Telechat Review of draft-dukhovni-opportunistic-security-04
review-dukhovni-opportunistic-security-04-opsdir-telechat-bonica-2014-09-12-00

Request Review of draft-dukhovni-opportunistic-security
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-09-16
Requested 2014-09-05
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -04 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Ron Bonica
Review review-dukhovni-opportunistic-security-04-opsdir-telechat-bonica-2014-09-12
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ops-dir/current/msg00476.html
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2014-09-12
Review completed: 2014-09-12

Review
review-dukhovni-opportunistic-security-04-opsdir-telechat-bonica-2014-09-12

Ready for publication:

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments 
were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.  
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other 
last call comments.

Much improved from the last version I reviewed.

Ron Bonica