Last Call Review of draft-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-02
review-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-02-genart-lc-gurbani-2016-02-26-00
| Request | Review of | draft-campbell-art-rfc5727-update |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2016-01-05 | |
| Requested | 2015-12-10 | |
| Authors | Ben Campbell, Alissa Cooper, Barry Leiba | |
| Draft last updated | 2016-02-26 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Vijay Gurbani
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Genart Telechat review of -03 by Vijay Gurbani Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Jon Mitchell (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Vijay Gurbani |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-02-genart-lc-gurbani-2016-02-26 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 02 (document currently at 03) | |
| Review result | Ready with Issues | |
| Review completed: | 2016-02-26 |
Review
review-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-02-genart-lc-gurbani-2016-02-26
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-02 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Feb-26-2016 IETF LC End Date: Not known IESG Telechat date: Not known This document is ready as a BCP, however, it does have 1 Minor issue that I detail below. Major: 0 Minor: 1 Nits: 0 Minor: - S1, "Other RAI working groups develop extensions to SIP that do not change the core protocol, new applications of SIP, and other technologies for interactive communication among humans." Are we intentionally limiting interactive communications only to "humans"? I would suspect that this would be limiting, no? A bunch of SIP SUBS/NOTs happen between automaton, or machines. Surely we don't want to exclude these in the future. My suggestion would be to simply take out the phrase "among humans". Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Nokia Networks 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani at nokia.com Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ | Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq