Last Call Review of draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08
review-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08-artart-lc-reschke-2024-05-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | ART Area Review Team (artart) | |
| Deadline | 2024-06-14 | |
| Requested | 2024-05-17 | |
| Authors | Joel M. Halpern , Jay Daley | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-10-30 (Latest revision 2024-06-20) | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart IETF Last Call review of -08
by Susan Hares
(diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Julian Reschke (diff) Secdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Vincent Roca (diff) Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Geoff Huston (diff) Dnsdir Telechat review of -09 by Geoff Huston |
|
| Assignment | Reviewer | Julian Reschke |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust by ART Area Review Team Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/kEyzunNsmYeJcfW_Arx9cbaPBfE | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 09) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2024-05-24 |
review-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08-artart-lc-reschke-2024-05-24-00
This is well-written and easy to review. Nits: - In https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08.html#section-2.2, the text could use <blockquote>. - In https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08.html#section-4-1, the reference to the previous section could be a link - In https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08.html#section-8, the references might be improved to include author/org information (currently this is only implied by the choice of reference anchor names)