Last Call Review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-03

Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Title Last Call Review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-03
Request Last Call - requested 2017-01-17
Reviewer Francis Dupont
Review result Ready with Issues
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Last updated 2017-02-15


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Document: draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-??
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2017-02-15
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-14
IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-16

Summary: Ready with Issues

Major issues: None

Minor issues: As I explained in my review of the 02 version this document introduction should warn that the RFC 7940 must be read before...

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