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Telechat Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-07

Request Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-03-14
Requested 2017-02-14
Authors Ted Hardie
I-D last updated 2017-03-14
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2017-03-14
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Document: draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-??
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-03-14
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-21
IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16

Summary: Ready with slightly more minor nits than before.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

1.  Introduction
   exploited in the attacks document in [RFC7258] and the threats


There also tensions with latency of operation.

Missing "are", although I think it should probably be "There is tension"


to restore metadat 

Should be: to restore metadata