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Last Call Review of draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-05
review-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-05-i18ndir-lc-nemoto-2022-03-04-00

Request Review of draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Internationalization Directorate (i18ndir)
Deadline 2022-03-07
Requested 2022-02-09
Requested by Lars Eggert
Authors Brian E. Carpenter
I-D last updated 2022-06-30 (Latest revision 2022-04-01)
Completed reviews Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Intdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Bob Halley (diff)
Iotdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Samita Chakrabarti (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Joerg Ott (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
I18ndir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Takahiro Nemoto (diff)
Comments
We're trying to maximize the reviews for documents associated with the change in the RFC Editor model. Hence the request to review these pretty short documents, even though they may not need a review from a technical perspective.
Assignment Reviewer Takahiro Nemoto
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter by Internationalization Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/i18ndir/BBzJmsm5Y9J6TE2FyNeGUmP5Vu0
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-03-04
review-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-05-i18ndir-lc-nemoto-2022-03-04-00
I am the assigned Internationalization Directorate (i18ndir) reviewer for this
draft. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For
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Summary:
Looks fine except for one NIT.
This document says nothing about internationalization.
I did not find any internationalization issues with this document.

NITs:
In section 2,  "(b) RFC Series and IANA" -> "(d) RFC Series and IANA"