Last Call Review of draft-farrell-decade-ni-
review-farrell-decade-ni-genart-lc-dupont-2012-07-09-00
Request | Review of | draft-farrell-decade-ni |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2012-07-02 | |
Requested | 2012-06-07 | |
Authors | Stephen Farrell , Dirk Kutscher , Christian Dannewitz , Börje Ohlman , Ari Keränen , Phillip Hallam-Baker | |
I-D last updated | 2012-07-09 | |
Completed reviews |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-farrell-decade-ni by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Completed | 2012-07-09 |
review-farrell-decade-ni-genart-lc-dupont-2012-07-09-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-farrell-decade-ni-07/08.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20120704 IETF LC End Date: 20120702 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: there were some issues raised in the mailing list but solved (?) in the last version (I reviewed an intermediate 07-08 version, last is 09 today). Minor issues: (not technical) more than 5 authors Nits/editorial comments: - Toc and 11 page 18: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments (i.e., American English vs. GB one) - 1 page 4, 3 page 8, 9.4 page 15: e.g. -> e.g., - 4 page 9, 7 page 11: i.e. -> i.e., Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr