Last Call Review of draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-01
review-bradner-iaoc-terms-01-genart-lc-yee-2015-07-29-00
Request | Review of | draft-bradner-iaoc-terms |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-07-27 | |
Requested | 2015-07-02 | |
Authors | Scott O. Bradner | |
I-D last updated | 2015-07-29 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -01
by Peter E. Yee
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Peter E. Yee Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Linda Dunbar (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Peter E. Yee |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-bradner-iaoc-terms by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 04) | |
Result | Ready w/issues | |
Completed | 2015-07-29 |
review-bradner-iaoc-terms-01-genart-lc-yee-2015-07-29-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-01 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Jul-28-2015 IETF LC End Date: Jul-27-2015 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a BCP but has an open issue, described in the review. [Ready with issues] The draft updates BCP 101 to fix some issues around the beginning and end of IAOC terms and how they relate to the first meeting of each IAOC cycle. Major issues: None Minor issues: The draft causes the IAOC chair’s term to end with the commencement of the IAOC meeting occurring at the first IETF meeting of the year. The new chair is selected during the meeting. That being the case, who chairs the meeting and declares the results of the election? Nits: Page 2, last paragraph, last sentence: change the second occurrence of “IETF” to “IAOC”. I believe that is what was meant.