Last Call Review of draft-farrell-decade-ni-
review-farrell-decade-ni-genart-lc-dupont-2012-07-09-00

Request Review of draft-farrell-decade-ni
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-07-02
Requested 2012-06-07
Authors Stephen Farrell, Dirk Kutscher, Christian Dannewitz, Börje Ohlman, Ari Keränen, Phillip Hallam-Baker
Draft last updated 2012-07-09
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Francis Dupont
Genart Telechat review of -?? by Francis Dupont
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-farrell-decade-ni-genart-lc-dupont-2012-07-09
Review completed: 2012-07-09

Review
review-farrell-decade-ni-genart-lc-dupont-2012-07-09

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Document: draft-farrell-decade-ni-07/08.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20120704
IETF LC End Date: 20120702
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: there were some issues raised in the mailing list but
solved (?) in the last version (I reviewed an intermediate 07-08 version,
last is 09 today).

Minor issues: (not technical) more than 5 authors

Nits/editorial comments:
 - Toc and 11 page 18: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
  (i.e., American English vs. GB one)

 - 1 page 4, 3 page 8, 9.4 page 15: e.g. -> e.g.,

 - 4 page 9, 7 page 11: i.e. -> i.e.,

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr