Last Call Review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-05
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Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170516
IETF LC End Date: 20170515
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready with Nits
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
- 1 page 2: as the document cannot be understood without reading the
RFC 7940 the reference to RFC 79040 must be moved as early as
possible (I suggest just after the LGRs introduction and the warning
"However, the reader is expected to have some familiarity..." emphased
and moved to earlier in the section.
(I already raised thos concern at my first review, it wasn't fixed
but for this second review I had the 82 pages of RFC 7940 with me :-)
PS: I don't think it will work for the languages I used but it is
an information document based on some experiments so what matters
is it can help even it is not for general cases...