Ballot for draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis
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Thanks for solving my DISCUSS
sounds like another update is forthcomingto address the opsdir reviewers concern, benoit can hold the discuss.
I had trouble parsing "output it to or queue it for" (this occurs twice in the sentence). However, it does not output it to or queue it for that link, although, if appropriate (for example, the frame is multi- destination), it may output it to or queue it for other links. I don't think the text is incorrect, just awkward. Perhaps commas would help? In these three subsection titles, 3.2.1 Change Optimization One 3.2.2 Change Optimization Two 3.2.3 Settling Detection Optimization I found the title for 3.2.3 helpful, but not 3.2.1 or 3.2.2. Is it possible to come up with more descriptive titles? I found For robustness, a TRILL switch sends a number of copies of a Port- Shutdown messages configurable from one to three, which defaults to two copies, at a configurable interval, which defaults to 20 milliseconds (see Section 6.6). difficult to parse. Perhaps For robustness, a TRILL switch sends a configurable number of copies of Port-Shutdown messages separated by a configurable interval. The default number of copies is two, although this can be configured as one copy or as three copies, and the default interval is 20 milliseconds (see Section 6.6). ?
- section 6: is port-shutdown a new potential DoS vector? Shouldn't that be noted here and/or in section 9?