Last Call Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-05
review-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-05-tsvart-lc-tuexen-2017-02-16-00

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effort to review key IETF documents.
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This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be
fixed before publication.

Running https://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/idnits.pyht reports
* The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC7624]), which it shouldn't.
* Unused Reference: 'RFC4301'

The discussion of RFC 7871 in section 4 could be improved to allow readers
not knowing the EDNS0 option to get the point. Either provide an abstract
description or refer to RFC 6891.