several places in the document where we read about a "list of [...] values includes" that is in fact required to be one of a fixed enumerated set of values. In such cases I would suggest "comprises" or "is" rather than "includes", which could be taken to indicate the possibility of additional values being defined at a later time. Section 2.1 has multiple instances of this, and Section 3.12. as well. Section 2.2 Maybe state explicitly what it's inserted into, for clarity. Section 2.3 "CSR" could expand to either "Customer Support Representative" or "Certificate Signing Request" for some people. I don't know if there's better name to suggest. Section 2.4 I don't know if it's worth saying anything that would remind recipients of their (non-?)obligation to accept time values that correspond to leap seconds, but IIRC we've seen cases in the past of software that chokes when presented with leap-second timestamps.