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Document: draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: April-24-2014
IETF LC End Date: May-21-2014
IESG Telechat date: TBD

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Best Current
Practice, but has some nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready
with nits.]

This document provides the IANA Considerations for two registries covering
the IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011 CFM OpCode and TLV Type blocks assigned to the
IETF.

Nits:

Most comments that follow are for alignment with the terminology and usage
found in IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011.

General: globally replace "Continuity" with "Connectivity".

General: globally replace "Codepoints" with "Code Points".

General: globally replace "Op-Code" with "OpCode".

Page 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "IANA Consideration" to "IANA
Considerations".

Page 5, 1st paragraph: end the reference with a period.

Page 5, 2nd paragraph: replace "Mansfield, S." with "and S. Mansfield" to
match 

http://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-ref.txt

.  Hey, I'm running out
of nits to pick here. :-)

		-Peter Yee