Last Call Review of draft-carpenter-eligibility-expand-08
|Requested revision||No specific revision (document currently at 10)|
|Type||Last Call Review|
|Team||Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)|
|Requested by||Alvaro Retana|
|Authors||Brian E. Carpenter , Stephen Farrell|
|I-D last updated||2020-12-28|
Rtgdir Last Call review of -08
by Ines Robles
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Given that this non-technical topic should be important to everyone, as it is related to people's eligibility for leadership positions, please review this document from the participant's point of view and take into account the recent participation format.
|Reviewed revision||08 (document currently at 10)|
Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-carpenter-eligibility-expand-08.txt Reviewer: Ines Robles Review Date: 28th December 2020 IETF LC End Date: --- Intended Status: Experimental Summary: This document defines a process experiment under RFC 3933 that temporarily updates the criteria for qualifying volunteers to participate in the IETF Nominating Committee. The document is clear , I believe the document is ready. I just have some minor comments/nits below Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Nits: 1-Abstract: apply to one, or at most two, Nominating Committee cycles -> should be added consecutive cycles? 2-Section 1: It would be nice to expand the first time NomCom --> NomCom (Nominating Committee) 3-Section 2: the IESG must consult the 2021-2022 Nominating Committee chair and the 2020-2021 Nominating Committee chair and publish a report --> the IESG must consult the 2021-2022 Nominating Committee chair and publish a report 4-Section 4: Has been a Working Group Chair or Secretary within .... -> ... IETF/IRTF Working Group Chair or Secretary? nomcom -> NomCom Thank you very much for this document, Ines.