Last Call Review of draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01
review-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01-genart-lc-yee-2014-04-25-00
Request | Review of | draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations |
---|---|---|
Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 02) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2014-05-21 | |
Requested | 2014-04-24 | |
Authors | Donald E. Eastlake 3rd | |
I-D last updated | 2014-04-25 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -01
by Peter E. Yee
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Catherine Meadows (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Benson Schliesser (diff) |
|
Assignment | Reviewer | Peter E. Yee |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 02) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2014-04-25 |
review-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01-genart-lc-yee-2014-04-25-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: April-24-2014 IETF LC End Date: May-21-2014 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Best Current Practice, but has some nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] This document provides the IANA Considerations for two registries covering the IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011 CFM OpCode and TLV Type blocks assigned to the IETF. Nits: Most comments that follow are for alignment with the terminology and usage found in IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011. General: globally replace "Continuity" with "Connectivity". General: globally replace "Codepoints" with "Code Points". General: globally replace "Op-Code" with "OpCode". Page 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "IANA Consideration" to "IANA Considerations". Page 5, 1st paragraph: end the reference with a period. Page 5, 2nd paragraph: replace "Mansfield, S." with "and S. Mansfield" to match http://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-ref.txt . Hey, I'm running out of nits to pick here. :-) -Peter Yee