Last Call Review of draft-bormann-hybi-ws-wk-00
review-bormann-hybi-ws-wk-00-genart-lc-dupont-2017-07-03-00

Request Review of draft-bormann-hybi-ws-wk
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 00)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-07-19
Requested 2017-06-21
Authors Carsten Bormann
I-D last updated 2017-07-03
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -00 by Rich Salz
Genart Last Call review of -00 by Francis Dupont
Opsdir Last Call review of -00 by Dan Romascanu
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-bormann-hybi-ws-wk by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 00
Result Ready
Completed 2017-07-03
review-bormann-hybi-ws-wk-00-genart-lc-dupont-2017-07-03-00
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Document: draft-bormann-hybi-ws-wk-00.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170626
IETF LC End Date: 20170719
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
 - ToC page 2: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
  (note you can argue you use British (vs American) English,
   I tried ispell with both dictionaries and none gave other
   spelling errors other than necessicated below)

 - 1 page 2: necessicated -> needed or required (or necessitated)

 - Acknowledg(e)ments page 3: as the section is empty perhaps the simplest
  is to remove it (or to ask the RFC Editor to remove it)?

Regards

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr