URN Namespace for the North Atlantic Treaty Organization (NATO)
draft-murdock-nato-nid-03

[Ballot comment]
= Section 1 =
"Almost 400 NATO-defined messages
  that conform to ADatP-3 are contained in the Allied Procedural
  Publication Number 11 (APP-11) message catalogue."

A citation here would be good.

[Ballot comment]
6. IANA Considerations

  This document defines a URN NID registration of "nato", which is
  requested to be entered into the IANA registry "Uniform Resource
  Names (URN) Namespaces".  The registration template is given in
  section 2.


While it's not really a complex task, I have to search IANA for "Uniform Resource Names (URN) Namespaces" in order to find the [RFC2141][RFC3406] references and find that "IETF consensus.
But why not add it directly in the IANA considerations section, to ease the reviewer lives?
Btw, I reviewed this document in light of http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-leiba-cotton-iana-5226bis-11 (on the same IESG telechat), and it shows an example on page 8, with the IANA-related RFCs for that registry.
Maybe this comment would be more appropriate for http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-leiba-cotton-iana-5226bis-11...



Editorial:
- You might want to add somewhere in the introduction that NATO =  North Atlantic Treaty Organization
and not the National Association of Tobacco Outlets (http://www.acronymfinder.com/NATO.html) :-)
- "with national entities, commercial partners and NGOs."
    NGO?

[Ballot comment]
A couple of minor edits are pending in response to Dan's Gen-ART review, to better identify NATO and to note the registration of the namespace in the abstract and intro.

1. Summary

Barry Leiba is the document shepherd and the responsible AD.

This is an informational document that registers the URN NID "nato".  It has to be an
IETF-stream document to comply with the NID registration requirements.

2. Review and Consensus

This has had the requisite discussion on the urn-nid list, and changes were made
as suggested.  There is no controversy.

3. Intellectual Property

The author is in full conformance with BCPs 78 and 79.

4. Other Points

None.

1. Summary

Barry Leiba is the document shepherd and the responsible AD.

This is an informational document that registers the URN NID "nato".  It has to be an
IETF-stream document to comply with the NID registration requirements.

2. Review and Consensus

This has had the requisite discussion on the uri-review list, and changes were made
as suggested.  There is no controversy.

3. Intellectual Property

The author is in full conformance with BCPs 78 and 79.

4. Other Points

None.

IESG/Authors/WG Chairs:

IANA has reviewed draft-murdock-nato-nid-02.  Please report any inaccuracies and respond to any questions as soon as possible.

IANA's reviewer has the following comments:

IANA understands that, upon approval of this document, there is a single action which IANA must complete.

In the Formal URN Namespaces registry under the Uniform Resource Names (URN) Namespaces heading at

https://www.iana.org/assignments/urn-namespaces/

a single, new Formal URN Namespace is to be registered as follows:

URN Namespace: nato
Reference: [ RFC-to-be ]

Note:  The actions requested in this document will not be completed until the document has been approved for publication as an RFC. This message is only to confirm what actions will be performed.

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The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter to consider
the following document:
- 'URN Namespace for NATO'
  <draft-murdock-nato-nid-02.txt> as Informational RFC

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
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Abstract


  This document describes a Uniform Resource Name (URN) namespace for
  assignment by NATO.  The current primary use is for uniquely
  identifying Extensible Markup Language (XML) artifacts that provide
  information about NATO message text formats and service
  specifications as described in various NATO standards [4],
  instructions and publications.




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1. Summary

Barry Leiba is the document shepherd and the responsible AD.

This is an informational document that registers the URN NID "nato".  It has to be an IETF-stream document to comply with the NID registration requirements.

2. Review and Consensus

...

3. Intellectual Property

The author is in full conformance with BCPs 78 and 79.

4. Other Points

None.