Telechat Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-07
review-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-03-14-00
| Request | Review of | draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-03-14 | |
| Requested | 2017-02-14 | |
| Authors | Ted Hardie | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-03-14 | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir Last Call review of -05
by Ron Bonica
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Yoav Nir (diff) Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Michael Tüxen (diff) Genart Telechat review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff) Genart Telechat review of -07 by Stewart Bryant (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Stewart Bryant |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 08) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2017-03-14 |
review-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-03-14-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-?? Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2017-03-14 IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-21 IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16 Summary: Ready with slightly more minor nits than before. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 1. Introduction .... exploited in the attacks document in [RFC7258] and the threats s/document/documented/ ===== There also tensions with latency of operation. Missing "are", although I think it should probably be "There is tension" ===== to restore metadat Should be: to restore metadata =====