Last Call Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-05
review-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-05-opsdir-lc-bonica-2017-02-01-00

Request Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-02-21
Requested 2017-01-24
Authors Ted Hardie
I-D last updated 2017-02-01
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ron Bonica
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-02-01
review-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-05-opsdir-lc-bonica-2017-02-01-00
Folks,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready for publication

This draft identifies a design strategy in which middle boxes expose data that
the end user meant to hide. As would be expected, the draft discourages the
above-mentioned strategy.

The draft is important. I would vote "YES".

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

- A few grammatical issues. Please take another quick read through the document.

Section 1: s/document/documented

Nits:

- Unused reference. Please run nit-check