URN Namespace for the North Atlantic Treaty Organization (NATO)
draft-murdock-nato-nid-03

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 02 and is now closed.

(Barry Leiba; former steering group member) Yes

A couple of minor edits are pending in response to Dan's Gen-ART review, to better identify NATO and to note the registration of the namespace in the abstract and intro.

(Adrian Farrel; former steering group member) No Objection

(Alissa Cooper; former steering group member) No Objection

= Section 1 =
"Almost 400 NATO-defined messages
   that conform to ADatP-3 are contained in the Allied Procedural
   Publication Number 11 (APP-11) message catalogue."

A citation here would be good.

(Benoît Claise; former steering group member) No Objection

6. IANA Considerations

   This document defines a URN NID registration of "nato", which is
   requested to be entered into the IANA registry "Uniform Resource
   Names (URN) Namespaces".  The registration template is given in
   section 2.


While it's not really a complex task, I have to search IANA for "Uniform Resource Names (URN) Namespaces" in order to find the [RFC2141][RFC3406] references and find that "IETF consensus.
But why not add it directly in the IANA considerations section, to ease the reviewer lives?
Btw, I reviewed this document in light of http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-leiba-cotton-iana-5226bis-11 (on the same IESG telechat), and it shows an example on page 8, with the IANA-related RFCs for that registry.
Maybe this comment would be more appropriate for http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-leiba-cotton-iana-5226bis-11...



Editorial:
- You might want to add somewhere in the introduction that NATO =  North Atlantic Treaty Organization
and not the National Association of Tobacco Outlets (http://www.acronymfinder.com/NATO.html) :-)
- "with national entities, commercial partners and NGOs."
    NGO?

(Brian Haberman; former steering group member) No Objection

(Jari Arkko; former steering group member) No Objection

(Joel Jaeggli; former steering group member) No Objection

(Kathleen Moriarty; former steering group member) No Objection

(Martin Stiemerling; former steering group member) No Objection

(Pete Resnick; former steering group member) No Objection

(Richard Barnes; former steering group member) No Objection

(Spencer Dawkins; former steering group member) No Objection

(Stephen Farrell; former steering group member) No Objection

(Ted Lemon; former steering group member) No Objection