Last Call Review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-03
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Request Review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-02-14
Requested 2017-01-17
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Chris Lonvick (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Rick Casarez (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Chris Lonvick (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Francis Dupont
Review review-freytag-lager-variant-rules-03-genart-lc-dupont-2017-02-15
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/tQD4GDWgN-xOgIuw9PL_Cu7GnoE
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready with Issues
Draft last updated 2017-02-15
Review closed: 2017-02-15

Review
review-freytag-lager-variant-rules-03-genart-lc-dupont-2017-02-15

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Document: draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-??
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2017-02-15
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-14
IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-16

Summary: Ready with Issues

Major issues: None

Minor issues: As I explained in my review of the 02 version this document introduction should warn that the RFC 7940 must be read before...

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