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Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-02-08
Requested 2012-01-19
Authors Dan Harkins
I-D last updated 2012-02-02
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Document:

draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-06

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2012–1–24

IETF LC End Date: 2012–2–14

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Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an

Experimental

RFC.



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1.



Section 2 bullet 3 “Securty”?

2.



In section 4.1 “The inverse function is defined such that the sum of an element
and  its inverse is "0":” . This looks like a zero to me and I assume you meant
the letter “o”