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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-07-27
Requested 2015-07-02
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Reviewer Peter Yee
Review review-bradner-iaoc-terms-01-genart-lc-yee-2015-07-29
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Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 04)
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Draft last updated 2015-07-29
Review completed: 2015-07-29

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Document: draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-01
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Jul-28-2015
IETF LC End Date: Jul-27-2015
IESG Telechat date: TBD


Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a BCP but has an
open issue, described in the review. [Ready with issues]

The draft updates BCP 101 to fix some issues around the beginning and end
of IAOC terms and how they relate to the first meeting of each IAOC cycle.


Major issues: None

Minor issues: 

The draft causes the IAOC chair’s term to end with the commencement of the
IAOC meeting occurring at the first IETF meeting of the year.  The new
chair is selected during the meeting.  That being the case, who chairs the
meeting and declares the results of the election?

Nits:

Page 2, last paragraph, last sentence: change the second occurrence of
“IETF” to “IAOC”.  I believe that is what was meant.