CUBIC for Fast Long-Distance Networks

Summary: Has enough positions to pass.

Spencer Dawkins Yes

Comment (2017-10-10)
I'm really glad to see this specification entering IESG Evaluation. 

I have a few comments, but most are editorial or (at most) about improving clarity. 

In this text,

   In a smaller BDP network where Standard TCP flows are
   working well, the absolute amount of the window decrease at a loss
   event is always smaller because of the multiplicative decrease.

I got lost on "always smaller" than what - than Standard TCP? Or CUBIC? Or something else? 

Nit: Is "weithed" "weighted", or is it something else?

In 4.7.  Timeout

   In case of timeout, CUBIC follows the standard TCP to reduce cwnd,
   but sets ssthresh using beta_cubic (same as in Section 4.5).

should "standard TCP" be "Standard TCP"? I wasn't watching for other occurrences of "standard TCP", but I noticed a bunch of them.

In this text,

  CUBIC MUST employ a slow start algorithm, when the cwnd is no more
   than ssthresh.  Among the slow start algorithms, CUBIC MAY choose the
   standard TCP slow start [RFC5681] in general networks, or the limited
   slow start [RFC3742] or hybrid slow start [HR08] for high-bandwidth
   and long-distance networks.

is there any guidance you can give implementers about when to choose specific slow start algorithms?

In 5.10.  Incremental Deployment

   CUBIC requires only the change of TCP senders, and does not require
   any assistant of routers.

I'm not parsing the sentence. Is it saying 

   CUBIC requires only changes to TCP senders, and does not require
   any changes to routers.

? Either way, it might be worth pointing out here that no changes to TCP receivers are required, either.

Mirja K├╝hlewind Yes

Deborah Brungard No Objection

Ben Campbell No Objection

Comment (2017-10-11)
I'm a confused by the fact that this draft claims to specify CUBIC, but also cites another document for CUBIC. Which is the authoritative definition? If the answer is "that other document", then some words to clarify that would be helpful.

I gather CUBIC is not an acronym? If correct, why spell it in all-caps?

Benoit Claise No Objection

Comment (2017-10-11)
Some minor issues from Qin Wu's OPS DIR review needs to be taken care of (as agreed by Mirja)

Alissa Cooper No Objection

Suresh Krishnan No Objection

Kathleen Moriarty No Objection

Adam Roach No Objection

Alia Atlas No Record

Warren Kumari No Record

Terry Manderson No Record

Alexey Melnikov No Record

Eric Rescorla No Record

Alvaro Retana No Record