Last Call Review of draft-eggert-bcp45bis-06
review-eggert-bcp45bis-06-genart-lc-davies-2021-10-31-00
| Request | Review of | draft-eggert-bcp45bis |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2021-11-23 | |
| Requested | 2021-10-19 | |
| Authors | Lars Eggert , Susan R. Harris | |
| I-D last updated | 2021-10-31 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Elwyn B. Davies
(diff)
Artart Last Call review of -06 by Carsten Bormann (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Stefan Santesson (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Elwyn B. Davies |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-eggert-bcp45bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/eUcp-rMkBbJYxjpglPdHeYrrwFc | |
| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 08) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2021-10-31 |
review-eggert-bcp45bis-06-genart-lc-davies-2021-10-31-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-eggert-bcp45bis-06 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2021-10-31 IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-23 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready with nits. The body of the document appears fine, but the Abstract doesn't provide much insight into the content of the document. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Abstract:, para 1: Suggest adding a sentence or two to explain what the document actually does., e.g.: s/... mailing list./...mailing list; this document provides guidance on the intended scope of discussions appropriate for the mailing list as currently envisaged while indicating certain types of postings that would be inappropriate. In neither case are the lists considered exhaustive. The mailing list is intended to operate with self-moderation overseen by member(s) of the Sergeants-at-Arms (SAA) team. This document sets out the processes by which SAAs monitoring this mailing list are appointed and removed together with their powers as regards control of posting to the list../