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Request Review of draft-bradner-iaoc-terms
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-09-01
Requested 2015-08-27
Authors Scott O. Bradner
I-D last updated 2015-09-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Peter E. Yee
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Peter E. Yee
State Completed
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Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2015-09-28
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Document: draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-04
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Sep-01-2015
IETF LC End Date: Jul-27-2015
IESG Telechat date: Sep-03-2015

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a BCP, but has a
nit that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits]

The draft updates BCP 101 to fix some issues around the beginning and end
of IAOC terms.

This version simplifies the fix from the previous version I reviewed.  I’m
not entirely certain it covers the vacancy filling case for IAOC members
that appeared in version -01, but given the vigorous arguments that have
already taken place, I’m going to let that slide.


Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits:

Section 2, item 3: change the first comma to a semicolon.  And I sure hope
nobody requests a precise definition of “close”.