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Last Call Review of draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08
review-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08-artart-lc-reschke-2024-05-24-00

Request Review of draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2024-06-14
Requested 2024-05-17
Authors Joel M. Halpern , Jay Daley
I-D last updated 2024-05-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Susan Hares
Artart Last Call review of -08 by Julian Reschke
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Vincent Roca
Dnsdir Last Call review of -08 by Geoff Huston
Assignment Reviewer Julian Reschke
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/kEyzunNsmYeJcfW_Arx9cbaPBfE
Reviewed revision 08
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-05-24
review-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08-artart-lc-reschke-2024-05-24-00
This is well-written and easy to review.

Nits:

- In
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08.html#section-2.2,
the text could use <blockquote>. - In
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08.html#section-4-1,
the reference to the previous section could be a link - In
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08.html#section-8,
the references might be improved to include author/org information (currently
this is only implied by the choice of reference anchor names)